Poetry competition CLOSED 26th July 2015 9:09pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
LobodeSanPedro
and HadesRising
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DevlinDLC said:Eroticism de Satanism in the Garden of Eden
Satan ~
You don't know
these precious little jungles
in my head-head
swell. bob. cum. spit.
when I nail you to my bed, three corners,
like your Jesus on the cross
bound. naked. angelic. traitor.
you will cry. yes, you will cry. you must cry.
to prove you have a soul, cursed
virgin worthy for Satan's penance
all in the name to bear thee demonic fruit
in the form of blooms in the tree of immortality.
Antichristus ~
'shh', listen closely
to the pitter-patter of red devil feet
rhythming past you on walking bellies scorned;
and just as I splice into you
and dismember your holy foulness
your willingness to submit to blasphemy
will devour me in, gently,
and sever my member
to rot eternally
in a womb encased in a bludgeoned tomb.
Diabolus ~
your vaginal wonder
pledges allegiance to my cum:
'One nation under Satan'
atheism.
anarchy.
political debates.
minority hate.
god, country, rape.
and justice for evil
or live for justice?
I slip one talon finger
into your lapsed-catholic mouth
and finger fuck your ill-religious tongue just
until the weight of your bible's oral-gasm
bleeds saliva cum wafer black.
Pridie ~
you tear down your cinematic virgin walls
and naked in a room of man and meek
you stand before me
vagina. breasts. rectum. mouth.
in no particular disorder
as you hold still within my approaching storm
readying the spiked jagged flogger
matching the cuff around your neck.
I shall strike you once, then twice
to add brilliance and magnificence
to your pornographic demonessas
radiating desperately from inside you.
Adam ~
and later tonight
your lips will part
a red serpent sea
and I will drown within,
fucked
as your blistering red
soiled sap
disbands the beasts
lingering beneath the thrashed
of plaguing foreskins
exorcisming post-demon lust
and to Hell we return,
in the Garden of Eden, cleansed.
Bloody Hell Devlin this is a masterpiece
Satan ~
You don't know
these precious little jungles
in my head-head
swell. bob. cum. spit.
when I nail you to my bed, three corners,
like your Jesus on the cross
bound. naked. angelic. traitor.
you will cry. yes, you will cry. you must cry.
to prove you have a soul, cursed
virgin worthy for Satan's penance
all in the name to bear thee demonic fruit
in the form of blooms in the tree of immortality.
Antichristus ~
'shh', listen closely
to the pitter-patter of red devil feet
rhythming past you on walking bellies scorned;
and just as I splice into you
and dismember your holy foulness
your willingness to submit to blasphemy
will devour me in, gently,
and sever my member
to rot eternally
in a womb encased in a bludgeoned tomb.
Diabolus ~
your vaginal wonder
pledges allegiance to my cum:
'One nation under Satan'
atheism.
anarchy.
political debates.
minority hate.
god, country, rape.
and justice for evil
or live for justice?
I slip one talon finger
into your lapsed-catholic mouth
and finger fuck your ill-religious tongue just
until the weight of your bible's oral-gasm
bleeds saliva cum wafer black.
Pridie ~
you tear down your cinematic virgin walls
and naked in a room of man and meek
you stand before me
vagina. breasts. rectum. mouth.
in no particular disorder
as you hold still within my approaching storm
readying the spiked jagged flogger
matching the cuff around your neck.
I shall strike you once, then twice
to add brilliance and magnificence
to your pornographic demonessas
radiating desperately from inside you.
Adam ~
and later tonight
your lips will part
a red serpent sea
and I will drown within,
fucked
as your blistering red
soiled sap
disbands the beasts
lingering beneath the thrashed
of plaguing foreskins
exorcisming post-demon lust
and to Hell we return,
in the Garden of Eden, cleansed.
Bloody Hell Devlin this is a masterpiece
This comp ends this afternoon. Start submitting your votes into my inbox as soon as you get the time. I'll start tallying them up as soon as they start coming in. I'll have the winner posted in a day or two. May the most horrifying win!
Reflections of a Pissed Off Killown
"Asshole," is what junior murmured under his breath
All because I wouldn't make the little snot another balloon poodle
Here's the Crayolas, there's the corner
Be a good boy and just go doodle
Doesn't junior know the hole is what I'll put in his mother's ass at one time or another
Cause if I fucked her straight up
I might get idiots kids like him and his shit little brother
It's the same routine, gig after gig
With the same fuckin' painted on smile
Say something funny
Juggle some knives
Take a picture with a child
Same routine of Vicodin,
Valium and Viagra for all these shitty people to get past their shitty lies
I see right past their facade with these painted Bozo eyes
I can smell the rancor of suburban bliss on some of them even with my big rubber nose
The skin of lepers disguised in preposterous designer clothes
They wear it like armor to tell their friends from their foes
I can tell the blonde milf there with the paid for jugs is married to a lawyer or some broker schmuck
Now she's tired of the same 15 year choreographed seven minute fuck
I give her the naughty clown wink and nod towards my size 24 boats
Know what they say about a man and his shoes
No more singing, The Unsatisfied Housewife Blues
But here boys and girls is where the real party begins
The jack-in-the-box in this sin of sins
See, she gets to ride this Mad Hatter as part of some twisted fantasy fuck
While hubby is bound and gagged in my rainbow painted truck
I give the poor esquire a chance to make me laugh
I ask, "Who's your favorite clown,
the one with the biggest gaff?!"
When his trembling lips sputter a name
I take scalpel and razors to face
to make him one and the same
I've done five Bozos, three Ronalds
And a Homey to boot
Two Krustys, a Clarabell,
And a Charlie Chalk for some British snoot
With each laughing face carved to bloody perfection
I feel the rise of yet another clowned size erection
But this time I'll do his mistress with my new found resurrection
A simple slit of his throat is then all that is required
Ungrateful bastard didn't say I was his favorite
which was all that I desired
I dispose of the body with the same ease in which I toot-toot my horn
This one'll be buried at the cemetery in Fairlawn
It's not a hard dig, just three feet or so
The sod already softened from the previous show
I bury them on top of someone just laid to rest
Face down, this way the lawyer does what he does best
Fuck the world with worms in his chest
Toot-fuckin-toot
"Asshole," is what junior murmured under his breath
All because I wouldn't make the little snot another balloon poodle
Here's the Crayolas, there's the corner
Be a good boy and just go doodle
Doesn't junior know the hole is what I'll put in his mother's ass at one time or another
Cause if I fucked her straight up
I might get idiots kids like him and his shit little brother
It's the same routine, gig after gig
With the same fuckin' painted on smile
Say something funny
Juggle some knives
Take a picture with a child
Same routine of Vicodin,
Valium and Viagra for all these shitty people to get past their shitty lies
I see right past their facade with these painted Bozo eyes
I can smell the rancor of suburban bliss on some of them even with my big rubber nose
The skin of lepers disguised in preposterous designer clothes
They wear it like armor to tell their friends from their foes
I can tell the blonde milf there with the paid for jugs is married to a lawyer or some broker schmuck
Now she's tired of the same 15 year choreographed seven minute fuck
I give her the naughty clown wink and nod towards my size 24 boats
Know what they say about a man and his shoes
No more singing, The Unsatisfied Housewife Blues
But here boys and girls is where the real party begins
The jack-in-the-box in this sin of sins
See, she gets to ride this Mad Hatter as part of some twisted fantasy fuck
While hubby is bound and gagged in my rainbow painted truck
I give the poor esquire a chance to make me laugh
I ask, "Who's your favorite clown,
the one with the biggest gaff?!"
When his trembling lips sputter a name
I take scalpel and razors to face
to make him one and the same
I've done five Bozos, three Ronalds
And a Homey to boot
Two Krustys, a Clarabell,
And a Charlie Chalk for some British snoot
With each laughing face carved to bloody perfection
I feel the rise of yet another clowned size erection
But this time I'll do his mistress with my new found resurrection
A simple slit of his throat is then all that is required
Ungrateful bastard didn't say I was his favorite
which was all that I desired
I dispose of the body with the same ease in which I toot-toot my horn
This one'll be buried at the cemetery in Fairlawn
It's not a hard dig, just three feet or so
The sod already softened from the previous show
I bury them on top of someone just laid to rest
Face down, this way the lawyer does what he does best
Fuck the world with worms in his chest
Toot-fuckin-toot
todd
zoophilous screams amplify snot bubbles
that tremble and pop
blood
semen
piss
coagulating at your knees
making my feet sticky
the fly stuck on spiraled paper above you
yet I am the butcher in this meat house too
And "no ... I won't make it quick"
"because you taste best warm"
zoophilous screams amplify snot bubbles
that tremble and pop
blood
semen
piss
coagulating at your knees
making my feet sticky
the fly stuck on spiraled paper above you
yet I am the butcher in this meat house too
And "no ... I won't make it quick"
"because you taste best warm"
I have sent reminders to all you participants who haven't already voted yet. Thanks again to those of you who have! Best of luck to all of you, I had fun reading all of your work. I'll be back soon with the the winner, let's say Friday. I'll tally up the votes I have and bring the news.
Thank you to those of you who voted. It took a little longer that I had hoped but all the votes are in! And by unanimous decision The winner is, DevlinDLC, for 'Eroticism de Satanism in the Garden of Eden' and our runner up is, LobodeSanPedro, for 'Todd'. And a special thanks to, HadesRising, for 'Knock Knock'! I enjoyed all the pieces submitted but ultimately the decision came down to all of you. Nice job folks and congratulations to DevlinDLC!!!
Anonymous
Sorry guys. . .But I AM SPEECHLESS. . .
Sir Violence. . .Excellent comp. . .THANK YOU for awarding me the Trophy on behalf of those who voted for my poem. I'd cry, but I have to save my tears for Hell (seeing that I'm getting there real quick considering the poetry I've been writing lately).
King Hades and Senor Lobo. . .loved both your entries, and congrats for sharing the winner's circle with me
.
Again, Thanks to those who voted for me!
Violence, until we meet again. . .
!
Sir Violence. . .Excellent comp. . .THANK YOU for awarding me the Trophy on behalf of those who voted for my poem. I'd cry, but I have to save my tears for Hell (seeing that I'm getting there real quick considering the poetry I've been writing lately
). King Hades and Senor Lobo. . .loved both your entries, and congrats for sharing the winner's circle with me
. Again, Thanks to those who voted for me!
Violence, until we meet again. . .
! 
