Poetry competition CLOSED 9th October 2015 6:14am
WINNER
dejure (vick)
dejure (vick)
RUNNERS-UP:
gardenlover
and calamitygin
Memories of Eden
Poetry Contest Description
The happiest moments of your life and how it ended, or flourished
Tell us about the happiest moments of your life, and how it flourished...or how it ended. It can be of anything; childhood, relationships or marriages.
It can be of any length but not a whole page/screen. Please title your poem. Enter a new one. You can enter a maximum of two. No collaborations, sorry.
Most of all, Enjoy writing. http://t14.deviantart.net/kFiGY1tAsJc7hDorwxAN3zcoZg8=/fit-in/300x900/filters:no_upscale():origin()/pre13/6ffb/th/pre/i/2013/095/3/5/beautiful_life_by_mavigozlum-d60ihg9.jpg
It can be of any length but not a whole page/screen. Please title your poem. Enter a new one. You can enter a maximum of two. No collaborations, sorry.
Most of all, Enjoy writing. http://t14.deviantart.net/kFiGY1tAsJc7hDorwxAN3zcoZg8=/fit-in/300x900/filters:no_upscale():origin()/pre13/6ffb/th/pre/i/2013/095/3/5/beautiful_life_by_mavigozlum-d60ihg9.jpg
NewGod Nurture
I lay in wait as Sir prolongs his assent
Into my earthly heavens
Anticipatory forplay
Sir's specialty
Toungue and caresses
placed perfect ever towards
sweet destination
Moves his licks and swirling
slowly over
hills valleys mountaintops
Shakes
Causing richter scale leaps
breathless need for eruption
Seas churning rivers run backwards
Confusion mass hysteria
Tsunami movements between thighs
And all over Jennifer
At last my NewGod enters
Cataclysm
Would be apocalyptic event
Worlds collide into one.
Pounding down in beats divine
Earth stilled
Awaiting new fantasic light and life
Sir settles in his eclipsing nurture arms around me
I am sustained by his breathing
Lunar pull
(deep in love first true love rapture)
Hope this fits what you were looking for Grace, a great comp, we focus to much on heart break and ache as human beings than what has made us happy, if even only for a while.
I lay in wait as Sir prolongs his assent
Into my earthly heavens
Anticipatory forplay
Sir's specialty
Toungue and caresses
placed perfect ever towards
sweet destination
Moves his licks and swirling
slowly over
hills valleys mountaintops
Shakes
Causing richter scale leaps
breathless need for eruption
Seas churning rivers run backwards
Confusion mass hysteria
Tsunami movements between thighs
And all over Jennifer
At last my NewGod enters
Cataclysm
Would be apocalyptic event
Worlds collide into one.
Pounding down in beats divine
Earth stilled
Awaiting new fantasic light and life
Sir settles in his eclipsing nurture arms around me
I am sustained by his breathing
Lunar pull
(deep in love first true love rapture)
Hope this fits what you were looking for Grace, a great comp, we focus to much on heart break and ache as human beings than what has made us happy, if even only for a while.
l love my break throughs. Doing and failing. Never trying and staying down.
I played a lot in martial arts class.
I pushed myself at the pace of stagnant water.
I jumped and made new friends.
I kicked and pushed people away.
I dodged never showing who I truly was.
I grappled and dragged myself down.
I love my break throughs.
Sadly this one came at a price.
Doing and failing, miserably.
Never trying and staying down.
I tried, I never meant to hurt you.
I was in a dark place. But I'm glad I ended up pushing you away. Because you'd never have accepted who I am.
I played a lot in martial arts class.
I pushed myself at the pace of stagnant water.
I jumped and made new friends.
I kicked and pushed people away.
I dodged never showing who I truly was.
I grappled and dragged myself down.
I love my break throughs.
Sadly this one came at a price.
Doing and failing, miserably.
Never trying and staying down.
I tried, I never meant to hurt you.
I was in a dark place. But I'm glad I ended up pushing you away. Because you'd never have accepted who I am.
.
You make my happiness
Mesmerized by you and I feel so high
Young hearts are an union of the karma
Singing in your sweet voice to me, I clap
And dance with you, then lie in our heap
Dreams are alive because of you and i
Naked bodies do the arts under the moon
Every part of your body for me is a divine
So many nights, but where's my tiredness
Stay with me forever my sweet princess
.
You make my happiness
Mesmerized by you and I feel so high
Young hearts are an union of the karma
Singing in your sweet voice to me, I clap
And dance with you, then lie in our heap
Dreams are alive because of you and i
Naked bodies do the arts under the moon
Every part of your body for me is a divine
So many nights, but where's my tiredness
Stay with me forever my sweet princess
.
Ivy
Her hair was as straight and red
As ironed ketchup
Too her waist and below
Insulting that color only found
In lush tropical rain forests
On the crests of rare birds
By cutting it?
Sacrilege
She wore it like a curtain
To keep out the sun
Her hair the only thing
That could hide the woman
In her curves
I could have lived and died
Nourished by the sight
And feel of her body
Rounded lower tummy that swayed
Into her belly button
That arched over rib cage
That landed in secluded
Rest in the shady underneath
Of her tits
Tits like two jiggling moons
They nodded in agreement
When she giggled
Her giggles tinkled like Wind chimes
And only came out on
Special occasions
And then the round of her ass
Shaped like an upside down Valentine
Dimple on her left cheek
As if her crack was grinning wide
Perhaps it was, I hope so
Moved side to side when she
Walked like kittens under a cozy
Blanket
Eyes yellow green
Full of questions
Lips bee stung
And stained a color pink that only
Occurs while eating wild berries
And when that girl smiled
The whole world
Sighed
Her hair was as straight and red
As ironed ketchup
Too her waist and below
Insulting that color only found
In lush tropical rain forests
On the crests of rare birds
By cutting it?
Sacrilege
She wore it like a curtain
To keep out the sun
Her hair the only thing
That could hide the woman
In her curves
I could have lived and died
Nourished by the sight
And feel of her body
Rounded lower tummy that swayed
Into her belly button
That arched over rib cage
That landed in secluded
Rest in the shady underneath
Of her tits
Tits like two jiggling moons
They nodded in agreement
When she giggled
Her giggles tinkled like Wind chimes
And only came out on
Special occasions
And then the round of her ass
Shaped like an upside down Valentine
Dimple on her left cheek
As if her crack was grinning wide
Perhaps it was, I hope so
Moved side to side when she
Walked like kittens under a cozy
Blanket
Eyes yellow green
Full of questions
Lips bee stung
And stained a color pink that only
Occurs while eating wild berries
And when that girl smiled
The whole world
Sighed
Orgasms
When I reach a climax with someone I love
It brings happiness; a glimpse of heaven above.
We can repeat the experience as oft as we want
Our loving happiness is something to flaunt.
Living in harmony; with a bit of give and take,
But reaching an orgasm, is the icing on the cake.
The intimacy of the bed can not be surpassed
With luck this relationship will for ever last
When I reach a climax with someone I love
It brings happiness; a glimpse of heaven above.
We can repeat the experience as oft as we want
Our loving happiness is something to flaunt.
Living in harmony; with a bit of give and take,
But reaching an orgasm, is the icing on the cake.
The intimacy of the bed can not be surpassed
With luck this relationship will for ever last
Family
My family is a special group that brings most happiness,
Seeing them grow and thrive is such a source of bliss
My daughters and my grandsons are a joy to see
Developing their skills and quirks and personality
I have been lucky, my family are all friends,
When we together we discuss recent trends
Our political discussions can last almost a day
In spite of disagreements our relationships do not fray.
We care for each other, help when there is need,
We share our resources, assist all to succeed.
Best of all are the times when we're all together
The warmth of our clan can beat the coldest weather
My family is a special group that brings most happiness,
Seeing them grow and thrive is such a source of bliss
My daughters and my grandsons are a joy to see
Developing their skills and quirks and personality
I have been lucky, my family are all friends,
When we together we discuss recent trends
Our political discussions can last almost a day
In spite of disagreements our relationships do not fray.
We care for each other, help when there is need,
We share our resources, assist all to succeed.
Best of all are the times when we're all together
The warmth of our clan can beat the coldest weather
The simplicity of your entry says it all, dejure... you love well. Gardenlover, beautiful family, so happy for you. Calamitygin, your love for your man shines; lovely poem. All of the entries are brilliant. Be with me again in my next competition.
