Poetry competition CLOSED 9th June 2015 5:41am
WINNER
Anonymous
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RUNNER-UP: seekingkate

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Noir Haiku (Women's Comp)

poet Anonymous

Poetry Contest

see comp info below
Two Haiku Entry Max per Poetress
5-7-5 is the syllabus count
Keep it 'Noir'
One Week to Complete
Have Fun!


example:
'beneath Whiskey Moon
I gave him the kiss of death ~
sirens hound the blues'


poet Anonymous

he hides behind smoke,
but he can’t mask those dark lips
tasting like a threat

poet Anonymous

Miss Minerva. . .Thanks for starting this comp off!

poet Anonymous

Smoke and shadow claw,
copulate in sirens’ spin
bleed sin on brick wall  


seekingkate
kateA
Tyrant of Words
Australia 28awards
Joined 20th May 2014
Forum Posts: 2079


his words are his hook
emotional con artist
the name he should wear





Magnumgal
Lost Thinker
1awards
Joined 3rd Apr 2015
Forum Posts: 18

  Death shall follow him,
His Lies don't hide his greedy ways,
 hunting for a thrill.

  A fallen warrior,
The traitor beyond our lines,
 A lost friend in war.

Forgive me, I am not very good at doing Noir haiku.

poet Anonymous

his kisses were a
smoking gun against her lips,
she bit the bullet

poet Anonymous

those bourbon whispers
burned her tongue when she swallowed
his well aged lies

poet Anonymous

Earth_Child said:those bourbon whispers
burned her tongue when she swallowed
his well aged lies


!!!!!!! oh my. oh my, oh my!

Lena-underneath
Fire of Insight
United States 8awards
Joined 14th Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 71

his whispers vibrate
rattling the chains of love
tremors richter deep

poet Anonymous

Scintillating smoke,
his whispers webbed her fortress,
crumbling stone gargoyles

DeathnoteWhovian
Thought Provoker
United Kingdom 2awards
Joined 7th Mar 2015
Forum Posts: 33

I couldn't find the delete button ... But I took back my entry :D

poet Anonymous

Smoke hollows the bones,
Moonlight scalds the breath you capture.
Singeing calllousced lips.

poet Anonymous

Crisp amber captured the wind,
Burning the forgotten sins.
Like ashes fallen.

seekingkate
kateA
Tyrant of Words
Australia 28awards
Joined 20th May 2014
Forum Posts: 2079


Passion fills her soul
He leaves emotionally
And closes the door

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