Poetry competition CLOSED 6th December 2015 3:17am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
HadesRising
and Jade-Pandora
Your Dream Lover
aarti
Forum Posts: 165
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 29th Aug 2015Forum Posts: 165
I lovvee your poem Jen! Too summarize your man, he just basically be in love with your rack. hahaha
Raa
Forum Posts: 12
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 21st Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 12
** Here's one for my perfect man - my soulmate**
Love Poem
You've got this touch that penetrates my skin
Like electric shocks and shots of adrenaline
It's like your kiss generates this feeling
That makes my head spin,
Til the edge of reality starts fraying, and disappearing
Til all that exists is this moment we're in
I can't resist, I beg please don't desist,
I can't imagine ever not wanting this
I never want this to stop
So just be my Hiro and pause all the clocks
You're more potent than heroin, more addictive than rocks
Shit, I'm a dribbling mess when you take off your top!
And you're not impressed by frocks and make up masks
I love how you value the goodness of hearts
Cos where kindness ends, that's where ugliness starts
And you're kind; you're intelligent, with a fucking great arse
And I melt when you laugh
And at that look in your eye
The one that makes shivers dance all down my spine
Knowing it mirrors just what's on my mind
Perfectly described
No words are required
Just a look, just a kiss, just electric and fire
Our minds running wild, together, in sync
It's more than desire, this is pure instinct
It's a connection of souls
It's like you're making me whole
It's like I've known you in a thousand disguises before
And will a thousand times more
I could search the Earth from end to end
Then, unsatisfied, search again
Search the stars and search the Sun
Search, until my days are done
And still could never find someone
I would rather love
Than you
Love Poem
You've got this touch that penetrates my skin
Like electric shocks and shots of adrenaline
It's like your kiss generates this feeling
That makes my head spin,
Til the edge of reality starts fraying, and disappearing
Til all that exists is this moment we're in
I can't resist, I beg please don't desist,
I can't imagine ever not wanting this
I never want this to stop
So just be my Hiro and pause all the clocks
You're more potent than heroin, more addictive than rocks
Shit, I'm a dribbling mess when you take off your top!
And you're not impressed by frocks and make up masks
I love how you value the goodness of hearts
Cos where kindness ends, that's where ugliness starts
And you're kind; you're intelligent, with a fucking great arse
And I melt when you laugh
And at that look in your eye
The one that makes shivers dance all down my spine
Knowing it mirrors just what's on my mind
Perfectly described
No words are required
Just a look, just a kiss, just electric and fire
Our minds running wild, together, in sync
It's more than desire, this is pure instinct
It's a connection of souls
It's like you're making me whole
It's like I've known you in a thousand disguises before
And will a thousand times more
I could search the Earth from end to end
Then, unsatisfied, search again
Search the stars and search the Sun
Search, until my days are done
And still could never find someone
I would rather love
Than you
kriticool
Forum Posts: 596
Fire of Insight
32
Joined 1st Nov 2011Forum Posts: 596
Dream Lovers
Each dream lover
We love the way they hover
But In DESCRIBING One, what does one need or
is it just about fucking the WANT out of ‘em?
~ Or out of one’s self? ~
I suppose ~ different strokes for differing folks
And MOST,,, would include the Compulsory of the Sensory
Wanting what’s sensual performing The Reciprocal
Wherein LOVERs never become expended ::NO::
That’s never what’s intended
What is ~ is that the PERSON conveys their desire
That DESIRE that don’t tire ~ Mutually ~
That Fire ~ One’s love, meshed within the Other’s
a flame though untamed ~ Tapped into NEED
HUNGER onna continuous FEED
~ Indeed ~
Having one’s here and now ~
Going at it hard ~ Any length ~ Any how
Where Distance is served by Persistence
A strung-out Dream not meeting ANY Resistance
~Now ~
Who’d wanna wake from this??????
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Oh Wow Kool...that was very cool!
Extremely unique structure, great flow
.the thought was expressed in a clever way..
The desire of your want expressed in an unconventional way...
Very thrilled by this!
And i really dig the end question..
Who would wanna wake from that?
AWESOME! Thanks!
Extremely unique structure, great flow
.the thought was expressed in a clever way..
The desire of your want expressed in an unconventional way...
Very thrilled by this!
And i really dig the end question..
Who would wanna wake from that?
AWESOME! Thanks!
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Raa...you are fast becoming my fsvorite new member for sure...and just a favorite poet period!
I loved this so much...exactly what i asked for..
In an expressive..very declaritive imaginative fashion!
Brava darlin!
Loved!
I loved this so much...exactly what i asked for..
In an expressive..very declaritive imaginative fashion!
Brava darlin!
Loved!
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Aarti..and sqeeze em doll..a good spooner and squeeeezer! Lol thanks my lil dove...
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Forum Posts: 5134
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
Whatever Time We Have
The moon is not risen when I turn
on my side to watch him sleep,
stretched pale and naked as I speak:
Sweet boy of innocent face and
delicate ears that I love to trace,
painting smiles with my finger—
let the world know who you are,
that doesn’t know the grace of you,
to strive and please, and make me laugh.
A lusty boy with carob eyes, and
lashes like moth wings that shade me
in a darkened birch bow.
Luscious brows knit easily. Your face
bursts open when you smile; your eyes
crinkle into smiles of their own.
I’m drawn into your playfulness when
it's upon me suddenly, who's inner child
shares all his toys with mine.
How beautiful you are to me, and how it
came to be when I found myself here with you
no matter, long or short, the time for us.
His breathing changes as he stirs,
reaching half asleep for me
while autumn's moon is growing old.
The moon is not risen when I turn
on my side to watch him sleep,
stretched pale and naked as I speak:
Sweet boy of innocent face and
delicate ears that I love to trace,
painting smiles with my finger—
let the world know who you are,
that doesn’t know the grace of you,
to strive and please, and make me laugh.
A lusty boy with carob eyes, and
lashes like moth wings that shade me
in a darkened birch bow.
Luscious brows knit easily. Your face
bursts open when you smile; your eyes
crinkle into smiles of their own.
I’m drawn into your playfulness when
it's upon me suddenly, who's inner child
shares all his toys with mine.
How beautiful you are to me, and how it
came to be when I found myself here with you
no matter, long or short, the time for us.
His breathing changes as he stirs,
reaching half asleep for me
while autumn's moon is growing old.
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Oh dovey Jadey
You describe this man in physical terms that also show his personality!
I.love that
This is stunning. You know im a fan.
This makes me an even bigger one.
I’m drawn into your playfulness when
it's upon me suddenly, who's inner child
shares all his toys with mine.
Perfection!! Big hugs for this spectacular entry. Thank you!
You describe this man in physical terms that also show his personality!
I.love that
This is stunning. You know im a fan.
This makes me an even bigger one.
I’m drawn into your playfulness when
it's upon me suddenly, who's inner child
shares all his toys with mine.
Perfection!! Big hugs for this spectacular entry. Thank you!
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Forum Posts: 5134
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
calamitygin said:Oh dovey Jadey
You describe this man in physical terms that also show his personality!
I.love that
This is stunning. You know im a fan.
This makes me an even bigger one.
I’m drawn into your playfulness when
it's upon me suddenly, who's inner child
shares all his toys with mine.
Perfection!! Big hugs for this spectacular entry. Thank you!
Gosh thank you so much, Jennie-girl, you've made this chilly night more inviting now. -- Jadey
You describe this man in physical terms that also show his personality!
I.love that
This is stunning. You know im a fan.
This makes me an even bigger one.
I’m drawn into your playfulness when
it's upon me suddenly, who's inner child
shares all his toys with mine.
Perfection!! Big hugs for this spectacular entry. Thank you!
Gosh thank you so much, Jennie-girl, you've made this chilly night more inviting now. -- Jadey
randomMeAndBob
Joined 11th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 13
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 13
I Just Want
Someone who craves words more than oxygen
and bleeds stories too beautiful to write down
and too bitter to say
aloud.
A cluster of feathers
hiding behind paper
concrete walls
and eyes that cradle Stardust
even when there's no galaxy.
Someone who craves words more than oxygen
and bleeds stories too beautiful to write down
and too bitter to say
aloud.
A cluster of feathers
hiding behind paper
concrete walls
and eyes that cradle Stardust
even when there's no galaxy.
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Random...
A beautiful, brief collection of thoughts.
Such a romantic, dignified and ellegant piece. I really love this.
Thank you soooo much!
A beautiful, brief collection of thoughts.
Such a romantic, dignified and ellegant piece. I really love this.
Thank you soooo much!
cheesa
Forum Posts: 109
Fire of Insight
2
Joined 5th Oct 2015Forum Posts: 109
Personality kindness and charm
A short blonde with laughter
Someone worth chasing after
Ass tighter than a knot
A cute smile blue eyes the lot
Look of such innocence and tender
Drink more than me on a wild bender
Polite with please and thank you's said
Jekyl to her hide shows me a freak in the bed
A girl you'd like to meet your mom
One you wanna keep so bad you hope there's a rip in your condom
A short blonde with laughter
Someone worth chasing after
Ass tighter than a knot
A cute smile blue eyes the lot
Look of such innocence and tender
Drink more than me on a wild bender
Polite with please and thank you's said
Jekyl to her hide shows me a freak in the bed
A girl you'd like to meet your mom
One you wanna keep so bad you hope there's a rip in your condom
Grace
IDryad
Forum Posts: 16217
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 16217
Wistful thinking
no shunning the moonlight dances
feeling cool sand beneath our feet
no turning away when silver lights
are hidden by dark midnight clouds
no stints on stolen kisses
or holding back of caresses
no words spoken with forked tongue
or hiding behind bouquet of pretty scribbles
fair of face pleasing sights
model fit for brands of tobacco
are not sought for nor hoped
better the heart brims full of kindness
a soulmate...has he been born
or died before I lived
or somewhere out there still
waiting for the kiss of fate
I am waiting for cymbals
to hark his entry
the winter years draw near
maybe we will meet
in another lifetime.
no shunning the moonlight dances
feeling cool sand beneath our feet
no turning away when silver lights
are hidden by dark midnight clouds
no stints on stolen kisses
or holding back of caresses
no words spoken with forked tongue
or hiding behind bouquet of pretty scribbles
fair of face pleasing sights
model fit for brands of tobacco
are not sought for nor hoped
better the heart brims full of kindness
a soulmate...has he been born
or died before I lived
or somewhere out there still
waiting for the kiss of fate
I am waiting for cymbals
to hark his entry
the winter years draw near
maybe we will meet
in another lifetime.
JAITO
Magic poemz
Forum Posts: 171
Magic poemz
Fire of Insight
8
Joined 24th Jan 2012 Forum Posts: 171
I WANT YOU
Your name is sexy enough to stay in my mind
I’m so obsessed with you, I want to seduce you, I want you to be mine
No matter which word I architect, I can’t find the perfect line
You are every reason I’m bad but the result you see is nice.
I want you; if you look closer it’s all over my face
My stupid jokes you laugh make me feel I’m winning the race
When you flirt girl, you made a lasting memory in my head
I want to be with you, no other option to me makes sense.
I want to get all the money in the world just to caress your thighs
You can come closer to my life
Every sweetness, every bit of you to me is a perfect like
What you hold princess is definitely ripe.
I want you to be the owner of me
Today my aim is more than the want, now I see
I’m not scared of you no more, im busy as a bee
You are all I need, all I deserve my queen.
The level of passion I send to you as a message
The amount of work I offer to you as a present
It’s evident that your tasty self gets me tempted
I want you in my life and my yearn for you is not soon to be wasted.
Your name is sexy enough to stay in my mind
I’m so obsessed with you, I want to seduce you, I want you to be mine
No matter which word I architect, I can’t find the perfect line
You are every reason I’m bad but the result you see is nice.
I want you; if you look closer it’s all over my face
My stupid jokes you laugh make me feel I’m winning the race
When you flirt girl, you made a lasting memory in my head
I want to be with you, no other option to me makes sense.
I want to get all the money in the world just to caress your thighs
You can come closer to my life
Every sweetness, every bit of you to me is a perfect like
What you hold princess is definitely ripe.
I want you to be the owner of me
Today my aim is more than the want, now I see
I’m not scared of you no more, im busy as a bee
You are all I need, all I deserve my queen.
The level of passion I send to you as a message
The amount of work I offer to you as a present
It’s evident that your tasty self gets me tempted
I want you in my life and my yearn for you is not soon to be wasted.
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Haha!!! Cheesa! Ass tight as a knot, and a girl you'd like to meet your mom
One you wanna keep so bad you hope there's a rip in your condom
I belly laughed so fucking hard!
And the rest was so cute...you didn't try and pretend it was all about her inner beaut, though that was implied...
A blond shorty with an apple ass
Dig it!!!
Great entry! Thanks!
One you wanna keep so bad you hope there's a rip in your condom
I belly laughed so fucking hard!
And the rest was so cute...you didn't try and pretend it was all about her inner beaut, though that was implied...
A blond shorty with an apple ass
Dig it!!!
Great entry! Thanks!