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Your Dream Lover

aarti
Thought Provoker
India 2awards
Joined 29th Aug 2015
Forum Posts: 165

I lovvee your poem Jen! Too summarize your man, he just basically be in love with your rack. hahaha

Raa
Lost Thinker
United Kingdom 1awards
Joined 21st Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 12

** Here's one for my perfect man - my soulmate**

Love Poem

You've got this touch that penetrates my skin
Like electric shocks and shots of adrenaline
It's like your kiss generates this feeling
That makes my head spin,
Til the edge of reality starts fraying, and disappearing
Til all that exists is this moment we're in
I can't resist, I beg please don't desist,
I can't imagine ever not wanting this
I never want this to stop
So just be my Hiro and pause all the clocks
You're more potent than heroin, more addictive than rocks
Shit, I'm a dribbling mess when you take off your top!
And you're not impressed by frocks and make up masks
I love how you value the goodness of hearts
Cos where kindness ends, that's where ugliness starts
And you're kind; you're intelligent, with a fucking great arse
And I melt when you laugh
And at that look in your eye
The one that makes shivers dance all down my spine
Knowing it mirrors just what's on my mind
Perfectly described
No words are required
Just a look, just a kiss, just electric and fire
Our minds running wild, together, in sync
It's more than desire, this is pure instinct
It's a connection of souls
It's like you're making me whole
It's like I've known you in a thousand disguises before
And will a thousand times more

I could search the Earth from end to end
Then, unsatisfied, search again
Search the stars and search the Sun
Search, until my days are done
And still could never find someone
I would rather love
Than you

kriticool
Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 596




Dream Lovers


Each dream lover
We love the way they hover
But In DESCRIBING One, what does one need or
is it just about fucking the WANT out of ‘em?


~ Or out of one’s self? ~


I suppose ~ different strokes for differing folks
And MOST,,, would include the Compulsory of the Sensory
Wanting what’s sensual performing The Reciprocal    
Wherein LOVERs never become expended   ::NO::
That’s never what’s intended  
What is ~ is that the PERSON conveys their desire
That DESIRE that don’t tire ~ Mutually ~
That Fire ~ One’s love, meshed within the Other’s  
a flame though untamed ~ Tapped into NEED
HUNGER onna continuous FEED  


~ Indeed ~


Having one’s here and now ~  
Going at it hard ~ Any length ~ Any how  
Where Distance is served by Persistence
A strung-out Dream not meeting ANY Resistance


~Now ~


Who’d wanna wake from this??????  





calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
United States 28awards
Joined 22nd June 2015
Forum Posts: 2047

Oh Wow Kool...that was very cool!
Extremely unique structure, great flow
.the thought was expressed in a clever way..
The desire of your want expressed in an unconventional way...
Very thrilled by this!
And i really dig the end question..
Who would wanna wake from that?

AWESOME! Thanks!

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
United States 28awards
Joined 22nd June 2015
Forum Posts: 2047

Raa...you are fast becoming my fsvorite new member for sure...and just a favorite poet period!
I loved this so much...exactly what i asked for..
In an expressive..very declaritive imaginative fashion!
Brava darlin!
Loved!

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
United States 28awards
Joined 22nd June 2015
Forum Posts: 2047

Aarti..and sqeeze em doll..a good spooner and squeeeezer! Lol thanks my lil dove...

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

Whatever Time We Have

The moon is not risen when I turn
on my side to watch him sleep,
stretched pale and naked as I speak:


Sweet boy of innocent face and
delicate ears that I love to trace,
painting smiles with my finger—

let the world know who you are,
that doesn’t know the grace of you,
to strive and please, and make me laugh.

A lusty boy with carob eyes, and
lashes like moth wings that shade me
in a darkened birch bow.

Luscious brows knit easily. Your face
bursts open when you smile; your eyes
crinkle into smiles of their own.

I’m drawn into your playfulness when
it's upon me suddenly, who's inner child
shares all his toys with mine.

How beautiful you are to me, and how it
came to be when I found myself here with you
no matter, long or short, the time for us.

His breathing changes as he stirs,
reaching half asleep for me
while autumn's moon is growing old.

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
United States 28awards
Joined 22nd June 2015
Forum Posts: 2047

Oh dovey Jadey
You describe this man in physical terms that also show his personality!
I.love that
This is stunning. You know im a fan.
This makes me an even bigger one.

I’m drawn into your playfulness when
it's upon me suddenly, who's inner child
shares all his toys with mine.

Perfection!! Big hugs for this spectacular entry. Thank you!

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

calamitygin said:Oh dovey Jadey
You describe this man in physical terms that also show his personality!
I.love that
This is stunning. You know im a fan.
This makes me an even bigger one.

I’m drawn into your playfulness when
it's upon me suddenly, who's inner child
shares all his toys with mine.

Perfection!! Big hugs for this spectacular entry. Thank you!


Gosh thank you so much, Jennie-girl, you've made this chilly night more inviting now. -- Jadey

randomMeAndBob
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 11th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 13

I Just Want

Someone who craves words more than oxygen
and bleeds stories too beautiful to write down
and too bitter to say
aloud.

A cluster of feathers
hiding behind paper
concrete walls
and eyes that cradle Stardust
even when there's no galaxy.

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
United States 28awards
Joined 22nd June 2015
Forum Posts: 2047

Random...
A beautiful, brief collection of thoughts.
Such a romantic, dignified and ellegant piece. I really love this.
Thank you soooo much!

cheesa
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom 2awards
Joined 5th Oct 2015
Forum Posts: 109

Personality kindness and charm
A short blonde with laughter
Someone worth chasing after

Ass tighter than a knot
A cute smile blue eyes the lot

Look of such innocence and tender
Drink more than me on a wild bender

Polite with please and thank you's said
Jekyl to her hide shows me a freak in the bed

A girl you'd like to meet your mom
One you wanna keep so bad you hope there's a rip in your condom

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 16217

Wistful thinking

no shunning the moonlight dances
feeling cool sand beneath our feet
no turning away when silver lights
are hidden by dark midnight clouds

no stints on stolen kisses
or holding back of caresses
no words spoken with forked tongue
or hiding behind bouquet of pretty scribbles

fair of face pleasing sights
model fit for brands of tobacco
are not sought for nor hoped
better the heart brims full of kindness

a soulmate...has he been born
or died before I lived
or somewhere out there still
waiting for the kiss of fate

I am waiting for cymbals
to hark his entry
the winter years draw near
maybe we will meet

in another lifetime.

JAITO
Magic poemz
Fire of Insight
Kenya 8awards
Joined 24th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 171

I WANT YOU
Your name is sexy enough to stay in my mind
I’m so obsessed with you, I want to seduce you, I want you to be mine
No matter which word I architect, I can’t find the perfect line
You are every reason I’m bad but the result you see is nice.

I want you; if you look closer it’s all over my face
My stupid jokes you laugh make me feel I’m winning the race
When you flirt girl, you made a lasting memory in my head
I want to be with you, no other option to me makes sense.

I want to get all the money in the world just to caress your thighs
You can come closer to my life
Every sweetness, every bit of you to me is a perfect like
What you hold princess is definitely ripe.

I want you to be the owner of me
Today my aim is more than the want, now I see
I’m not scared of you no more, im busy as a bee
You are all I need, all I deserve my queen.

The level of passion I send to you as a message
The amount of work I offer to you as a present
It’s evident that your tasty self gets me tempted
I want you in my life and my yearn for you is not soon to be wasted.


calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
United States 28awards
Joined 22nd June 2015
Forum Posts: 2047

Haha!!! Cheesa! Ass tight as a knot, and a girl you'd like to meet your mom
One you wanna keep so bad you hope there's a rip in your condom
I belly laughed so fucking hard!
And the rest was so cute...you didn't try and pretend it was all about her inner beaut, though that was implied...

A blond shorty with an apple ass
Dig it!!!
Great entry! Thanks!

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