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Completing lines or verses (Sena)

RSena
Sena
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Poetry Contest

Forming an unknown poem.
Hellos again my DUP poets. here is a competition, of Yes or NO.

1) Any one. even.
2) 1 line or phrase has to make sense, with the anterior, verses or line.
3)if you get a YES, is a pointo on your favor, NOT, is cero point. if you write a verse,
and just one line makes sense, still, a Yes 1 point. so, i think line by line, would be better, so it give you an idea, on whats the next one. or if the next one will be related  wiht my POEM meaning.
3) only i know the full meaning of the poem. i will put one verse, and You as a poet, has to fall into it, and using your emagination, would write base on it.
4)the YES is a point as much you get, more oportunity to win.
5) i will put Yes, as reply to your line, or verse.
6)the competitors should create another competition, with the same idea, or different where we all get to put one line or a verse as well, and be able to get point in another poems, giving Us i mean ALL, the oportunity to get a Medal, or Throphy. in many other competitions, i think is fair, enough.
7)the name of my competion as you see  it ends, with my NAME. the other competitions should be like that, and with the hoster name. at the end. hope you all like the idea.

SENA[i]
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RSena
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FIRST VERSE. AND LINES.........

If I could make the planet
go in the other direction,
for a couple of year behind,
start again, and give my heart,
a second change.

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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This reverse spin
And backtrack before miscalculation
Would give us a go again
Pointing us towards
A new loving destination


(a lil confused? Scratching head..)

poet Anonymous

Messaging futures past
For momentary gains
New directions recast
But evolution refrains

RSena
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A YES.. FOR IrrationalRhymer
You got one 1 point

Bergsteen
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"If I could make the planet
go in the other direction,
for a couple of year behind,
start again, and give my heart,
a second change."

...I shall do it not,for  it would be the reversal of me,
My ocean of love and emotion would shrink to the little rivers and lakes they once were.
But instead I will realize that the path of the globe and the
expansion of the cosmos as a whole favour my growth.
I will realize that that very movement gave birth to my new realization that I want not the alteration of said and done journeys ,and that all percieved effect is a result of my perceived cause for creator I am.

poet Anonymous

Realities script acquiesced
Occupant of the journey
Absent what’s progressed
Hath forgotten if worthy

Acceptance of gains lost
Torrid the façade
Rhetorically embossed
Whereas the quest was flawed

RSena
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My ocean of love and emotion would shrink to the little rivers and lakes they once were.

THIS LINE GAVE YOU A POINT...1 POINT.

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Bergsteen
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My ocean of love and emotion would shrink to the little rivers and lakes they once were.

this line gave you a point . .1 YES.

RSena
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FROM IrrationalRhymer

Acceptance of gains lost
Torrid the façade

THIS IS A POINT 1 YES.

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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and universal sway would bring me
closer to the path your life will take
in hopes that time will redress and make
the moment we meet a certainty

RSena
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IrrationalRhymer 2 YES
Bergsteen 1 YES

SO FAR, THIS IS THE TABLE OF YES.

Jade-Pandora
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Can't tell who's following who and where we are unless you as host can let participants know soon after we post.  Please kindly assist us, Sena, and thank you.

RSena
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Please rollos the last one getting a point. No always the full verse is correct but even a line. And those lines can guide you. And create your own emagination try to think from my verse what would I want to say it wrote. What's the poem's goal.
Sorry I might make it difficult sometimes.

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As acceptance of the enable taking shape as rivers flowing to your heart, " the future twisting our faith,"

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