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Anonymous said:<< post removed >>

Todsky,
Dunno if you have read anything of mine. But does this means I can post my old stuff?

OxyMoronicMe said:

Todsky,
Dunno if you have read anything of mine. But does this means I can post my old stuff?

LOL, I took it to mean not to use something that's already posted here.

Breaths Heard To Stutter

In the growls and pleas[e] heard from the breaths of two souls...
"I need my weight pressing indelibly against flesh..."
"Let me envelop you within the folds of warm silk"
Perfectly matched as destiny trembles by The Fates

"I need my weight pressing indelibly against flesh..."
Heard from a soul aching for the warmth of silk wet
Perfectly matched as destiny trembles by The Fates
Seeping threads fall as darkness pulses to connect

Heard from a soul aching for the warmth of silk wet
"Achingly beautiful..." as five fingers grip under face
Seeping threads fall as darkness pulses to connect
"Stitch knots of love deep within my hollow space..."

"Achingly beautiful..." as five fingers grip under face
"Let me envelop you within the folds of warm silk"
"Stitch knots of love deep within my hollow space..."
In the growls and pleas[e] heard from the breaths of two souls...



Tod, I hope this is okay as one entry, new post just about 15 minutes ago...if not, I will delete and try again....I will work on the porn entry as well....Let me know!

- Taryn xoxo

Anonymous said:<< post removed >>

As the other person Tod has asked to help judge, I have to second everything Trix said. Misspellings and other mistakes will effect my opinion of a piece. It's just tough for me to really enjoy erotica/porn when all I really want to do is make spelling and grammar corrections as I'm reading.

ETA: Just to clarify: mistakes aren't going to disqualify anyone from winning, and no one is going to criticize you for them. I just can't deny that it would be a factor, and it could be something that would break a tie for me.

That said, I'm looking forward to reading the entries, and I hope you all make choosing the winner really difficult on us.

There'll be peace when you are done

OxyMoronicMe said:

Todsky,
Dunno if you have read anything of mine. But does this means I can post my old stuff?
same here

Fine Tod...but i wasnt butt hurt about that...and you know it. I also don't write porno. I think telling a second english language person to buddy up is shitty..it did not need to go on and on..here are my entries...


Unwind
And i gasp and body shakes
As his volcanic rise finds his spending rhythm between my thighs

The deep he finds
And my tremble there
Through hard stroke that verges on too much...
As pain swells to break through and I Ahhh Fuck Me!! Find pleasure
And he releases my scream....

My fingers dig into his fleshy mounds
To pull him allll up inside..
To be one body in perfect pelvic return..
Nails sink further with my abandon until
Red rivulets of animal thanks lover run over my fingertips

Knees hit my ears
And tears hit my eyes
As he cries Glory!
During furious thrust...
Tip blooms to beauty spill and hits cervix hungry for his seed..

We have satisfied each others need
And now lay hot
Twisted in sweaty sheets..
Safe in arms that hold each other ..

For a while. Only a while....


conversation with my true love through...the song he found me in.
A conversation with my true love through...the song he found me in.    
     
Lyrics to: i would drink a case of you    
     
"Just before our love got "found" you said    
I am as constant as a northern star" and I said"    
     
Darlin constant scares the livin shit out mih...i run and i run furious fast 'n far..    
Though i kin see peculiars shine uvv yur star...    
Constant? Teehee  Know nuthin uuuv it.      
Thank i'd adore it sugar...butt..teehee    
Gin's constant, a darkness..so blue n black monster dark..teehee    
     
I took the dirt road less traveled...    
Ha! Led mih to noo paradise park..    
Led to a place in mih heart so dank..    
Sumthin of a lake flood hainted town like a claustrophobic drown.. i'd sank..    
An i did sooo able n quick..    
     
Cain't stain still.....no I..i am afeared of haint's..    
I babydoll,    
.. i ain neva met no saints....    
In my manic mind them ghost fucks reeeaal harrrd..    
Stillness, screw that hell bitch.    
Don' she becum a graveyard?    
     
Purty purty puuleeeez..    
Ohn mih kneeez...    
     
Show me a piece a still as sumthin "pretty"    
I'd letcha feel round ohn mih titties....teehee.    
     
......he smiles then and Laughs....    
..But not at me.....oh that would be nirvana my bawdy lady!    
And i will most certainly try....    
     
Lays one hand on my white thigh..    
Fingertips slow going up towards my cherry pie...    
     
Mih nani naps went all mysty from thrill of said title n touch...    
Called mih lady he did!      
I let outta moan n a newfound sigh..
Awwe to braaathe..  
Oh my holy wine fuck!!      
Was jess bout tooo much..n jess plent enuff..
     
My new lover says ta mih so tenderly,      
a gentle comb through mih chesnut pony hair.    
     
Takes mih hand gratefully and graciously..kisses there...    
Gasp...    
     
"Constantly in the darkness    
Where's that at?"    
     
Nowhere as scary as what you let into the place under your straw hat..    
Says he...    
     
"My darling, taking me by hand.    
I undersand."    
     
My lady i have been there.      
Known fear.    
Look in my eyes lover, you can trust this man. I promise you will never suffer me through tears.    
     
Then I'll be damned!      
This gintilminds fangers went right smack up tween n around mih panties n up my love hole two he crammed!    
     
Says baby i would like to continue a while?      
Yes, someone might notice, but your soul and your jade eyes are all i see.    
You want to continue baby, just tell me.      
     
"If you want me I'll be in the bar"    
     
I scribbled a note..puiuleeeez finish yur fanger fuck..i's feelin sum  stll then..    
Sware i wuuzz.      
     
"On the back of a cartoon coaster"    
     
Mih wet n you, felt nuttin but light..    
...is it night?      
I saw stars....    
Asked the waitress to give it to mih gintilmind.    
     
An frum sumwhare sooo deeeep inside...    
I cried.    
     
Soon mih lover was there by my side.      
My lady Jennifer, theres a booth back there that will be nice.      
Princess listen close, for no , you shake your head once, yes twice..    
No speaking just take my hand.    
Do you understand?      
     
Mih head bobbed down two times..    
He played this song ohn the juke box..    
Gals voice hit mih soul with a feelin    
Like wind chimes....    
     
"Oh you are in my blood like holy wine    
You taste so bitter    
But you taste so sweet oh    
I could drink a case of you, I could drink a case of you darling    
Still be on my feet    
i Still be on my feet"      
     
He said okay darling sshhh! Trust me....I have picked you like a grape ripe with juice from the vine..    
My God so pure and fine..    
Pull up your skirt as you scoot in..    
Ah! What a good girl you have been    
..now let me take you by hips and pull you on this big cock of mine...    
Sweetness now, i want no hint of a whine!    
     
"Oh I am a lonely painter    
I live in a box of paints    
I'm frightened by the devil    
And I'm drawn to those ones that ain't afraid"    
     
He grabbed mih round the waist good. N tight. ain as i slid down him i felt filled differnt n heard the gal sang..    
Afeared of the Devil ain not the ones that ain't....    
     
"I remember that time that you told me, you said    
Love is touching souls"      
     
This man ain      
I am...    
Thas whut wuz happenin..    
     
Feel it Jennifer, he thrusted slowly, but steadily up into me..    
Neva did his strong ever luvin arm loose its hug offa me..    
     
I love you and need you.      
I can tell you feel it too!    
if you feel it too dont be scared, just nod yes please my sweet miss.    
My head bounced up and down twice      
In rhythm with his penis.    
     
I entered into realms of light and climactic rapture..    
No fear no dark,      
Only intense orgasm  and close in my new lovers capture..    
     
Safe with him inside he filled me in moan, in the middle of a public place. .    
I knew then with him freedom, no cemetary lake, no scary space.. Ah still. Selah.
     
"Surely you touched mine 'cause    
Part of you pours out of me    
In these… "    
   
   
(An erotic tale through Joni Mitchell's I could drink a case of you. Please hear it sung sweet divine and high as you read.)

Erotica:

Diane passionately kissed Dale as he thrust his member inside her. Her whimpers letting him know how good it felt to her; it gave him determination to please his girl.

Porn:

The young, eager slut couldn't resist the big black cock of O.G Mudbone. As he penetrate her pussy she moaned in pain and pleasure.

"After a good fuck, comes a good nut."

O.G quickly pulls out at climax and busts in the young sluts eye, nose and hair.

"Hmm.. You rest a good case.. ok slut.. The pizzas free, and forget the tip considering it was on the house this time."

dear sadist ~

{i} involutionary whipping:

conscious of continuity,
the primordial wresting reason
with every rebirth,
another first breath gasped
through leather tongued flame
though it feels like
eons between incarnations
with my essential self
[bared]
to your omnipotence
//
{ii} i need new photos for my fetlife profile:

wantneedmustfuckinghave
redemption found only
in backhand whiplash,
so i crawl like a dog
debase myself
шлюхабляшлюха
my worthless cunt
for a moment
under your cane
under your fist ~
... desperatelyshamelesslywet
a bottomless hole of give me
give me give me
everything
Трахни меня-Трахни меня
Трахни меня
until you drown
what little self-respect i have
in a submissive puddle
of piss & cum ...
.
.
.
spit on me before you leave
пожалуйста{?}
spit on me so i remember
your touch on my cheek
//

This will be my subtle erotica entry.



No Wonderland For Old Farts

Blowing you
kiss-kiss-kisses
Can ya handle these coney bits?
Wanna fondle my cotton tail parts?
Think hard about it
Humpty Dumpty & Crew, Inc.,
I'm warning yawl
this is
no Wonderland for old farts
Pick up the pace 'n' give me your all
your absolute best
thump-thump-thumpin'
Feel your heart racin' in your chest?
Hang on for the next speed bump
in the road
Runner
always on the run
after what I'm owed
A rascally rabbit gone wild game
in an ode to old timers
Good luck in trying to tame
this
kiss-kiss-kisses
hip hop up on top of me
for a 'lil bumpty-bump
bump-bump
bump-bumpetty
We just might jump high enough
for a taste of heaven
I've got hump-hump-humpin'
on the brain
Twenty-four/Seven
No Wonderland for old farts
this is
Catch your breath or your death
in between stops and starts
Pulse drops
Get the defibrillator!
Can't keep up?
Well, then see you later
Jack of Hearts
Blowing
Kiss-kiss-kisses
Grandpa
Been nice knowing ya





FYI I like skittles.

My not so subtle.




Concerto Of Fellatio

Your cock in my mouth
tastes funny as usual
with a hint of irony

as if a bumble bee
drowned in comb of honey

quite the sticky situation
if I may say so myself
which just I did

or rather sang
lip synced in the key of "O"

Done
the encore performance of you
playing me as your cello

feeling spunk run down my chin
chalk up another win for misogyny
in our latest battle of the bands

this Concerto Of Fellatio

Who would have thunk I would be
in the exact position as when we first met
playing the same instrument
that earned me this gig

when he first auditioned the prospect of us
a duet introduced on stage as we

My naked aspirations of being a star were so big

but judging by the audience's reaction
in the bedroom mirror
egg in the face
rotten tomatoes thrown
salad dressing mess

I guess the joke is still on me