Poetry competition CLOSED 6th December 2015 3:17am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
HadesRising
and Jade-Pandora
Your Dream Lover
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Poetry Contest Description
Write your dream mate in glorious, or, not so glorious ink....
Describe him or her. .
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DESCRIBING THEM, what do you need or just fucking want out of them. Your love, Your now?
Any length
Any how
Okay, I see this is gonna fill up fast, if you have posted old writes before now it's cool, but new ones from now on! Lol thanks!
Just have fun and spill...
***********
DESCRIBING THEM, what do you need or just fucking want out of them. Your love, Your now?
Any length
Any how
Okay, I see this is gonna fill up fast, if you have posted old writes before now it's cool, but new ones from now on! Lol thanks!
Just have fun and spill...
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
My example piece.....
My Dream Man (I'm not fucking asking for much!)
"You gawt, like, a towtallleee bitchen bawd babe!"
"That bikini is, like, tooobuler."
Valley girls.
At, like age 10.
This is what I dreamed of from men back then.
I also prayed for a great rack..
Things surprisingly haven't changed all that much..
I got my great rack, now I just pray to keep it a few more years...hehe
What i need is the great dude that thinks they're, like, toooobular...
Annd I'm sure he would tell me plenty that I'm "bitchin."
I know that from experience....ha!
I dream of a man that spoons reeaally well.
Cuddles up and does that lil snuggle into your butt with his dick..
Lol really works it in and doesn't realize he's doin it...
It's the best with his morning wood... Yeah! Love that..
Ohhh..I'd like to wake up in the middle of the night from a bad dream,
And instead of being too scared to scream out, I would just hold his hand tighter around my tits..
I'd tuck the left one in the palm of his hand for him.
Because he sleeps on the left too, see.
He would have a happy "cop a feel" when he wakes..hehehe
And I'd really love it, that when he does wake, and feels that round soft titty in his hand...
He woukd tenderly squeeze and say.."honk, honk!"
Because my man would do anything to make me giggle..
Even wake me the fuck up in the middle of the night and risk a smack! Ha!
And he just couldn't resist squeezin my beautiful boob!
You know?
Is that toooo much to ask?
A cock snuggling, titty squeezer, that would get smacked to make me giggle.
And a great rack fooor like 10 more solid years..
Yeah.
My Dream Man (I'm not fucking asking for much!)
"You gawt, like, a towtallleee bitchen bawd babe!"
"That bikini is, like, tooobuler."
Valley girls.
At, like age 10.
This is what I dreamed of from men back then.
I also prayed for a great rack..
Things surprisingly haven't changed all that much..
I got my great rack, now I just pray to keep it a few more years...hehe
What i need is the great dude that thinks they're, like, toooobular...
Annd I'm sure he would tell me plenty that I'm "bitchin."
I know that from experience....ha!
I dream of a man that spoons reeaally well.
Cuddles up and does that lil snuggle into your butt with his dick..
Lol really works it in and doesn't realize he's doin it...
It's the best with his morning wood... Yeah! Love that..
Ohhh..I'd like to wake up in the middle of the night from a bad dream,
And instead of being too scared to scream out, I would just hold his hand tighter around my tits..
I'd tuck the left one in the palm of his hand for him.
Because he sleeps on the left too, see.
He would have a happy "cop a feel" when he wakes..hehehe
And I'd really love it, that when he does wake, and feels that round soft titty in his hand...
He woukd tenderly squeeze and say.."honk, honk!"
Because my man would do anything to make me giggle..
Even wake me the fuck up in the middle of the night and risk a smack! Ha!
And he just couldn't resist squeezin my beautiful boob!
You know?
Is that toooo much to ask?
A cock snuggling, titty squeezer, that would get smacked to make me giggle.
And a great rack fooor like 10 more solid years..
Yeah.
gazellemon
Bradley J
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Bradley J
Fire of Insight
6
Joined 6th Mar 2014Forum Posts: 372
Lover Boy
I don't know..
Maybe it is just me,
Awake dreaming fantasies,
of you and me because I can't sleep.
Where is the love i so desperately need?
my heart has repeatedly taken a beating,
Maybe the balance of a team will let me find peace with my being,
So it seems I need more love,
Not nice things,
Cause happiness comes from within,
Not from how much you spend
What are material possessions
When i bring you into question,
I'm on a quest and this cannot be random-
we both needed a companion,
Two paths form one and cannot be abandoned,
We stand a chance but who doesn't have baggage?
Maybe i can be the man to slay your dragons,
From our vantage we can manage to keep a bandage on the damage,
I got stamina so for now I soul search for you in Goldilocks zones,
You know..
The type of space you would grace as your own,
At first words softly spoken,
In spurts emotions begin floatin',
A page turns and soon we start quotin',
Two voices and the breath to grow,
Binary stars in our own show,
But we both know the brightest souls are the quickest to fall apart,
We can not quit now, look we are living in art,
Love will always get harder but why else would anyone bother-
To conquer life with a partner?
I don't know..
Maybe it is just me,
Awake dreaming fantasies,
of you and me because I can't sleep.
Where is the love i so desperately need?
my heart has repeatedly taken a beating,
Maybe the balance of a team will let me find peace with my being,
So it seems I need more love,
Not nice things,
Cause happiness comes from within,
Not from how much you spend
What are material possessions
When i bring you into question,
I'm on a quest and this cannot be random-
we both needed a companion,
Two paths form one and cannot be abandoned,
We stand a chance but who doesn't have baggage?
Maybe i can be the man to slay your dragons,
From our vantage we can manage to keep a bandage on the damage,
I got stamina so for now I soul search for you in Goldilocks zones,
You know..
The type of space you would grace as your own,
At first words softly spoken,
In spurts emotions begin floatin',
A page turns and soon we start quotin',
Two voices and the breath to grow,
Binary stars in our own show,
But we both know the brightest souls are the quickest to fall apart,
We can not quit now, look we are living in art,
Love will always get harder but why else would anyone bother-
To conquer life with a partner?
kmart2013
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Joined 13th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 34
K
Twisted Dreamer
Forum Posts: 34
I swear I'm nice, I swear I'm sweet.
I wont tell lies, and I won't cheat.
(As long as you are good to me)
But there's one problem; it doesn't phase me(too much )
But it might phase you. See, I'm fucking crazy.
And it's only gotten worse lately.
I'm prescribed pills, that I fuckin hate.
I swear(hope) I won't kill; this is just my fate.
Can you handle me as I am? Will you be my support; my number one fan? If that can be possible, then hop on this obstacle(me)
Please tell me I'm okay when I'm really not.
Don't lash out on me with terrible thoughts.
That's all I want and all I really need. If you can put up with my crazy ass, then I will love you, indeed.
I wont tell lies, and I won't cheat.
(As long as you are good to me)
But there's one problem; it doesn't phase me(too much )
But it might phase you. See, I'm fucking crazy.
And it's only gotten worse lately.
I'm prescribed pills, that I fuckin hate.
I swear(hope) I won't kill; this is just my fate.
Can you handle me as I am? Will you be my support; my number one fan? If that can be possible, then hop on this obstacle(me)
Please tell me I'm okay when I'm really not.
Don't lash out on me with terrible thoughts.
That's all I want and all I really need. If you can put up with my crazy ass, then I will love you, indeed.
rabbitquest
Forum Posts: 2051
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 20th May 2012Forum Posts: 2051
Meeting a girl was kinda hard
In this cruel n lonely world
I took one who loved me back n
Dint have any thoughts black
In this cruel n lonely world
I took one who loved me back n
Dint have any thoughts black
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Gazelle! Dude, hey sweetie... Great entry! Such build in the beginning, frustration shown, gets some furious then bout here..
"I got stamina so for now I soul search for you in Goldilocks zones,
You know..
The type of space you would grace as your own, "
It changes. .it's like...wait...look what if...very cool sweetheart.
Loved how you did this! This is gonna be a fun comp and a hell bitch to judge I bet!
"I got stamina so for now I soul search for you in Goldilocks zones,
You know..
The type of space you would grace as your own, "
It changes. .it's like...wait...look what if...very cool sweetheart.
Loved how you did this! This is gonna be a fun comp and a hell bitch to judge I bet!
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Lmao! Kmart, love the name...
Okay,I loved that this comp was describe your dream mate, and the only person you described was crazy ass you, lol and your requirements.... Deal wit it!
I am not being sarcastic or condescending when I say you have got to be earrrrly 20s.. This will change..
Look over the description of the comp. .honey, what would make your crazy ass really happy, what qualities would please and benifit you, beyond let me be nuts!..though believe me, I have done that!. Think
The piece was a riot and I loved it...
Okay,I loved that this comp was describe your dream mate, and the only person you described was crazy ass you, lol and your requirements.... Deal wit it!
I am not being sarcastic or condescending when I say you have got to be earrrrly 20s.. This will change..
Look over the description of the comp. .honey, what would make your crazy ass really happy, what qualities would please and benifit you, beyond let me be nuts!..though believe me, I have done that!. Think
The piece was a riot and I loved it...
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Cool piece Rabbit! But...What do you want in a mate!? Come on my funny bunny...describe dream girl! Who is that one hard to get?
MsRockyJackson
Forum Posts: 318
Dangerous Mind
8
Joined 1st July 2014Forum Posts: 318
A Real Man
I want the kind of man who knows what he wants,
I want the kind of man who speaks his mind.
Someone who can find your flaws flawless, because he's not perfect.
Someone who is surely worth it.
The kind of man who doesn't give meaningless one liners just to bed you.
I want a real man.
I want the kind of man who can quench my desire while at the same time I can light his fire,
I want the kind of man who isn't afraid to be a man and not act like a little boy.
Someone who won't toy with my emotions,
Someone who won't destroy my heart for sport.
The kind of man who can understand me,
treat me right,
And is willing to stay with me for more than just the night.
I want a real man.
I want the kind of man who is able to stand back up when others have tried to kick him down,
I want the kind of man who knows I'm not being in demand I just know I deserve better.
Someone who wants a relationship that's fifty-fifty instead of twenty-thirty,
Someone who'll work for what he wants,
Not someone who assumes he gets everything he wants.
I want a real man.
A man who knows the meaning of chivalry,
A man who knows how to treat a lady,
A man who doesn't have to act macho to establish he is still a man.
I want the kind of man who can be there for me in my darkest hour,
I want the kind of man who will never deceive me,
Just be with me and I will give all of me.
I want the kind of man who doesn't feel the need to lay his hand on a woman whenever things don't go his way.
I want a real man.
I want the kind of man who knows what he wants,
I want the kind of man who speaks his mind.
Someone who can find your flaws flawless, because he's not perfect.
Someone who is surely worth it.
The kind of man who doesn't give meaningless one liners just to bed you.
I want a real man.
I want the kind of man who can quench my desire while at the same time I can light his fire,
I want the kind of man who isn't afraid to be a man and not act like a little boy.
Someone who won't toy with my emotions,
Someone who won't destroy my heart for sport.
The kind of man who can understand me,
treat me right,
And is willing to stay with me for more than just the night.
I want a real man.
I want the kind of man who is able to stand back up when others have tried to kick him down,
I want the kind of man who knows I'm not being in demand I just know I deserve better.
Someone who wants a relationship that's fifty-fifty instead of twenty-thirty,
Someone who'll work for what he wants,
Not someone who assumes he gets everything he wants.
I want a real man.
A man who knows the meaning of chivalry,
A man who knows how to treat a lady,
A man who doesn't have to act macho to establish he is still a man.
I want the kind of man who can be there for me in my darkest hour,
I want the kind of man who will never deceive me,
Just be with me and I will give all of me.
I want the kind of man who doesn't feel the need to lay his hand on a woman whenever things don't go his way.
I want a real man.
kmart2013
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Joined 13th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 34
K
Twisted Dreamer
Forum Posts: 34
Oh my I'm so glad I could amuse you 😁😀
You are so right lol I'm 20 years old-I really hope it does change!! Ha ha
Hmm, let me think about this for a bit then perhaps post lol.. 😊
You are so right lol I'm 20 years old-I really hope it does change!! Ha ha
Hmm, let me think about this for a bit then perhaps post lol.. 😊
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Right on Ms Rocky Jackson!
"Someone who can find your flaws flawless, because he's not perfect.
Someone who is surely worth it. "
I love that! Find your flaws flawless...that's awesome!
I want the kind of man who knows I'm not being in demand I just know I deserve better. "
Very good! I deserve better, you say it...he should listen...
I really like this, and am inspired as a woman by this, could have used these words when I have made apologies for things, I should not have said I am sorry for. Because I thought I deserved those things....great piece love.
Exactly what I needed....
"Someone who can find your flaws flawless, because he's not perfect.
Someone who is surely worth it. "
I love that! Find your flaws flawless...that's awesome!
I want the kind of man who knows I'm not being in demand I just know I deserve better. "
Very good! I deserve better, you say it...he should listen...
I really like this, and am inspired as a woman by this, could have used these words when I have made apologies for things, I should not have said I am sorry for. Because I thought I deserved those things....great piece love.
Exactly what I needed....
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Lol Kmart! Know I really did enjoy the piece. Just, what would you like in them.. You are a dove.. Lol
And enjoy those early 20s!!!!! Awesome!!!
And enjoy those early 20s!!!!! Awesome!!!
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Bo, hehe, since this comp entry has the word love in it a couple times, you are disqualified. No kinda love involves rage induced black and blue beat women. I hope you find that love, from a big Aryan brother in a jail cell some time that fucks you gooooood like his lover and puts his biiiiig ol cock in your purty lil place.
Thanks bo for the entry though!!!
Thanks bo for the entry though!!!
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Tod, this is really gorgeous, and expresses your dream mate in a different way than the previous entries, not in a list, but aftermath of your perfect sex, a pleasure pain melt, felt gratefully by both partners willingly, awesome.and you really hit this nice! The reins made of hair...this drumming by your genitals hitting.. The soft carresing of the marks left by your love making and WE understand it...all of these things make this powerful strong in image. And beautiful. Thank you...so happy with this.