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Beautiful_Enigma
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Bipolar Roller Coaster

Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
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Nonsense
I am my own worst enemy
I have declared war on my own sanity...
 
When did I decide I am worthless?
And,
When did I make it law?

poet Anonymous

Euphoric complexities

Labels…What labels?

Who do you think you are?

Your thought enables
My poet memoir!

My minds coherent,
I’m the controller
Thoughts are transparent…

… I’m not bi polar!

Laughing at my thoughts
I’m happy with hate
Relaxing with knots
The chaos sedate

Neither here nor far
I’m present and free

Emotions disbar?

This conscious trainee…

Scared with desires
I’m eager for fear
Static inspires…

Is balance unclear?

The still commotion
Thunderous silence

Serene Emotion
Calming in violence

Stable and frantic
Actively sluggish
Clearness I panic…

Query is rubbish!!!

Although it makes sense
Perfectly obscure
I’m still on the fence
My thoughts are unsure

Questioning I’m wrong
Whom’s the illusion?

Emotions are strong
Balanced delusion

So let’s stay on track…
Confidently weak
Opposites attract
The balance I seek

poet Anonymous

BALANCED

Humpf
Little white passages governing normality
Consider this the prison or I?
Riddle me this balance,
Congruence is the key

Stagnation
Confined within a spectrum
The conformists reside
For whereas the carrot
To this comply

Baneful
The mold this package disputes
Shrouding of the soul
For clamors denied
My essence is lost

Duality
To whereas creation unfolds
Desolation the voice lost
For noisy is the world
Of silence

Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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IrrationalRhymer said:BALANCED

Humpf
Little white passages governing normality
Consider this the prison or I?
Riddle me this balance,
Congruence is the key

Stagnation
Confined within a spectrum
The conformists reside
For whereas the carrot
To this comply

Baneful
The mold this package disputes
Shrouding of the soul
For clamors denied
My essence is lost

Duality
To whereas creation unfolds
Desolation the voice lost
For noisy is the world
Of silence


Very Nice, U deleted my other comments when u changed the tiles lol  no harm no foul ")

Good Luck IrrationalRhymer]  ")

Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Mental hiccups on and off again ....

No, I don't need any pills and besides I don't have a stock broker on wall street.
So, I ain't buying into the hype.

Mitt Romney & The Kotch Brothers
Proctor&Gabmble Aka Craft* & Big Pharmaceutical nonsense,  
O'Dweebs, with it's wack ass non-buzzing weed LOL!
and O'Doul's, with it's non-alcoholic beer,
it's queer!
FUCK YOU! Obamacare!

Hahaha, I'm in a twist, a manic bipolar conversation about the condition of our nation
and you should be too!
Taxes & drugs are as prosecution is for being born gay....

RSena
Sena
Thought Provoker
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Joined 13th May 2011
Forum Posts: 309

Pelea Injusta
Unfair Fight

In my fishing boat,
I was reading Pablo Nerudas verse,
the poem called the me bird,
while holding the fishing rod
I was deep into the pages.

The silent, clearing all doubt of interruption,
tha fishing rod that was taken yesterday,
on a deep fight with a white fish,
distracted My eyes from the words, rhymes.

Unfair life, who am I to be mad at that fight,
It caused Me insomnia all night, I knew I would
see the fishing rod again, lost in the middle of the sea,
I grabed the rod, and pulled, still had the fish hook,
and fish, and said to Me I told You last night that you would win
this fight. I have been many days without eating,
set Me free or let me die. and so He did,
set Me free.

Sena
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lanooz
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 21st July 2012
Forum Posts: 240

Bipolar Roller Coaster

I feel so joyful walking down this thick road, look at the way the
stars align and seem to only come back to Earth to stare at me in
the face without moving one inch. I swing arms in the air hoping
that whomever is up there can see me dance at night.

How beautiful is the low lit day running one hundred miles per
hour alongside the uncontrollable laughing of rhythm and
waves?  Suddenly I feel a sadness overtake my body as I
realize the oceans and the sky will never formally meet.
The unfairness of life!

I sit here in a state of hopelessness hoping that nature can save
the day, for without intervention nothing can be completed in
order. The people of this world irritate me to no end, why not
save each other today?

Who are we to say that the moon's craters are not us?
The energetic self from twenty minutes ago is no longer home,
now I feel defeated by the thought of not being able to save
humanity. So much happiness and sadness. Future's deceit

Naajir
Dangerous Mind
United States 16awards
Joined 20th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 46

lanooz said:Bipolar Roller Coaster

I feel so joyful walking down this thick road, look at the way the
stars align and seem to only come back to Earth to stare at me in
the face without moving one inch. I swing arms in the air hoping
that whomever is up there can see me dance at night.

How beautiful is the low lit day running one hundred miles per
hour alongside the uncontrollable laughing of rhythm and
waves?  Suddenly I feel a sadness overtake my body as I
realize the oceans and the sky will never formally meet.
The unfairness of life!

I sit here in a state of hopelessness hoping that nature can save
the day, for without intervention nothing can be completed in
order. The people of this world irritate me to no end, why not
save each other today?

Who are we to say that the moon's craters are not us?
The energetic self from twenty minutes ago is no longer home,
now I feel defeated by the thought of not being able to save
humanity. So much happiness and sadness. Future's deceit


that last stanza sealed the deal
bi-polar on a cosmic level...
this is deep thoughtful and thought provoking


Naajir
Dangerous Mind
United States 16awards
Joined 20th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 46

RSena said:Pelea Injusta
Unfair Fight

In my fishing boat,
I was reading Pablo Nerudas verse,
the poem called the me bird,
while holding the fishing rod
I was deep into the pages.

The silent, clearing all doubt of interruption,
tha fishing rod that was taken yesterday,
on a deep fight with a white fish,
distracted My eyes from the words, rhymes.

Unfair life, who am I to be mad at that fight,a
It caused Me insomnia all night, I knew I would
see the fishing rod again, lost in the middle of the sea,
I grabed the rod, and pulled, still had the fish hook,
and fish, and said to Me I told You last night that you would win
this fight. I have been many days without eating,
set Me free or let me die. and so He did,
set Me free.

Sena
[/i]


many twists throughout
love the clever use of ME
sprinkled throughout this fine vibe

nicely done

RSena
Sena
Thought Provoker
United States 5awards
Joined 13th May 2011
Forum Posts: 309

Naajir said:

many twists throughout
love the clever use of ME
sprinkled throughout this fine vibe

nicely done


THANKS BRO, i think this is a nice competition... is been around many time, bypolar is becoming a tradiction competitions, all around, and nicely study.

SENA

AlexnEmoLand
RevolutionOfAlex
Fire of Insight
Japan 10awards
Joined 19th July 2011
Forum Posts: 216



       VISION
****sigh*****

she bends backwards for every moment in life she took
she climbed the highest mountain for every breath she lost.
closeing her eyes to hear the widow sings.
just like feathers that flutter away from her world
her reality..
lost in mortality.
she will not blossom..only will she fall..
gripping on to the edge of the clift shes stumbled apone.
gates open for her to freely come home..
she is alone..
staring into the eyes of faith... taking one more breath to live once more
believeing she will not be brought into the darkness.
for every tear she shed will show a glimps of light
from every punch she take she loose her sight.
having the vision of silance
to only watch not speak..
twerling her glass of hope she takes another swollow.
bending backwards for  a fresh start
keeping her thoughts home deep in the dark.

-Kumiko Yamamoto

AlexnEmoLand
RevolutionOfAlex
Fire of Insight
Japan 10awards
Joined 19th July 2011
Forum Posts: 216

disinigreating time..

sitting at the table...with not a word in her head.
annoyed by whats come to her..
she feels as if there is not much left to do or say..
her tears fall from the thoughts of her broken heart.
everything has torn her apart.
though the years she has not picked up a pin
and paper.
putting the pain into beautiful words.
waves of waters come from her shattered self
her image no longer her..
she..who might she be??
she holds herself as this toutering
gain has rising over her.
this blanket of madness..blanket of fears
black rose red the color of tears.
still beside this window alone
she will stay
without a pin or paper to to express what to say.
the song will continue mightnight to noon
and she wil be drowning in motionless dismay.
she will pray.. again today
still this feeling has not disapered..
only it began to take a tole.
she feel herself changing
rearanching
what once was her couplet rhym is know
her verse of disinigreating time..
sitting at the table...with not a word in her head.
letting mindless behavor swollow her dead

-Kumiko Yamamoto


(please excuse my bad spelling)

wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
United States 147awards
Joined 11th July 2012
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Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1779

Wow!! By far the longest comp I've ever run and incredible submissions by everyone....it was a tough call and many consults had with co-host / judge Naajir and guest judge Taryn...

Thanks to all who participated and a special thanks to all the winners!

Enigma - you exercised every emotion, love, hate, sunny, dark, highs and lows and yours stuck with me since the start.

Tina Louise - congrats on runner up - it was a close call between two excellent writes.

IrrationalRhymer - sharp and clever and had the ability to communicate to those who may not fully understand.  
See you all next time ! ")

TinaLouise
Twisted Dreamer
Australia 3awards
Joined 20th Dec 2015
Forum Posts: 89

What an honor, Thank you! The talent in this competition is first class.. Congrats to everyone 💜

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