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Moths and Butterflies

poet Anonymous

Poetry Contest

see below for details...
one new write each
one week

in 50-75 words
something inspired by the comp title

any style

crimsin
Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
United States 121awards
Joined 25th Jan 2011
Forum Posts: 2635

The Grey Butterfly

So brilliant and vibrant
my velveteen colored
wings a thing of true beauty

that men longed to touch
at a tender young age
flying out of my body

where groping hands couldn't reach
I taught my self to levitate
out of my skin into the night sky

a luscious butterfly scarred
beyond repair roughed up
her wings torn and worn from wear

now a grey moth
finally left alone
soaring high free at last

poet Anonymous

thanks so much for starting us off, crim
:)
<3

crimsin
Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
United States 121awards
Joined 25th Jan 2011
Forum Posts: 2635

thank you Miki for such a great idea :)

Astyanax
Ceejay
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom 9awards
Joined 23rd Feb 2010
Forum Posts: 748

Not so much about moths and butterflies, but about the world they inhabit:

Black Widow

In threads of silk She hangs in wait,
Her hapless victims court their fate;
Around them, summer's flowers bloom,
Nature's glory, victims' doom.
They touch the web with carefree tread,
Alert, She feels the trembling thread;
The scuttling lunge, the terrible eyes,
The victim quivers, stiffens, dies.
With gossamer ropes She binds the kill,
She sucks the juices, takes her fill,
And leaves the tiny, blackened husk
Hanging in the gathering dusk.
Sated, deadly, proud, alone,
She hangs once more within her throne.
Unmoved by feelings, loves or hates,
The patient Widow sits and waits

poet Anonymous

Astyanax said:Not so much about moths and butterflies, but about the world they inhabit:




thats good,
anything that the title inspires in you is eligible..

kriticool
Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 596




.:Moth and Butterfly:.


another
life moment
pastoral colored gray
flutters alongside
a vibrant kaleidoscope
in kind; both
bathing in the air
pre-death; like autumn
seizing upon the atmosphere
2-get there; both
afforded the intricate simplicity of
post-crawl movement
past are the wonders of arrival
the triumphs of survival; where
the bland and bright
both agreeing; seeing
is believing

poet Anonymous

Journey of the night moth
Transparent transformation
From the damp moist
Cocooned in the womb
Of the sacred swamp
There,bathing in
The dimming light
Of the flickering flame
From the silver web was spun
My new carcass
Dark falls from me
From blackened wings
Colors are formed
From the light
Is born
The butterfly
Of life

myfairytale
Lost Thinker
South Africa
Joined 21st Jan 2015
Forum Posts: 3

The Butterfly vs the moth

The butterfly so free
The butterfly so bright
swift fly through the sky
But something lurks in the night

The moths they come out
driven by the light
their brains on autopilot
lost in the dark,
fright

the contradiction it seems
far and in between
the butterfly verses the moth
the fighting
it is kept clean

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
Sierra Leone 109awards
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304

nets

seduced by the fire of men
who find amusement in my self destruction
my hue is bark and bitter chocolate
and I love the lullabies of crickets and bullfrogs

I'm the dirty secret locked in a drawer
while she's draped in silk
her capricious flight
reminds you of your dreams

when you open your drawer
i remind you
the emperor has no clothes

http://graphics8.nytimes.com/images/2008/07/02/nyregion/VYG_1-533.jpg

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1301

bandhinis gone for a toss


his plumulose eyelashes
aren't short of defining agilities

stubbles
around stocky-caterpillar moustache
pierce
as adrenalinic-arrows

his hazel irises
are wingy moon-spots
triggering crises
erratically kneads soft chest-doughs
her fluttering
rainbow-bandhini dupatta
are losing grounds

her catchy numbers:
thoracic cabaret shakes
proboscis-arousal stunts
   surrender
to his apocalytical
-moonrays-
ashen
her saffrony-indigo bands

black velvetty furs choke
her croaking throat
-delivers-
mothy strings
in juniperous greys

vascular cocoon
splits open
to dusky twilights
unto
dark descendance


[i]p.s:
bandhini/ bandhani/ bandhani/bandana: (hindi/ sanskrit) a type of tie-dye practised in India
dupatta: (hindi) indian form of tippet


MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 87awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5598

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J_J_Jay_Jr
Fire of Insight
United States 17awards
Joined 20th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 218

So, maybe, this is not eligible.   I wrote it last week --on the 22nd.  Still, that is "almost" new.

When I call you my butterfly.

It is not only about your beauty,
As remarkable as it is,
Whether clothed for a day's work,
A night on the town,
Or stepping from the shower,
Dressed only in droplets of water.

It is about your wings,
Of freedom.

Able to carry you,
Where you wish to go,
On your life’s journey.

To land you delicately,
Where you wish stay,
If only for moment.

It is about the sweetness,
Of your kisses,
Your thoughts,
Your actions,
Your very soul.

It is also about,
The most wondrous,
Change you’ve,
Undergone,
In becoming,
The most important,
Person in my life.

BurnigDesire
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 26th Jan 2015
Forum Posts: 13

White Butterfly

I can feel you here with me.
Your not just in my memory.
But when I see one pass me by.
I feel overwhelmed and start to cry.
You always told me when you died.
That you would follow me as a white butterfly.
It comforts and aches my heart.
When I spy a white butterfly fluttering behind me.

Am I aloud to post this in my poems I literally just wrote this and really like it.

Cannaballester
Thought Provoker
United States 1awards
Joined 3rd Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 112

Moths And Butterflies,,,

Painted Wings,,,Upon Grandeur Skies,,,
Effortlessly Floating,,,On Gentle Breezes,,,
They Glide,,,
The Reflection Of The Sun,,,Off The Wings It Kissed,,,
Their Shadow,,,Upon The Night Sky's Full Moon,,,Eclipsed,,,
And Just For One Moment,,,They Can Bee Seen,,,
But That Moment Is Gone,,,A Forgotten Memory,,,
And Only The Memory,,,Is All That Remains,,,
Of The Days Gone Bye,,,
The Days Of Moths And Butterflies,,,

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