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DISS THE ONE BEFORE YOU

druidicheirophant
AVARIS DEMALO
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 27th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 194

Poetry Contest

DISS THE ONE BEFORE YOU
STARTING WITH A SELF PROCLAIMED BLACK MASTER OF THIS UNDERGROUND OF DUP UNDERGROUND, PROCLAIM DOMINION -- FOR THOSE FOLLOWING DISS THE ONE WHO POSTED BEFORE YOU -- HURT FEELINGS -- IF YOU NEED AN IDEA LOOK AT THE LAST DISSES I POSTED IN MY POEMS FROM BATTLES I HAVE HAD IN THE PAST

hardallover
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 20th Mar 2011
Forum Posts: 62



yo, this idea is weak,
is your brain so fucked
you can't even think?
spend some time
use your mind
and test these mother fuckers
that like to rhyme
now I'm gonna post anyway-
but you should take this
whack shit down today
grow some hair on your balls
and write like a man not a bay-bay













Aten
Paean of Deviance
Lost Thinker
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Joined 25th Apr 2015
Forum Posts: 61

Jamie Mileto
Namely, feminine
Probably wears stilettos
And smells of cinnamon
Let go, Ghetto wannabe-
Move over as the people honor me
Honorably as their new King of the underground scene
I'm the most revered phenom
This town's seen in a while
You're a steaming pile
A renowned fiend with cliche style
Bile reeks in your profile
How foul
Illusory babbling of being an alien race, space child
I shapeshift in my makeshift spaceship
I'm a real alien that takes trips
And sees through your fake script
Plasma blaster makes your terribly shaped face rip
Aesop's fables are dwarfed by my misadventures
Nuclear winters resulted from my expenditures
Perhaps, I should have loaned you some krone for your dentures
Enter the void
Smoke that entheogenic alkaloid
Overjoyed when your false reality is destroyed
I admit
Im a bit annoyed by this caucasoid mongoloid
Falsely proclaiming to be a reptoid
Or whatever nonsensical tabloid that is eerily schizoid
Dethrone thyself
So I can continue usurping my wealth
Without wasting my breath



Krosgood
Violence
Thought Provoker
United States 12awards
Joined 21st Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 163

Aten?
Not yet
I like to play with my food before it gets masticatory wet
To watch you struggle and cry as I carve out small bites
I start with cuts and end it with a slice

What's all the talk about an alien race?
You really think you come from different regions of space?
Welcome to earth bro, now here's a little taste
I'm 'bout to drag you to hell; to my own haunted place
To where your pleas for mercy are drowned out by screams
Down here I'm the real king of the true underground scene
Bedazzled
Bejeweled
You're more like a queen
Welcome to my world
This ain't no dream

I've tortured radio-pop catchphrase pilfering little hip-hop punks like you for days on end
Driven drumsticks through skulls with distortion pedals just to let some real music in
A guttural growl crawls from my throat, beating death metal blasts with their heads till they broke
I'm serious yo
Give up all hope
I'm a fuckin metal junkie
Rap a joke

You just keep thinkin that you're alright
Safe at your moms house with the doors latched tight
But I'll lure you into my trap tonight
With fat white girl bait named Kryptonite


DystopianMelody
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 9awards
Joined 9th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1391

Your a cunt.

poet Anonymous


Oh my god your raps have no power
this is my game here
go home while youre lower
your end is near
and dick jokes, so much slower
call my words pathetic well look whos talking
your silence is stunned while i keep walking
bicycles are weak like your knees
so bow down motherfucker
get further down than roots of trees
im stronger than your brother
your rhymes so weak
i might have cum on my cheeks
at least it wasnt from the walking STD down the street
so lay down your icon
it's ironic anyway
sit down shut up this aint your game to play

poet Anonymous

Throw down your sick fires,
you think you'll win,
i know you're a liar
cause my words prick like a pin
im hotter than wire, battling me is a treat
i clear the street without single repeat
you have no confidence
to you my name and fear are too synonymous
so back down motherfiucker while youre still on your feet
or ill bog you down in my rhyme peat
your lines are nonsense
spouted by a motherfucker not worth the penance

druidicheirophant
AVARIS DEMALO
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 27th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 194

ATEN,
I COME FROM THE CAUCASUS MOUNTAINS,
WITH ANUNNAKI DARK GODS,
IM FROM THE ANATOLIAN COAST,
ANCIENT CITY OF MILETOS,
CALL US THE HYKSOS,
DESCENDANT OF AKHENATON,
WHERE YOU THINK YOU GOT THE EGYPTIAN GOD ATON,
ALTHOUGH I GOT BLACK FRIENDS,
DON'T FORGET WHAT HAPPENS WHEN ONE TESTS,
THE CRESTS,
OF THOSE BARBARIC CLANS FROM THE WEST,
DARK CULTS BARBARIANS AND REPTILIANS,
YES,
ALL THE NATIVES ALL OVER THE EARTH,
GOT INVADED RAPED,
PILLAGED AND CURSED,
US ATONISTS WORSHIP ADONIS,
IM OF THE MOST HIGH,
BLOODLINE MALIGN,
INVOKE ADONAI,
BARBARIAN GOTHS,
KILL ALL Y'ALL OFF,
THAN OFFER YOU UP TO YALDABOATH,
IM A DARK PRIEST BEAST CROSSBREED,
GOT THE SPLICED GENES,
OF OLD DEMI GOD BEINGS,
THE GNOSIS I WILL SHARE,
BUT WHEN IT COMES TO WARFARE,
MY BLACK CRAFTS OF WRATH,
CAST YOU TO A DARK LAIR,
GHETTO WANNABE? I'M HEATHEN,
I'M AM A NEPHILIM MILESIAN,
SPEAKING OF THE KHAZAR MIDDLE EAST BLOODLINES,
THESE BREEDS OF DARK SERPENT SEEDS,
ARE MALIGNED,
SEMI DIVINE,
AND SERPENTINE,
SLITHERY LIKE A SNAKE,
OWLS VISIT ME AND I'M HAUNTED BY THESE DRAKES,
MISUNDERSTOOD?
OH,
YOU DON'T KNOW,
WHAT REALLY HAPPENED WITH THE BABYLONIAN BROTHERHOODS,
I'LL ADMIT IT NOWADAYS,
US SONS OF CAIN, ARE IN FALLEN STATES,
I'M FROM THE UNDERWORLD OF DARK ENTITIES THAT CAN EASILY MANIPULATE YOUR FATE,
THERE IS NOT MANY OF US LEFT,
BUT DON'T FORGET,
WHERECOMES THE REAL DARKNESS OF SETH,
WE CREATED THE GHETTOS ALL OVER THIS EARTH,
I SHIP IN THE DRUGS AND PUT Y'ALL BEHIND BARS THAT'S YOUR WORTH,
LET ME NOT MENTION THE BLACK MAGICIANS FROM MEDEA,
GIVING YOU ALL THIS LUCIFERIAN WITCHCRAFT IN YOUR MEDIA,
DON'T MEAN TO ADMIT YOUR RACE IS HACKED,
BUT IT AFFECTS ALL OF US THIS IS FACTS,
BUT JUST KNOW,
WHEREFROM THE DARKNESS COMES FROM AND THAN GOES,
NOT AFRICANS,
BUT THE NEPHILIM OUTPOSTS ON THE NORTH AFRICAN COAST,
EVIL IS NOT SUPERIOR SO I DON'T MEAN TO BOAST,
BUT LOOK INTO THE REAL HISTORIES,
I RESPECT Y'ALL BUT DON'T GET THE SHIT TWISTED G,
Y'ALL AIN'T THE SOURCE OF ANY EARTHLY WITCHERY,
WE GOT CAHOOTS THAT WILL HAVE YOUR MIND BLOWN,
ANGELIC CONFEDERACIES FROM THE OLD TIME ZONES,
OUR DOMINION AND REIGN,
SPREADS THIS OVERLORDSHIP OF CAIN,
SPREAD TENTACLES ALL OVER EARTHLY DOMAINS,
WE AVARICIOUS WE FROM AVARIS,
WE MILITARISTIC WE FROM MILETUS,
US MEDIUMISTIC MEDES FROM MEDEA ARE FALLEN SOULS OF SEERS,
WE OVERSEER,
WE OVER SEE YOUR,
PATHETIC DEMEANOR,
DON'T MAKE ME ACT MEANER,
WE SPREAD DOMINION "MEDICINE" AND FEAR,
I WILL MEDICATE YOU OUT OF EXISTENCE,
THE "WANNABE GHETTO" PART REALLY DID IT,
YOUR A SUITE FOR MY ENERGY,
YEARS AGO I WAS RHYMING SHIT YOU SAY THAT I SEE,
MONGOLOIDS SCHIZOID REPTOID,
OLD STORY OF WHAT HAPPENED DON'T MAKE ME FUCKING ANNOYED,
FEEL BAD FOR THOSE THAT WANT TO BE MY ENEMIES,
I GOT CAHOOTS WITH TOO MANY POWERFUL ENTITIES,
POOR LESSER G,
THOUGHT HIS EGO COULD TEST ME,
CRACK HIS FACE WITH A SLEDGE HEAVILY,
HE WILL SOON BE DEAD,
PHYSICALLY THAN SPIRITUALLY,
BLOOD OUT HIS HEAD MESSILY,
I GET EXCITED WHEN SOME HOMIES TRY TESTING ME,
THERE BIG HEIRARCHIES OUT THERE,
DON'T MAKE VEX A G,
LEAVE YOU HEXED AS A LESSERLY,
LEARN FROM ME,
THE DISEASE AND ALL THE UNHEAVENLY,
YOU SEE,
IN THE SLUMS OF THIS EARTH,
MANIFEST FROM ME,
I'M WITH MILESIANS FROM SPAIN,
THAT CAUSE UNTOLD DREAD,
IN THE ANCIENT DAYS CAUSE OF MY RACE THIS PLACE,
WAS KNOWN AS THE LAND OF THE DEAD















poet Anonymous

my words are ice and will never be nice
ill own you twice with one roll of the dice
this stoic face hides a wicked grin
i own my wishes like a djinn
you cant comprehend the amount of sin
im pusing you out onto ice too thin
ive got you by your skin
so step back for the rhyme master cause youll never win
ive got words in my bones so take it on the chin
because im drowning you in rhyme gin
beat this man, i have your blood scattered to berlin
and im chargin
ive got you down and youre cryin
because this fire kicked your shin
roll away like schwin
cause youre not gonna win this is my game and always has been

band_head99
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 23rd Dec 2013
Forum Posts: 6

Falling for you while thinking that you're the one
sometimes you make me feel the fear o not being wanted
loving you when you barely love me
you having fucking searching for answers oh so desperately
if i died today you wouldn't even care
come time for my funeral, you wouldn't fucking be there
Giving you everything just to be broken
You still don't know of the pain unspoken

mkboy666
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 29th Jan 2014
Forum Posts: 6

Okay man, stop being whack.
We don't care about your emotional or you funeral at that.
So why don't you go back to smoking crack?
"you still don't know of the pain of the unspoken"?
All you're doing is whining like a bitch, why couldn't you remain unspoken.
That's not fear you feel, man it's the truth.
You're less wanted than a 90 year old at a kissing booth.

poet Anonymous

Come on now, you call that rap?
Shut your suck hole with the fucking crap!
And I have your little boy 666
The devil can slurp on long hard glass dick
And if I have some extra time to waste
I'll blast a giant wad of some spunk for you to taste:)

mkboy666
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 29th Jan 2014
Forum Posts: 6

Someone came to battle, but he ain't a enigma.
Mystical my ass, you're just a stigma.
Within six lines you blew a wad.
I know you came for me, but kinda quick.
Maybe that's why yo bitch is on my dick.
They call me 666 and I'm here to stay,
Come on enigma, let's play

poet Anonymous

They should call you waste of
As in oxygen
Checking for signs of a brain
But you ain't got one
So I'm an an enigma or I'm not?
From first line to seventh you already forgot..lol
Do us a favor and quit wasting space
Quit being a pussy and squeeze that trigger
But make sure you point it where it belongs
Right at your own ugly ass face
And check yourself, cause I am a bitch..
so i couldn't have one on your shriveled little dick

mkboy666
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 29th Jan 2014
Forum Posts: 6

So you stayed to battle, that's new to me.
I'll brand you like cattle, it's simple to see.
You may be a enigma, I'll give you that.
But I'm the devil mixed the fucking cat in the hat.
Thing 1, Thing 2, guess you're Thing 3.
Wait, you're a bitch?
I'll tell you want to do.
Come here, bend over and I'll put a dick in you.
You fucked yourself by battling.
I think you should know.
Your last rap was tight, that's the truth.
Now let's see if you can raise the roof.

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