Poetry competition CLOSED 11th April 2015 11:33pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
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Simply Complex
KrisDuh
Orene
Joined 29th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 23
Orene
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 23
Poetry Contest Description
~collective consciousness~
The world we experiance is made up of, the thoughts assumptions and beliefs we sow, and cultivate. Do we meet people as they really are. Or merly the way we percive them threw our own filters.
Does there still exist a sensible reality worthy of a second thought.
It seems my Imagination has failed me leaving me hopeless and distraught.
Unable to view the world thew my once whimsical eyes.
Much to distracted bye the propaganda and all the well told lies.
Resembling a herd of sheep, rigorously following with no resistance.
Willingly being blindsided from the meaning of our existence.
Maybe the thoughts to Incomprehensible from the normality you may find.
Or can it be the sort of clarity that seems to cloud the mind.
Grace
IDryad
Forum Posts: 16219
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 16219
Is this a competition or do you just want feedbacks?
BoFantastic
Forum Posts: 333
Thought Provoker
7
Joined 24th Apr 2014Forum Posts: 333
N.W.O
new world order? no the truth is
Nazi World Order
what I want is No World Order
I am with the founding fathers of the Original United States
they had a vision, a good one for humanity
Washington and Lincoln are the only presidents I admire
and in my contemplation they wanted to establish utopia
of wealth and wisdom
but then the Nazis had to come and corrupt the declaration
of independence
Nazi aliens came to Earth in their bullshit space ships
used all sorts of trickery and propaganda, science and dogma
to enslave every body on the planet to a Nazi World Order
but the angelic forces of love and light and the ground crew
on Earth had that freak sauce, you know that tweek sauce
that sweet and sour slap your mama's boyfriend in the
mouth sauce
and we had to shut their shit down, blast a couple of rounds
then let loose with the ammunition, turn their bodies
into opinions that nobody give a damn about
then we had a barbecue on the 4th, Nazis not invited
because they don't like to share and they want you
to raise your hand like you still in school, we grown
we don't play them games, we don't be raising our hands
to speak, for permission, or to take a shit
the powerful have armies, but the omnipotent have technology
and they were searching for more power, relics
they want the Star Maker,
the stars you see on the United States flag
when you can make a star, you basically a god
and every body, human or alien, wants to be a god
new world order? no the truth is
Nazi World Order
what I want is No World Order
I am with the founding fathers of the Original United States
they had a vision, a good one for humanity
Washington and Lincoln are the only presidents I admire
and in my contemplation they wanted to establish utopia
of wealth and wisdom
but then the Nazis had to come and corrupt the declaration
of independence
Nazi aliens came to Earth in their bullshit space ships
used all sorts of trickery and propaganda, science and dogma
to enslave every body on the planet to a Nazi World Order
but the angelic forces of love and light and the ground crew
on Earth had that freak sauce, you know that tweek sauce
that sweet and sour slap your mama's boyfriend in the
mouth sauce
and we had to shut their shit down, blast a couple of rounds
then let loose with the ammunition, turn their bodies
into opinions that nobody give a damn about
then we had a barbecue on the 4th, Nazis not invited
because they don't like to share and they want you
to raise your hand like you still in school, we grown
we don't play them games, we don't be raising our hands
to speak, for permission, or to take a shit
the powerful have armies, but the omnipotent have technology
and they were searching for more power, relics
they want the Star Maker,
the stars you see on the United States flag
when you can make a star, you basically a god
and every body, human or alien, wants to be a god
LordCreepy
Colten_Sorrells
Forum Posts: 51
Colten_Sorrells
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 29th Mar 2015 Forum Posts: 51
Lol
gazellemon
Bradley J
Forum Posts: 372
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
6
Joined 6th Mar 2014Forum Posts: 372
wut
Anonymous
INSIGNIFICANT
Insignificant
He said
People are insignificant to me
Id rather be
A radiant moon
A gust of wind
A tree...
You are of no significance
To me
You are my concubine
My serpentine
Blame it on my alter ego
My self Divine
My higher self
Talking to a false god
Replica of simulation
Reincarnated communication
Divided by two halves
Of the same reality
Where in the spectrum
Is the color of life?
Who cares?
Who dares?
Insignificant
He said
People are insignificant to me
Id rather be
A radiant moon
A gust of wind
A tree...
You are of no significance
To me
You are my concubine
My serpentine
Blame it on my alter ego
My self Divine
My higher self
Talking to a false god
Replica of simulation
Reincarnated communication
Divided by two halves
Of the same reality
Where in the spectrum
Is the color of life?
Who cares?
Who dares?
Anonymous
The bones know the truth
'Integrity is doing the right thing, even when no one is watching' C.S. Lewis
Call what you want
the world changes, churns
every decade, every century
tides turn,
the undertow lingers
earth temperature rise
thawing glaciers, crumbling
walls, flooding beliefs
disfiguring theories
in the metaphysical nature
of 'good' and 'evil'.
Reality of abstract illusions
in a universe of contradictions
a product of one's environment
an excuse, a cliche
in a non-linear narrative
of bloodbath of atrocities.
Carelessness of society
endangered ethics and morality
drowned in hypocrisy of adjectives
thumbing the thesaurus
for pages of nobility
to justify actions, sanctions
shifting responsibility
covering the feeble skin
with political correctness
numbing the pain
inebriating fear
to fit, to mould
with the masses
in glass houses
lined with white powder
inhaling diamond dust
in the back alleys of
graffitied corners
rolling gunji while staring
at the flicking lights
the canvas bears witness
to all the heroes of the past
silently weeping;
the bones today do not
possess the marrow
of yesterday.
Burn the books
history, religion and philosophy
we have learned nothing
nothing
the grit and steel
of men and women
with iron fists
courage running incessantly
thru their veins
revolution frothing
from eyes of flames
un-bowing to tyranny
giving a fuck,
dismissing the act
turning boys to men,
who didn't cower to the notion;
bad guys always win in the end.
The bones bear the weight
long after tongues are slashed
revealing the truth
they didn't die in vain.
'Integrity is doing the right thing, even when no one is watching' C.S. Lewis
Call what you want
the world changes, churns
every decade, every century
tides turn,
the undertow lingers
earth temperature rise
thawing glaciers, crumbling
walls, flooding beliefs
disfiguring theories
in the metaphysical nature
of 'good' and 'evil'.
Reality of abstract illusions
in a universe of contradictions
a product of one's environment
an excuse, a cliche
in a non-linear narrative
of bloodbath of atrocities.
Carelessness of society
endangered ethics and morality
drowned in hypocrisy of adjectives
thumbing the thesaurus
for pages of nobility
to justify actions, sanctions
shifting responsibility
covering the feeble skin
with political correctness
numbing the pain
inebriating fear
to fit, to mould
with the masses
in glass houses
lined with white powder
inhaling diamond dust
in the back alleys of
graffitied corners
rolling gunji while staring
at the flicking lights
the canvas bears witness
to all the heroes of the past
silently weeping;
the bones today do not
possess the marrow
of yesterday.
Burn the books
history, religion and philosophy
we have learned nothing
nothing
the grit and steel
of men and women
with iron fists
courage running incessantly
thru their veins
revolution frothing
from eyes of flames
un-bowing to tyranny
giving a fuck,
dismissing the act
turning boys to men,
who didn't cower to the notion;
bad guys always win in the end.
The bones bear the weight
long after tongues are slashed
revealing the truth
they didn't die in vain.
lanooz
Forum Posts: 240
Twisted Dreamer
14
Joined 21st July 2012Forum Posts: 240
Sensible Reality
Maybe if I knew what you meant
we could continue
with the subject matter,
as a matter of fact I'm lost in
a world that feels lonely and transparent
but what am I supposed to do
while I struggle to find myself?
Collecting my self consciousness
before the world takes it from me,
the experience of thoughts and
assumptions that make me who I am.
Who are you to try and cultivate
my beliefs when in reality there is
nothing you can do to hinder my progress?
Seldom will you meet people for who they are,
instead you get the best side of a thorn bush
but I'm speaking from who I am around you,
the smile is real but the emotion is missing
I rather not be in your presence if that's
okay with you. Perceive me anyway you want,
there is nothing missing, the reason my
sensible reality isn't worth a second thought.
Maybe if I knew what you meant
we could continue
with the subject matter,
as a matter of fact I'm lost in
a world that feels lonely and transparent
but what am I supposed to do
while I struggle to find myself?
Collecting my self consciousness
before the world takes it from me,
the experience of thoughts and
assumptions that make me who I am.
Who are you to try and cultivate
my beliefs when in reality there is
nothing you can do to hinder my progress?
Seldom will you meet people for who they are,
instead you get the best side of a thorn bush
but I'm speaking from who I am around you,
the smile is real but the emotion is missing
I rather not be in your presence if that's
okay with you. Perceive me anyway you want,
there is nothing missing, the reason my
sensible reality isn't worth a second thought.
Anonymous
Reporting and reality
As a society of individuals
some very nice, some criminals
we tend to be influenced as a mass
by what's in the news and shoved up our ass
I've seen the news, sometimes before my eyes
And by 5pm it has been sensationalized
Now we all know that bad news sells
as we believe what the broadcaster tells
Oh they tell us that is such a great service
Even though what they say might make us nervous
But what we see has to fit between commercials
But most of all it must be controversial
It is not in-depth, nor characterize
The way you and I might live our lives
But give the stage to murder and war
politics, cheating, and rape galore
This just in,
don't be confused
They are suppose to report
not be the news?
It is not about reporting
The news with intelligence
they think that they are the story
and that's true arrogance
I have a way to change your perception
And this I will share with you.
Stop the intake of this garbage dump
It will likely change your view
As a society of individuals
some very nice, some criminals
we tend to be influenced as a mass
by what's in the news and shoved up our ass
I've seen the news, sometimes before my eyes
And by 5pm it has been sensationalized
Now we all know that bad news sells
as we believe what the broadcaster tells
Oh they tell us that is such a great service
Even though what they say might make us nervous
But what we see has to fit between commercials
But most of all it must be controversial
It is not in-depth, nor characterize
The way you and I might live our lives
But give the stage to murder and war
politics, cheating, and rape galore
This just in,
don't be confused
They are suppose to report
not be the news?
It is not about reporting
The news with intelligence
they think that they are the story
and that's true arrogance
I have a way to change your perception
And this I will share with you.
Stop the intake of this garbage dump
It will likely change your view
Sandman68
Forum Posts: 305
Thought Provoker
3
Joined 15th Feb 2015Forum Posts: 305
.........................We toil in the
.........................mire of those
.........................above in self-
..........................proclaimed
..........................Superiority
.......But while they may hold our pockets hostage,
......They will never own our passion, pain or desire
...............They who are ever replaced with
................only more of their kind - their
.................primary concern is continued
.................suppression and attempts to
..................control our tired minds with
...................propaganda never realizing
...................they are so much weaker as
....................our lives are tempered and
.....................made stronger by the time
......................and struggles we endure.
......................their attempts to silence
.......................us only make us loader.
........................Censorship imposed
.........................on us only makes us
.........................unexpurgated and
..........................we meet quietly in
............................hidden shadows,
.............................biding our time
..............................for impending
...............................revolutions,
................................armed with
.................................sharpened
..................................poisoned
...................................daggers
......................................soon
.........................................!!
.........................mire of those
.........................above in self-
..........................proclaimed
..........................Superiority
.......But while they may hold our pockets hostage,
......They will never own our passion, pain or desire
...............They who are ever replaced with
................only more of their kind - their
.................primary concern is continued
.................suppression and attempts to
..................control our tired minds with
...................propaganda never realizing
...................they are so much weaker as
....................our lives are tempered and
.....................made stronger by the time
......................and struggles we endure.
......................their attempts to silence
.......................us only make us loader.
........................Censorship imposed
.........................on us only makes us
.........................unexpurgated and
..........................we meet quietly in
............................hidden shadows,
.............................biding our time
..............................for impending
...............................revolutions,
................................armed with
.................................sharpened
..................................poisoned
...................................daggers
......................................soon
.........................................!!