Challenge: Suicide Note
When alive, a corpse,in death now I shall live,
The only few things I wanted,that life could never give,
Gave everything else,gracious that it was,
To me an anathema,at best a lost cause...
Parody,travesty and derision of what I desired,
Of the opposite banter,I had indeed grown tired,
So away from sorrow,misfortune and the affront I received,
I embraced death for being perpetually well deceived...
my first attempt at a suicide poem:
to touch a heart of gladness
to fill the empty soul
to touch a mind of blissful thoughts
to fill the void and hole
kiss the face of danger
cry out to the wild moon
place your hand over your breast
whisper to your lover, "peace and rest"
crying, screaming, anguish?
no
sighs, eye roll, groaning
go
peace at last
journeys end
happy beginning
with my lover of stars
to touch a heart of gladness
to fill the empty soul
to touch a mind of blissful thoughts
to fill the void and hole
kiss the face of danger
cry out to the wild moon
place your hand over your breast
whisper to your lover, "peace and rest"
crying, screaming, anguish?
no
sighs, eye roll, groaning
go
peace at last
journeys end
happy beginning
with my lover of stars
"Milo's Lament"
What have I done?
What have I done?
By my God, am I so rash,
That these things could be done?
Who better to hate himself
Than he who hates his friend?
But to have gone this far for blood,
Blood!
I do not understand.
Oh, you Fates of Hades,
Let my end be nigh
For now that all my world is gone,
So would I sooner die.
What have I done?
What have I done?
By my God, am I so rash,
That these things could be done?
Who better to hate himself
Than he who hates his friend?
But to have gone this far for blood,
Blood!
I do not understand.
Oh, you Fates of Hades,
Let my end be nigh
For now that all my world is gone,
So would I sooner die.
I started writing one of these a couple weeks ago, yet my depression was/is so deep that I didn't have the desire to do it whixh begs the question...Has anyone ever been so depressed that they didn't have the motivation needed to commit suicide?
Fuck it. What else do you do when the only thing left to lose is your "life."
and what loss is it really when you don't feel alive as it is?
Press the razor to your wrist or swallow the pills and let all the hurt, the betrayal drain away or fade away.
A selfish act? Is it anymore selfish than birthing a child who never consented to be born?
Bringing them in to a world of loss and misery and lonely nights spent lying awake jonesing for the drugs that will take the pain away from the edges of his memories of her?
Whose the selfish one? It's my life to end, it was never yours to give.
and what loss is it really when you don't feel alive as it is?
Press the razor to your wrist or swallow the pills and let all the hurt, the betrayal drain away or fade away.
A selfish act? Is it anymore selfish than birthing a child who never consented to be born?
Bringing them in to a world of loss and misery and lonely nights spent lying awake jonesing for the drugs that will take the pain away from the edges of his memories of her?
Whose the selfish one? It's my life to end, it was never yours to give.
Anonymous
Most people think of suicide at some point. But one thing all should consider before trying:
What if death is NOT the end? You may think you're putting yourself out of misery. Perhaps you might, but there's a chance you could be jumping into worse torment.
Read some books/articles on life after death experiences. Read about the paranormal and the spirits who still linger here after death. Some are here to help the living while others remain captive in their pain.
I will never commit suicide as long as I am sane.
What if death is NOT the end? You may think you're putting yourself out of misery. Perhaps you might, but there's a chance you could be jumping into worse torment.
Read some books/articles on life after death experiences. Read about the paranormal and the spirits who still linger here after death. Some are here to help the living while others remain captive in their pain.
I will never commit suicide as long as I am sane.
I'm so high I could barely move
Dear World:
I hate you, my hands shake uncontrollably
I can't think straight
I'm dazed off to the unknown
where my corpse will lie on the tomb stone
all this unhappiness on earth
leaves me no choice to ended first
intoxicated on drugs
blurred vision almost gone
here are my last words
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Dear World:
I hate you, my hands shake uncontrollably
I can't think straight
I'm dazed off to the unknown
where my corpse will lie on the tomb stone
all this unhappiness on earth
leaves me no choice to ended first
intoxicated on drugs
blurred vision almost gone
here are my last words
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Anonymous
Suicide is Brainless (Posted for Mysterio's rightly abandoned "Suicide Letter" comp)
Dear Friends & Family,
I loved myself more than you,
that is why I am going to victimize you through my cowardly,
selfish, wasteful, sad, and useless act
of self destruction.
Please make no mistake,
even under this cloud of "depression"
and hundreds of cutting poems,
I loved myself more than you.
I hope to haunt you forever,
enjoy the pics the cops take.
I will probably shit myself
from the hanging, no big deal,
I can't smell it...I'm dead.
P.S. This is the 2nd fucking stupidest comp I have seen on DUP, congrats rayheinrich! Oh wait, I just read your very very long profile, we are not supposed to take what you say seriously....this too?
P.S.S I do not mean to sound unfeeling, suicide is not a solution, it victimizes
P.S.S.S How do these idiotic comps get by the Web Mistress??????
Dear Friends & Family,
I loved myself more than you,
that is why I am going to victimize you through my cowardly,
selfish, wasteful, sad, and useless act
of self destruction.
Please make no mistake,
even under this cloud of "depression"
and hundreds of cutting poems,
I loved myself more than you.
I hope to haunt you forever,
enjoy the pics the cops take.
I will probably shit myself
from the hanging, no big deal,
I can't smell it...I'm dead.
P.S. This is the 2nd fucking stupidest comp I have seen on DUP, congrats rayheinrich! Oh wait, I just read your very very long profile, we are not supposed to take what you say seriously....this too?
P.S.S I do not mean to sound unfeeling, suicide is not a solution, it victimizes
P.S.S.S How do these idiotic comps get by the Web Mistress??????
Dresdamanx said:Suicide is Brainless (Posted for Mysterio's rightly abandoned "Suicide Letter" comp)
Dear Friends & Family,
I loved myself more than you,
that is why I am going to victimize you through my cowardly,
selfish, wasteful, sad, and useless act
of self destruction.
Please make no mistake,
even under this cloud of "depression"
and hundreds of cutting poems,
I loved myself more than you.
I hope to haunt you forever,
enjoy the pics the cops take.
I will probably shit myself
from the hanging, no big deal,
I can't smell it...I'm dead.
P.S. This is the 2nd fucking stupidest comp I have seen on DUP, congrats rayheinrich! Oh wait, I just read your very very long profile, we are not supposed to take what you say seriously....this too?
P.S.S I do not mean to sound unfeeling, suicide is not a solution, it victimizes
P.S.S.S How do these idiotic comps get by the Web Mistress??????
My ex-girlfriend killed herself. As a matter of fact i have known multiple people who committed suicide. It is selfish and maybe even cowardice but i do not think we can really be so negative toward people like that. Saying "depression" makes it seem fake and i promise depression is real and everywhere for some people. I would love to think that my ex stopped to think about how her death might affect me but the reality is that i doubt that she did and this makes me feel so cold inside. I disagree with the idea that depression and suicidal thoughts can be cured with medicine but i do believe writing things like the things on this comp help the people who do actually have problems or genuine pain in their life. Overtly you have some sort of pain in your own life otherwise i can not imagine your response to this comp being so partial and bitter.
Dear Friends & Family,
I loved myself more than you,
that is why I am going to victimize you through my cowardly,
selfish, wasteful, sad, and useless act
of self destruction.
Please make no mistake,
even under this cloud of "depression"
and hundreds of cutting poems,
I loved myself more than you.
I hope to haunt you forever,
enjoy the pics the cops take.
I will probably shit myself
from the hanging, no big deal,
I can't smell it...I'm dead.
P.S. This is the 2nd fucking stupidest comp I have seen on DUP, congrats rayheinrich! Oh wait, I just read your very very long profile, we are not supposed to take what you say seriously....this too?
P.S.S I do not mean to sound unfeeling, suicide is not a solution, it victimizes
P.S.S.S How do these idiotic comps get by the Web Mistress??????
My ex-girlfriend killed herself. As a matter of fact i have known multiple people who committed suicide. It is selfish and maybe even cowardice but i do not think we can really be so negative toward people like that. Saying "depression" makes it seem fake and i promise depression is real and everywhere for some people. I would love to think that my ex stopped to think about how her death might affect me but the reality is that i doubt that she did and this makes me feel so cold inside. I disagree with the idea that depression and suicidal thoughts can be cured with medicine but i do believe writing things like the things on this comp help the people who do actually have problems or genuine pain in their life. Overtly you have some sort of pain in your own life otherwise i can not imagine your response to this comp being so partial and bitter.
