The Evolution of Darkness
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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Poetry Contest Description
dark poetry only
Brothers and sisters of the ink. We're going to try something new. I want two submissions from the participants. The first one should be the very first dark poem you published here on DUP. The second needs to be a brand new poem on dark subject matter. Write about anything you want as long as it's Dark Poetry. I want to see how well you have evolved since you first found your way here.
Strange Creatures are allowed to showcase but will not be in the running. Anyone above S.C. status will be welcome to compete.
ONE MONTH
LET THE REIGN OF SHADOWS BEGIN
Strange Creatures are allowed to showcase but will not be in the running. Anyone above S.C. status will be welcome to compete.
ONE MONTH
LET THE REIGN OF SHADOWS BEGIN
snugglebuck
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Dangerous Mind
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Ia Ia Cthulhu Fhtagn - Armageddon Has Begun
Below the Sea of Galilee
In a cauldron of tar, and salinity
Where no life can survive
The dark evil incarnate did arise
From the mysterious depths
Of the bottomless pit it leapt
The Beast was not the metaphor
Of ancient gospels’ lore
But an immense physical manifestation
A mountain of all that is evil, incarnation
Each inhalation of his respiration
Stole light from Earth's horizon
Expelling sulfured air in exhalation
His putrid breath was an abomination
With his right paw he swept away Gaza
With his left he crushed all of Mecca
Then looking towards the heavens in triumph
In a grotesque glare of defiance
He bellowed a hideous howl of victory
So all God’s children clutched their ears in agony
Except for the one, the one called Abaddon
Who greeted the ‘Living Darkness’ with adulation
“Ia Ia Cthulhu Fhtagn, Ia Ia Cthulhu Fhtagn!”
“My Great Lord, begin the Armageddon!”
To be continued.
Ia Ia Cthulhu Fhtagn - Armageddon Has Begun
Below the Sea of Galilee
In a cauldron of tar, and salinity
Where no life can survive
The dark evil incarnate did arise
From the mysterious depths
Of the bottomless pit it leapt
The Beast was not the metaphor
Of ancient gospels’ lore
But an immense physical manifestation
A mountain of all that is evil, incarnation
Each inhalation of his respiration
Stole light from Earth's horizon
Expelling sulfured air in exhalation
His putrid breath was an abomination
With his right paw he swept away Gaza
With his left he crushed all of Mecca
Then looking towards the heavens in triumph
In a grotesque glare of defiance
He bellowed a hideous howl of victory
So all God’s children clutched their ears in agony
Except for the one, the one called Abaddon
Who greeted the ‘Living Darkness’ with adulation
“Ia Ia Cthulhu Fhtagn, Ia Ia Cthulhu Fhtagn!”
“My Great Lord, begin the Armageddon!”
To be continued.
Anonymous
this was my first dark poem that I posted here,the new poem will be added in a few days....
FUNERAL FIRE
Shed the light
Come towards me
Invoking delight
Dismantled dreams
Shredded lines
Shreds of paper
Written ink
On a wounded wall
Turmoil tide
Empty vessel
Sank behind
The sea
I watch winters bone
As dark lady rules her throne
Welcome to my funeral fire
Burn for me
Burn me a birch
Burn me a flame
Whisper
My name
Now I am a bird
Now I am an owl
Risen from the air
On my way now, nearly there
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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Thank you, my friends for starting us off
MortiferumCantet
Hm
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Hm
Lost Thinker
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Land of Hell-The first ink i posted on DU
I look up at this night sky,
And wonder if this nightmare will ever end.
Or does my mind tell a lie?
Saying that all my pain will go away and my broken heart will mend.
When in this harsh reality, pain is all ill know.
Even when I die,
All it will be is slow.
~
It seems that I will never,
See the light of day.
As I lay here in the dark forever,
In a realm of night I will always stay.
Cursed to see my memories painted in blood of my own.
Only hoping that they would sever,
And stop taunting me and leave me alone.
~
I stand here in the night,
With tears falling from my eyes.
My only wish is to have a light,
To clear my head of all the lies.
In this land of pain, my screams are not alone.
The suffering, tortured, maddening cries of other fill the night.
From somewhere in the distance, I hear other dying moans.
~
As I walk around this hell,
The cries and screams multiply.
I would take away all their pain if I could only tell,
Why this madness and suffering is brought upon us so.
Maybe it's me.
Maybe all this pain in this hell,
Is all just because of me.
~
Ever since my first breath,
Pain is all I've known.
Maybe every soul will live with pain until my death.
Those around my seem to suffer unless I'm all alone.
If I was to die,
To never take another breath,
Would all there suffering stop, or is that another lie?
~
In this realm of night,
Screams echo through the darkness.
I stumble aimlessly around this world without a light.
My wish in this hell would be to only have less.
Less pain and suffering, less tortured souls only wanting to die.
In this hell, pain is all anyone knows.
Until we die, this is where we will always lie.
~
This hell, this realm of night,
Holds all my life.
It imprisons my tortured, tainted soul in its forever hating sight.
All while killing me with a knife.
All I can do is wait for death with a smile.
And lay here in this hell without a light.
Only till death comes, will I escape this utter denial.
~
When death arrives,
I will greet him.
I will leave this life for death, and maybe all these lives,
Will no longer be cursed with pain and suffering as I go with him.
And leave this world of pain as a better place.
That is what everyone deserves.
And when I die, I will seal away me secret, with a blood red piece of lace.
I look up at this night sky,
And wonder if this nightmare will ever end.
Or does my mind tell a lie?
Saying that all my pain will go away and my broken heart will mend.
When in this harsh reality, pain is all ill know.
Even when I die,
All it will be is slow.
~
It seems that I will never,
See the light of day.
As I lay here in the dark forever,
In a realm of night I will always stay.
Cursed to see my memories painted in blood of my own.
Only hoping that they would sever,
And stop taunting me and leave me alone.
~
I stand here in the night,
With tears falling from my eyes.
My only wish is to have a light,
To clear my head of all the lies.
In this land of pain, my screams are not alone.
The suffering, tortured, maddening cries of other fill the night.
From somewhere in the distance, I hear other dying moans.
~
As I walk around this hell,
The cries and screams multiply.
I would take away all their pain if I could only tell,
Why this madness and suffering is brought upon us so.
Maybe it's me.
Maybe all this pain in this hell,
Is all just because of me.
~
Ever since my first breath,
Pain is all I've known.
Maybe every soul will live with pain until my death.
Those around my seem to suffer unless I'm all alone.
If I was to die,
To never take another breath,
Would all there suffering stop, or is that another lie?
~
In this realm of night,
Screams echo through the darkness.
I stumble aimlessly around this world without a light.
My wish in this hell would be to only have less.
Less pain and suffering, less tortured souls only wanting to die.
In this hell, pain is all anyone knows.
Until we die, this is where we will always lie.
~
This hell, this realm of night,
Holds all my life.
It imprisons my tortured, tainted soul in its forever hating sight.
All while killing me with a knife.
All I can do is wait for death with a smile.
And lay here in this hell without a light.
Only till death comes, will I escape this utter denial.
~
When death arrives,
I will greet him.
I will leave this life for death, and maybe all these lives,
Will no longer be cursed with pain and suffering as I go with him.
And leave this world of pain as a better place.
That is what everyone deserves.
And when I die, I will seal away me secret, with a blood red piece of lace.
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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Awesome entry, Opal. Eagerly awaiting your second poem
Anonymous
Second poem for your comp...
PERSEPHONE
Through the half Dark
Comes the half Light
And the presence of the non existence
Darkness knows of reasons, to be here
From her folded hands,falls the crumbled truth
It`s the yearning of fingers ,losing their grip
These searching hands not to be filled
The loss lies empty in her lap
She reminds me of stillborn children
Which float in the lubricant water,
like swirling fishes in lunar oceans
It reminds me of the aching of age
Lifelessness is beyond forgiveness
Lifelessness is beyond the weight
Of the scar faced angels
Who,in this void of the worlds
Seek the dark night soul
No footsteps of mortals can be heard here
She breeds the bones and restores her skull
Death winds lull ,rise and fly
Through the half Light
Into the half Dark
PERSEPHONE
Through the half Dark
Comes the half Light
And the presence of the non existence
Darkness knows of reasons, to be here
From her folded hands,falls the crumbled truth
It`s the yearning of fingers ,losing their grip
These searching hands not to be filled
The loss lies empty in her lap
She reminds me of stillborn children
Which float in the lubricant water,
like swirling fishes in lunar oceans
It reminds me of the aching of age
Lifelessness is beyond forgiveness
Lifelessness is beyond the weight
Of the scar faced angels
Who,in this void of the worlds
Seek the dark night soul
No footsteps of mortals can be heard here
She breeds the bones and restores her skull
Death winds lull ,rise and fly
Through the half Light
Into the half Dark
PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
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Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
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He's Coming Us
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I hear whispers,
Many voices are screaming inside my head.
They chitter, they chatter,
Most of them don't even know their dead.
There's one who exibits such great power.
He goes around giving me orders,
and telling me what to do.
And if I don't listen,
I wake up with my skin, black and blue.
They take me for their toy,
I'm an unwilling host.
I'm a reluctant messenger,
of a dark presense, and he's says,
He's coming for us.
This poem brought back memories.
I had some jesus-freak on facebook that were literally trying to gag me with their beliefs, and I wrote this and tagged all of them.
Of course I got the results that I wanted.
They unfriended me.
(^,..,^)
Indie
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Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
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My first dark poem on here is a collaborative piece. I don't suppose that counts?
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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How about your first solo dark poem?
Indie
Miss Indie
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Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
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HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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Excellent entries everyone. Keep them coming.
Dataface00
Joined 25th Nov 2012
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Twisted Dreamer
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Rivers Turned Black (My first dark entry)
Sea marches swinging
Sand storms wrapped around
decaying villages,
I once stayed in desolation
switching flanks,
wingless crows
saunter towards non existent planks.
( Pray your dreams away)
Reddish asphyxiated Water Angels
singing blurred rhythmic signals
dismounting lovers into completion,
whole bodies cascaded
time in a space.
(Heaven sent messages to my phone)
Perfection came and shot resistance away,
imagery unintended becomes beautiful nightmares.
Sea marches swinging
Sand storms wrapped around
decaying villages,
I once stayed in desolation
switching flanks,
wingless crows
saunter towards non existent planks.
( Pray your dreams away)
Reddish asphyxiated Water Angels
singing blurred rhythmic signals
dismounting lovers into completion,
whole bodies cascaded
time in a space.
(Heaven sent messages to my phone)
Perfection came and shot resistance away,
imagery unintended becomes beautiful nightmares.
Dataface00
Joined 25th Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 20
Twisted Dreamer
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Phantom limb ( A new poem written for this competition )
A red headed stork shrieked ambiguously
into the abyss of forgetful dreamers.
"I once masturbated inside rocks crammed full of
capitalistic phantom limbs,
cascading inside my irrecoverably debt ridden security"
Sanity worshiping transvestites screwing the
high bishops face, until orgasmic vampires reached
a new neurological understanding of sexual desire.
"I once shopped for battered old body parts,
to add within my forest of neglected memories."
Her forest had been lambasted by a group of
zombie beavers bursting for sexual indemnification.
"I once grew one eyed ghouls from unwanted teenage
pregnancies."
(Life is a dark hole full of enigmatic sequences).
A red headed stork shrieked ambiguously
into the abyss of forgetful dreamers.
"I once masturbated inside rocks crammed full of
capitalistic phantom limbs,
cascading inside my irrecoverably debt ridden security"
Sanity worshiping transvestites screwing the
high bishops face, until orgasmic vampires reached
a new neurological understanding of sexual desire.
"I once shopped for battered old body parts,
to add within my forest of neglected memories."
Her forest had been lambasted by a group of
zombie beavers bursting for sexual indemnification.
"I once grew one eyed ghouls from unwanted teenage
pregnancies."
(Life is a dark hole full of enigmatic sequences).
sstruhar
AFleetingMemory
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AFleetingMemory
Lost Thinker
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Long Wait
A deep dark hole lays within my heart
Slowly and painfully shredding me apart
I try and I try to subside the pain
But whatever I do, there is no gain
I've been shot, stabbed and broken a bone
But nothing is compared to being alone
Every night i catch myself crying
and every night i feel myself dying
Too many wounds, too many to mend
Waiting for my tainted soul to transcend
Can't do it myself, forced an agonizing wait
Sorrow every last second
That is my fate
Lay With Me, My Love!
Always seeing you, but never me
Watching your life, so happy and free
Shadows I hide, waiting for you
Wishing you loved, just as I do
Razor cuts veins, I bleed for love
Never to know what she dreams of
So beautiful she sleep, I like to stare
But I never approach, I'd never dare
Waiting all night, until she wake
Watching her dress, I start to shake
"Why must I hide, she should be mine!"
Kick in the door, out comes a shriek
Forcing her down. so soft, so weak
Refusing to love, unable to smile
Tie her down tight, for shes in denial
Grip her neck, keeping her still
Her smooth skin peaking my thrill
Squeeze tight, sorrow in her eye
Pain within me, for she must die
Strip her down, gave her a shower
Can't help to peak, my beautiful flower
Pick out her dress, must look her best
Heart pounds, for I am truly blessed
Lay with my girl, forever together
Silent now, no need for tether
At peace now, shes at my side
In love at last, no need to hide
Slit my wrist, be with you soon
We can sleep forever
Under the moon
A deep dark hole lays within my heart
Slowly and painfully shredding me apart
I try and I try to subside the pain
But whatever I do, there is no gain
I've been shot, stabbed and broken a bone
But nothing is compared to being alone
Every night i catch myself crying
and every night i feel myself dying
Too many wounds, too many to mend
Waiting for my tainted soul to transcend
Can't do it myself, forced an agonizing wait
Sorrow every last second
That is my fate
Lay With Me, My Love!
Always seeing you, but never me
Watching your life, so happy and free
Shadows I hide, waiting for you
Wishing you loved, just as I do
Razor cuts veins, I bleed for love
Never to know what she dreams of
So beautiful she sleep, I like to stare
But I never approach, I'd never dare
Waiting all night, until she wake
Watching her dress, I start to shake
"Why must I hide, she should be mine!"
Kick in the door, out comes a shriek
Forcing her down. so soft, so weak
Refusing to love, unable to smile
Tie her down tight, for shes in denial
Grip her neck, keeping her still
Her smooth skin peaking my thrill
Squeeze tight, sorrow in her eye
Pain within me, for she must die
Strip her down, gave her a shower
Can't help to peak, my beautiful flower
Pick out her dress, must look her best
Heart pounds, for I am truly blessed
Lay with my girl, forever together
Silent now, no need for tether
At peace now, shes at my side
In love at last, no need to hide
Slit my wrist, be with you soon
We can sleep forever
Under the moon