Poem about a du user or friend
Lena-underneath
Forum Posts: 71
Fire of Insight
8
Joined 14th Feb 2014Forum Posts: 71
The Wordsmith
We entrusted sorrows awakening spirits
breathing rhythm beyond any verse, etched
in mortal world to the gleam of diamonds
glittering to Prometheus' heaven
Patchwork of hearts glowed with miracles
brushed with grace and tender strokes
unfurling tapestry dappled with splinters
beneath maelstroms of tears and laughter
Bind with trust, reflecting northern lights
golden memories merged celebrating life
cradling pains from solitary depths of
iridescent pearls, offerings of salts
From seven fulsome seas, brimming
with hope and feathery wrought
in the light of thousand silvery moons
poetry burned, inhaling truth untold
* For Vee, since she was the last to post a poem*
We entrusted sorrows awakening spirits
breathing rhythm beyond any verse, etched
in mortal world to the gleam of diamonds
glittering to Prometheus' heaven
Patchwork of hearts glowed with miracles
brushed with grace and tender strokes
unfurling tapestry dappled with splinters
beneath maelstroms of tears and laughter
Bind with trust, reflecting northern lights
golden memories merged celebrating life
cradling pains from solitary depths of
iridescent pearls, offerings of salts
From seven fulsome seas, brimming
with hope and feathery wrought
in the light of thousand silvery moons
poetry burned, inhaling truth untold
* For Vee, since she was the last to post a poem*
seekingkate
kateA
Forum Posts: 2079
kateA
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 20th May 2014 Forum Posts: 2079
A Woman to Admire
I've not read all your words
Yet those I have lure me to a world I've not fully explored
Poets of old linger in the air
When out of my mouth your words unfold
You say your underneath
But that I cannot believe
A woman emanating such strength
Is a success in whatever she chooses to achieve
The picture you paint in your profile
Is one that inspires
To be who we are, not what's expected of us
Lena-underneath, a sister, a woman to admire
For Lena, the poet above...
I've not read all your words
Yet those I have lure me to a world I've not fully explored
Poets of old linger in the air
When out of my mouth your words unfold
You say your underneath
But that I cannot believe
A woman emanating such strength
Is a success in whatever she chooses to achieve
The picture you paint in your profile
Is one that inspires
To be who we are, not what's expected of us
Lena-underneath, a sister, a woman to admire
For Lena, the poet above...
Savaja
Forum Posts: 186
Dangerous Mind
11
Joined 30th June 2014Forum Posts: 186
GeniusGirl
with
superBITCHpowers
For those of you not in the know
those entail:
B Being
I In
T Total
C Charge of
H Herself
I am always going to be filled with
Respect
Admiration
Wonder
Love
and, honestly, no small amount of
Attraction
for
one
of
the
Very Most Courageous
I've
had
the
distinct privilege to grow to know for
in
spite
of
all
the
reasons
why
not
to
You chose the wondrous terror
of Freedom
over the senseless brutality
of a familiar cage
GeniusGirl
With
superBITCHpowers
You're
A
Marvel;
Superhero
Woman
Of
The
Age
For seekingkate
*BITCH excerpt from her poem entitled B-I-T-C-H
with
superBITCHpowers
For those of you not in the know
those entail:
B Being
I In
T Total
C Charge of
H Herself
I am always going to be filled with
Respect
Admiration
Wonder
Love
and, honestly, no small amount of
Attraction
for
one
of
the
Very Most Courageous
I've
had
the
distinct privilege to grow to know for
in
spite
of
all
the
reasons
why
not
to
You chose the wondrous terror
of Freedom
over the senseless brutality
of a familiar cage
GeniusGirl
With
superBITCHpowers
You're
A
Marvel;
Superhero
Woman
Of
The
Age
For seekingkate
*BITCH excerpt from her poem entitled B-I-T-C-H
Anonymous
Congratulations :)
MadameLavender
Forum Posts: 5598
Guardian of Shadows
87
Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5598
Congrats
LobodeSanPedro
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words
109
Joined 16th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 3304
Lots of great entries on great people ... Congrats to all who wrote for this
Anonymous
Yes it was hard to pick, and it seems someone got mad at me and blocked me as well, however i did put some rules that were not respected, reason for the pick, so don't feel mad because your poem was good like the most but did not win. Regards.
seekingkate
kateA
Forum Posts: 2079
kateA
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 20th May 2014 Forum Posts: 2079
Congrats to the winners, lolnotfunny, Solomon and Derrick....and congrats to all who entered...enjoyed the read
IronFears...your prompt judging of these words is to be commended...
IronFears...your prompt judging of these words is to be commended...
Savaja
Forum Posts: 186
Dangerous Mind
11
Joined 30th June 2014Forum Posts: 186
Wow! IronFears, luv :-* that was rapid; I had not realized the judging was complete! I am impressed by your incisive decisiveness. ;-* Thank you for providing this contest. Twas a delight.
Congratulations lolnotfunny on the win! :-* Congratulations Solomon_Song and Derrick, runners-up! :-*
I'm honored to have been in this company of writers...
Congratulations lolnotfunny on the win! :-* Congratulations Solomon_Song and Derrick, runners-up! :-*
I'm honored to have been in this company of writers...
HadesRising
Forum Posts: 1616
Tyrant of Words
34
Joined 8th June 2013Forum Posts: 1616
Regardless of who the winners were this was an enjoyable competition. Thanks for all the love everyone.
Lena-underneath
Forum Posts: 71
Fire of Insight
8
Joined 14th Feb 2014Forum Posts: 71
Congratulations to lolnotfunny, Solomon and Derrick! The comp was fun and it's always a pleasure to participate among awesome writers.
I have to send an extra "shout-out" to KateA for a tear jerking tribute unexpected and touching ; )
I have to send an extra "shout-out" to KateA for a tear jerking tribute unexpected and touching ; )