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Best of the best ... Part II (most commented)
WanderingWillow
Forum Posts: 65
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 15th Aug 2015Forum Posts: 65
Here, Alone
Ignite, flames surround
So beautiful, the light
Exquisite, yet fierce
Shaded the dream
It was just you and me
The storm in passing
Parading around
Remember this moment
And don't make a sound
Tempted from pain
Let this fire build up
Burn down the empire
Hear the birds sing
Message in a bottle
As beauty fades
Eternity has served
As time is erased
Painting the canvas
With gentle strokes
Illuminating the sky
Signing the declaration
Wavering my soul
So talented the child
So tortured the heart
Divided by space
Showing brittle bones
Forever I'll stand,
Here..
Alone
Ignite, flames surround
So beautiful, the light
Exquisite, yet fierce
Shaded the dream
It was just you and me
The storm in passing
Parading around
Remember this moment
And don't make a sound
Tempted from pain
Let this fire build up
Burn down the empire
Hear the birds sing
Message in a bottle
As beauty fades
Eternity has served
As time is erased
Painting the canvas
With gentle strokes
Illuminating the sky
Signing the declaration
Wavering my soul
So talented the child
So tortured the heart
Divided by space
Showing brittle bones
Forever I'll stand,
Here..
Alone
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1781
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1781
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b43/tabithadrake/Wideeyes_zpselpdtkjp.jpg
Trapped:
Desire never ends,
it's my destiny...
Behind these eyes are the lies only my own heart knows
Underneath my escape is the only breath I know,
and it's poison.
You know my sickness,
you know my weakness
I confess,
my bitterness
but i don't wanna win,
I wanna live...
Written by Zazzles
Published 16th May 2015 1:01am
likes 12 • reading list entries 1 • comments 32 • reads 115
Trapped:
Desire never ends,
it's my destiny...
Behind these eyes are the lies only my own heart knows
Underneath my escape is the only breath I know,
and it's poison.
You know my sickness,
you know my weakness
I confess,
my bitterness
but i don't wanna win,
I wanna live...
Written by Zazzles
Published 16th May 2015 1:01am
likes 12 • reading list entries 1 • comments 32 • reads 115
J_J_Jay_Jr
Forum Posts: 218
Fire of Insight
17
Joined 20th Sep 2012Forum Posts: 218
I drink my coffee black.
Stirring sugar into it,
Is the vision I have of you,
As we sat sipping in the morning,
And the taste of your lips,
That still lingers,
Decades later.
Cream mixed in becomes,
The liquid chocolate of your skin,
Still brings tingling to mine,
And is a memory,
That delights my eyes,
Decades later.
Decades later,
Still,
Heartache,
Heartbreak,
Hurt,
Regret.
In lament,
I drink my coffee black.
ilovescarystories
Forum Posts: 159
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 7th Mar 2014Forum Posts: 159
Welcome to the freak show
Come right in don't be shy.
Please don't cry.
Just have a seat and enjoy the show.
Watch this monster climb up your legs and stroke your sweet little face.
Step inside our dark tents.
Step inside this little mirror.
As you see your little brother reaching up to you.
And pulling you down.
As he screams in your ear " help me! "
As you turn away with your thick row of razor sharp teeth.
With that thick smile on your face.
With a thick grin on your face you say " little brother welcome to the freak show"
As you let go of his hand and he falls with closed eyes into a black tent.
As you awake to your hellish reality.
And remember the phone call from the other day that said " your little brother is dead now"
With a thick frown you take a knife and throw it a mirror and scream " welcome to the freak show!"
Come right in don't be shy.
Please don't cry.
Just have a seat and enjoy the show.
Watch this monster climb up your legs and stroke your sweet little face.
Step inside our dark tents.
Step inside this little mirror.
As you see your little brother reaching up to you.
And pulling you down.
As he screams in your ear " help me! "
As you turn away with your thick row of razor sharp teeth.
With that thick smile on your face.
With a thick grin on your face you say " little brother welcome to the freak show"
As you let go of his hand and he falls with closed eyes into a black tent.
As you awake to your hellish reality.
And remember the phone call from the other day that said " your little brother is dead now"
With a thick frown you take a knife and throw it a mirror and scream " welcome to the freak show!"
ilovescarystories
Forum Posts: 159
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 7th Mar 2014Forum Posts: 159
Best friend desires
You said it would be just a game,
So I sat down next to you.
Your my friend, for I love you.
Why would you do this to me?
You tell me to close my eyes, blinded by your friendly voice.
Blinded by our past friendship, but most of all blinded by being naive.
"Close your eyes for me baby " is what you say.
As you tie me up, and say you will kill my family if I try to fight.
Holding up a silver blade, for now it's time to trade souls.
My soul becomes black with hate as I ask him,
" do you still love me baby? " I said, with a looming anger.
Trapped under your grasp, a prisoner to your darkest deepest desires.
Pulling me with your little rope like I'm a lost pet.
Touching in places, not meant to be touched.
I was so confused... You filthy bastard! I hate you!
As you come up with your hand stroking my arms , stroking my hair.
Struggling to take off the blind fold.
I cry in the darkness, which are tears ignored.
"I love you" he says, as he lays a kiss with his dirty mouth.
That's what you say now... But when you don't need me you call me a "bitch, whore, ugly, fat and weird"
As I take up my own knife and say "I loved you"
You said it would be just a game,
So I sat down next to you.
Your my friend, for I love you.
Why would you do this to me?
You tell me to close my eyes, blinded by your friendly voice.
Blinded by our past friendship, but most of all blinded by being naive.
"Close your eyes for me baby " is what you say.
As you tie me up, and say you will kill my family if I try to fight.
Holding up a silver blade, for now it's time to trade souls.
My soul becomes black with hate as I ask him,
" do you still love me baby? " I said, with a looming anger.
Trapped under your grasp, a prisoner to your darkest deepest desires.
Pulling me with your little rope like I'm a lost pet.
Touching in places, not meant to be touched.
I was so confused... You filthy bastard! I hate you!
As you come up with your hand stroking my arms , stroking my hair.
Struggling to take off the blind fold.
I cry in the darkness, which are tears ignored.
"I love you" he says, as he lays a kiss with his dirty mouth.
That's what you say now... But when you don't need me you call me a "bitch, whore, ugly, fat and weird"
As I take up my own knife and say "I loved you"
staggerlee
Paul Martin
Forum Posts: 77
Paul Martin
Thought Provoker
1
Joined 16th Nov 2013Forum Posts: 77
THE WORLD IS NOT FOR ME
No the world is not for me.
it's for suburban hitlers
who indulge in protocol wars
and middle class wives
in camaro jeeps.
No the world is not for me
but for trendy young things
and stylish hipsters.
it's for politicians, who will caress your prejudices into a vote.
or for doctors with dollar sign ethics and wallet surgeons who sign insurance plans.
or those sad soldiers that fall to their knees before a flag,
who believe killing strangers abroad will set us free.
No the world is not for me.
who shouldn't be let near paper or pen,
not with these grubby hands and beerbelly eyes.
that spend their days laying cement and nailing joists and trying to quench an unstoppable thirst.
Written by staggerlee
Published 21st June 2014 5:39am
No the world is not for me.
it's for suburban hitlers
who indulge in protocol wars
and middle class wives
in camaro jeeps.
No the world is not for me
but for trendy young things
and stylish hipsters.
it's for politicians, who will caress your prejudices into a vote.
or for doctors with dollar sign ethics and wallet surgeons who sign insurance plans.
or those sad soldiers that fall to their knees before a flag,
who believe killing strangers abroad will set us free.
No the world is not for me.
who shouldn't be let near paper or pen,
not with these grubby hands and beerbelly eyes.
that spend their days laying cement and nailing joists and trying to quench an unstoppable thirst.
Written by staggerlee
Published 21st June 2014 5:39am
lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Forum Posts: 14458
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14458
Once in a Blue Moon
Last night
I begged the sea to wash me clean.
not so loud as the company would hear.
never even used my voice.
just gazed at the tide lapping against the pier.
wishing.
Last night
I begged the sea to wash me clean.
not so loud as the company would hear.
never even used my voice.
just gazed at the tide lapping against the pier.
wishing.
napnau
Forum Posts: 253
Thought Provoker
1
Joined 13th Aug 2014Forum Posts: 253
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/199261-deep-blue-sea/
Deep Blue Sea
It was so inviting
the waves dancing
behind the shadow
of pale moonlight
like a lover’s touch
a promise of a kiss
rich and tender
that I decided
to take a dip
Only a few steps
I'm already deep
in the ocean's den
enveloping me,
weakening me in
its mighty grip
all it took is some
moments before the
flares above me
completely shut
I am drowning
unable to scream
as the salt water
slowly fills my lungs
an extreme fear
escaped my body
sinking further
into the abyss
on my destruction
There was silence
everything went black
and time stood still
then an adrenalin
suddenly kicks in
grasping for my
last breath
of mortality
Under the crimson
shade of death
my own worst enemy
I saw myself
cradling my body
desperately praying
to wake up from
this morbid dream
Deep Blue Sea
It was so inviting
the waves dancing
behind the shadow
of pale moonlight
like a lover’s touch
a promise of a kiss
rich and tender
that I decided
to take a dip
Only a few steps
I'm already deep
in the ocean's den
enveloping me,
weakening me in
its mighty grip
all it took is some
moments before the
flares above me
completely shut
I am drowning
unable to scream
as the salt water
slowly fills my lungs
an extreme fear
escaped my body
sinking further
into the abyss
on my destruction
There was silence
everything went black
and time stood still
then an adrenalin
suddenly kicks in
grasping for my
last breath
of mortality
Under the crimson
shade of death
my own worst enemy
I saw myself
cradling my body
desperately praying
to wake up from
this morbid dream
napnau
Forum Posts: 253
Thought Provoker
1
Joined 13th Aug 2014Forum Posts: 253
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/174343-the-everlasting-gaze/
The Beautiful Weight
Paint her red with a touch of pink
Pay attention to what you think
Pinch her cheeks covered in ink
And smell her breath of icy mint
Take her hand in this empty room
Bring the band as we dance soon
In cosmic rays of sun and moon
Like a wildflower quick in bloom
Treat her ill, do her wrong
Trying to prove you're high born
Always regard her with self-scorn
She took the road of fields of corn
Find your love, dressed in black
Walk in rush but cover your track
Don't stop until the cloud is dark
Then pray to God, she'll come back
You have traveled a million miles
Hoping once more to see her smile
Your feet are tired and rest awhile
As you stepped on the wrong aisle
When the cold breeze slowly lingers
You felt trap in the abyss of wonder
And the emptiness is an ice breaker
For the tame heart of the dreamer
All you can offer is your dried tears
Like acid rain pours through the years
Cloak yourself in madness you wear
And stand brave in front of spear
For the world will live tomorrow
To tell stories about Sleepy Hollow
A destitute soul of life borrowed
From the harvester of sorrow
The Beautiful Weight
Paint her red with a touch of pink
Pay attention to what you think
Pinch her cheeks covered in ink
And smell her breath of icy mint
Take her hand in this empty room
Bring the band as we dance soon
In cosmic rays of sun and moon
Like a wildflower quick in bloom
Treat her ill, do her wrong
Trying to prove you're high born
Always regard her with self-scorn
She took the road of fields of corn
Find your love, dressed in black
Walk in rush but cover your track
Don't stop until the cloud is dark
Then pray to God, she'll come back
You have traveled a million miles
Hoping once more to see her smile
Your feet are tired and rest awhile
As you stepped on the wrong aisle
When the cold breeze slowly lingers
You felt trap in the abyss of wonder
And the emptiness is an ice breaker
For the tame heart of the dreamer
All you can offer is your dried tears
Like acid rain pours through the years
Cloak yourself in madness you wear
And stand brave in front of spear
For the world will live tomorrow
To tell stories about Sleepy Hollow
A destitute soul of life borrowed
From the harvester of sorrow
PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Forum Posts: 1483
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
30
Joined 5th Dec 2012 Forum Posts: 1483
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_6Z2mTiXdSpI/TK9zQdqtRhI/AAAAAAAAAb0/h1_pKF3ryA0/s320/Broken_by_nightshadevalentine.jpg
It's... Complicated...
I wanna go,
to a place,
where no one
knows.
Some where,
that I,
can stay,
hide,
cry.
I keep hearing,
each crack of
my heart.
Echoing in chants,
bouncing of solid
dry walls.
The silence is heavy.
choking the
emptiness within me.
Capturing me.
Encumbering me.
Resuscitating me.
I want to hear
the chirp of
birds.
I wanna hear
three
simple words.
Some where,
in this... tragedy,
is the me,
I was suppose to be.
but how can I,
be the 'I'
I was?
The 'I',
before there was an..
us.
I'm furious!!
My nose is an inch
above water,
with beast like vultures
waiting,
watching
me in utter hunger.
You watch me drown,
and wait for the sound
of a screeching,
breath stopping,
time freezing
scream out loud.
and enjoy yourself with
laughter.
The thing is
you're scared,
I'm scared,
Would you like me
to write it in blood?
Huh, 'stud'?
Do you like the scars you've
burnt?
Are you really,
and truly satisfied
by the so-called hunt,
that only you
yourself
are a part of?
But wait...
in due time you will suffer
at the mercy of the truth
I will watch in
amusement,
resentment,
bewilderment,
for knowing that
you love me more than
I love you
It's... Complicated...
I wanna go,
to a place,
where no one
knows.
Some where,
that I,
can stay,
hide,
cry.
I keep hearing,
each crack of
my heart.
Echoing in chants,
bouncing of solid
dry walls.
The silence is heavy.
choking the
emptiness within me.
Capturing me.
Encumbering me.
Resuscitating me.
I want to hear
the chirp of
birds.
I wanna hear
three
simple words.
Some where,
in this... tragedy,
is the me,
I was suppose to be.
but how can I,
be the 'I'
I was?
The 'I',
before there was an..
us.
I'm furious!!
My nose is an inch
above water,
with beast like vultures
waiting,
watching
me in utter hunger.
You watch me drown,
and wait for the sound
of a screeching,
breath stopping,
time freezing
scream out loud.
and enjoy yourself with
laughter.
The thing is
you're scared,
I'm scared,
Would you like me
to write it in blood?
Huh, 'stud'?
Do you like the scars you've
burnt?
Are you really,
and truly satisfied
by the so-called hunt,
that only you
yourself
are a part of?
But wait...
in due time you will suffer
at the mercy of the truth
I will watch in
amusement,
resentment,
bewilderment,
for knowing that
you love me more than
I love you
PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Forum Posts: 1483
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
30
Joined 5th Dec 2012 Forum Posts: 1483
Seriously Though
Don't make me laugh,
I want all of you,
not only half.
You gotta be,
shitting me!!
Do I look dumb
to you?
Do you think you're
soo fucking smart?
I confessed
to you,
that I came to care.
You laughed,
and asked if I would mind...
share?
You are sick to your mind,
and probably have shit
for brains.
I'm not here to plead
Nor am I here to beg.
You aren't the first.
You aren't the last.
So do me a big favor,
and take your head out
your ass.
Here's the 'finger',
for your delusions.
Stick it up where the sun,
doesn't give radiation.
You are just a complete moron.
I'm more in disbelief,
than furious.
I would have never thought you'd
say some thing like that!!
You seriously, could not be Serious...
Don't make me laugh,
I want all of you,
not only half.
You gotta be,
shitting me!!
Do I look dumb
to you?
Do you think you're
soo fucking smart?
I confessed
to you,
that I came to care.
You laughed,
and asked if I would mind...
share?
You are sick to your mind,
and probably have shit
for brains.
I'm not here to plead
Nor am I here to beg.
You aren't the first.
You aren't the last.
So do me a big favor,
and take your head out
your ass.
Here's the 'finger',
for your delusions.
Stick it up where the sun,
doesn't give radiation.
You are just a complete moron.
I'm more in disbelief,
than furious.
I would have never thought you'd
say some thing like that!!
You seriously, could not be Serious...
case28
Alexander Case
Forum Posts: 2077
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 16th June 2013Forum Posts: 2077
The Art of Not Giving A Fuck
I don't care
if you heard a word I said
when I asked you to leave
and I don't give a
that you didn't take your boots off
at the front door and walked mud
through my home
I certainly didn't give a
when you flicked through my photo albums
and left empty spaces
where pictures of my daughter
were once placed
and I didn't give a fuck
that my neighbours called the sherif
when they saw you drive off in my pickup
then pull over down by the edge of the woods
to douse my wheels with gasoline
then walk away with your back turned
my pickup burning to hell
I don't give a fuck
if the sherif catches up with you
or if my insurance
comes good with the claim
because I don't give a fuck
if they found my keys in the ignition
I'm more concerned
with the bug guts stuck
in the waffles of my boots
than giving a fuck about the leeches
sucking my blood
from between my toes
Written by Alexander Case
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/195328-the-art-of-not-giving-a-fuck/
Anonymous
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/204318-jesus-loves-you/
Jesus Loves You
Death
text me this morning
and asked if I was ready to go?
Heaven
text me later that morning
and said, 'Jesus Loves You.'
Instead
of slitting my wrists,
I perfumed them.
Jesus Loves You
Death
text me this morning
and asked if I was ready to go?
Heaven
text me later that morning
and said, 'Jesus Loves You.'
Instead
of slitting my wrists,
I perfumed them.
Anonymous
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/205713-pistoleros/
Pistoleros
they chased with a vengeance ~
fifteen days
three counties
two states
now they were face-to-face
in a rundown Mexican town ~
two guns drawn
one sun high
he wanted an answer
for the near bullet in his chest
but the woman
in the strapless yellow dress
wouldn't confess only that he knew
that she knew every vulgar curve
in the injustice of his tongue;
every immoral detail in the bowels of his guns;
the son of a bitch, the bastard
of a bastard's son
and that they were just but one
loaded chamber away
from a legend ~
a shot echoes
birds scatter
the wind
rustles
Pistoleros
they chased with a vengeance ~
fifteen days
three counties
two states
now they were face-to-face
in a rundown Mexican town ~
two guns drawn
one sun high
he wanted an answer
for the near bullet in his chest
but the woman
in the strapless yellow dress
wouldn't confess only that he knew
that she knew every vulgar curve
in the injustice of his tongue;
every immoral detail in the bowels of his guns;
the son of a bitch, the bastard
of a bastard's son
and that they were just but one
loaded chamber away
from a legend ~
a shot echoes
birds scatter
the wind
rustles
ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
Forum Posts: 1347
The Gardener
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 10th Oct 2010Forum Posts: 1347
Pansexuality ! extreme content !
Please forgive me but I enjoy flesh and
I enjoy your face, your voice, your style.
I don't see genitalia.
It will never matter the piece of meat you were born to.
It will never matter how you play or what positions you like or what your fetish is.
I am free to choose
as we all are.
I am free to choose you regardless of your breeding
and regardless of the X's and the Y's.
Oh, love,
as I bring you to orgasm
your chromosomes will not cross my mind.
As I bring you to orgasm,
I won't fear
any squirting
swallowing
shaking
screaming
biting
scratching
begging
silence.
If anything your individual nature
and understanding your soul excites me.
I am not greedy.
I have never understood why
I should make a choice based on the outside
when everything is interesting within you. I have kissed
women and made boys cry,
I have kissed men and broken young girls hearts.
Though that was never my intention. It was my youth and I had to figure this thing out for myself.
I'm hungry for someone else
who sees the soul.
I'm hungry for someone
who fascinates every inch of my being
and flesh. I'm hungry for someone who sets me alight.
Someone who makes me gay, who makes me easy - as relaxed as a
down pillow.
No rocky plain would stop me getting to you.
No argument would make me too proud.
No story would make me doubt,
deceive or distrust you.
That is love.
That is love
regardless of the odds and the games and the favours.
That is love
regardless of others beliefs and their motives and our young, 'natural', taught gratification.
And, if I had to break, only you could do it.
Please forgive me but I enjoy flesh and
I enjoy your face, your voice, your style.
I don't see genitalia.
It will never matter the piece of meat you were born to.
It will never matter how you play or what positions you like or what your fetish is.
I am free to choose
as we all are.
I am free to choose you regardless of your breeding
and regardless of the X's and the Y's.
Oh, love,
as I bring you to orgasm
your chromosomes will not cross my mind.
As I bring you to orgasm,
I won't fear
any squirting
swallowing
shaking
screaming
biting
scratching
begging
silence.
If anything your individual nature
and understanding your soul excites me.
I am not greedy.
I have never understood why
I should make a choice based on the outside
when everything is interesting within you. I have kissed
women and made boys cry,
I have kissed men and broken young girls hearts.
Though that was never my intention. It was my youth and I had to figure this thing out for myself.
I'm hungry for someone else
who sees the soul.
I'm hungry for someone
who fascinates every inch of my being
and flesh. I'm hungry for someone who sets me alight.
Someone who makes me gay, who makes me easy - as relaxed as a
down pillow.
No rocky plain would stop me getting to you.
No argument would make me too proud.
No story would make me doubt,
deceive or distrust you.
That is love.
That is love
regardless of the odds and the games and the favours.
That is love
regardless of others beliefs and their motives and our young, 'natural', taught gratification.
And, if I had to break, only you could do it.