Poetry competition CLOSED 14th April 2015 11:55pm
WINNER
seekingkate (kateA)
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RUNNERS-UP: hardallover and snugglebuck

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HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
United States 34awards
Joined 8th June 2013
Forum Posts: 1617

THE WILL OF SET

Spiraling in madness
An idea for sacrifice
To offer onto altars
For my chosen God
Morsels delectable
Meaty and divine
Choices are limited
Why can't I find
Proper offerings?

Idols sculpted nightly
Reflecting sacrifice
Cast out discarded
In reverent wastes
Lesson lacerations
Are repercussions
For my utmost failure
My damnation
For my shortcomings

The hiss of a deity
The claws reprimand
Lowly servant
Your will, my command

Sacraments
Made in bonded time
When man needs a god
To feel complete

Offerings laid on plates
Tuna, beef, sacrifice
Poultry perfectly
Season to purrfection
Feline salivation
Leads to salvation
I offer something more
Some Temptations
Will that be enough?

The hiss of a deity
The claws reprimand
Lowly servant
Your will, my command

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BlueBeastGirl
Beasty
Dangerous Mind
United States 7awards
Joined 11th June 2012
Forum Posts: 106

Sweet Jeremy
With so much love in your eyes
But then gentle eyes rarely tells lies
 
How sweet his behavior, how kind he was
I loved my Jeremy, he was my best friend because
 
Into his ear I would whisper all of my hidden secrets
He loved me in spite of the fact he knew of all my dark spirits
 
He listened to me ramble, even cuddled me more
He'd just stand there waiting by the screen door
 
I loved my Jeremy with all of my heart
But some dumb dog ripped my Jeremy apart
 
They ripped his throat out and chewed off his baby ears
How did my family not hear his scared desperate noises of fear?
 
I'd hunt down the dog who killed my baby
Maybe that would bring back a bit of my happy
 
But for now I shall curl up in a ball and cry
Why, my baby Jeremy, why'd you have to die?

hardallover
Twisted Dreamer
United States 3awards
Joined 20th Mar 2011
Forum Posts: 62

my pet is a prehistoric metamorphic.
I take him everywhere I go
and nobody even knows it.

NO PETS ALLOWED

fuck you
I got a rock
in my pocket bitch.






LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
Sierra Leone 109awards
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304

Thank you all for these delightful entries! I especially enjoyed Kate's because of the picture it painted not only of "Fat Bastard" and their relationship but I got a great feel for her home ... Beautiful.  snugglebuck and hardallover - great humorous pieces.  Having spent time on my grandmother's small farm I can appreciate the appeal (and taste) of practical pets; and I've had (and have) my share of pet rocks.  Very low maintenance critters, and they make for great attack animals when thrown.

snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
United States 77awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 1873

Thanks for sponsoring such a great comp., lobo.  Congrats to Kate and hard.  And I'd like all the contributors to know what a joy it was reading your submissions.

seekingkate
kateA
Tyrant of Words
Australia 28awards
Joined 20th May 2014
Forum Posts: 2079

thanks Lo...am honoured by the win...by the way did you see the photo of fat bastard i put up with the poem on my thread?
congrats to snugglebuck and hardallover....
we're all winners because we love to write poetry... :)

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