Poetry competition CLOSED 11th February 2015 4:56am
WINNER
toniscales (Lost Girl)
toniscales (Lost Girl)
RUNNER-UP:
DancingAlone
Wishmaster
Poetry Contest Description
What do you desire?
I while back I hosted a Hellraiser inspired comp. Now it is Wishmaster's turn. If you haven't seen the film (I highly recommend watching the first one at least) then he is basically a Djinn, or genie, who grants wishes in a gore-drenched manner. I want one poem consisting of three different wishes and the disastrous consequences from dealing with a such nefarious type (or would it be a rare pleasure for some?)
TWO WEEKS
MAKE IT GORY
MAKE IT GREAT
NEW POEMS ONLY
NO WORD LIMIT BUT GIVE IT A GOOD FLOW
SO TELL ME...
WHAT IS YOUR DARKEST DESIRES?
TWO WEEKS
MAKE IT GORY
MAKE IT GREAT
NEW POEMS ONLY
NO WORD LIMIT BUT GIVE IT A GOOD FLOW
SO TELL ME...
WHAT IS YOUR DARKEST DESIRES?
Anonymous
oh! did you extend? i just saw this today and was thinking of entering, but thought it was about to end. hmmmm....i must get to thinking!
Deathmaster
Double bouble toil and trouble.
Raise the bodies from the rubble.
Break the bullets, heal the bones.
Break the man who broke my home.
Feel the magic, raise the dead.
Put a bullet in his head.
Seek revenge, bide my time.
Bring my family back to life.
Feel him fighting. Feel his pain.
Raise my friend back from the grave.
Spill his blood to get revenge.
Hold my brother's hand again.
I want one man gone.
By my own hand.
I want to bring back one.
And have a family again.
He'll be different.
He'll be dead.
I'll be broken once again.
Broken mind and broken soul.
Just to make my family whole.
Double bouble toil and trouble.
Raise the bodies from the rubble.
Break the bullets, heal the bones.
Break the man who broke my home.
Feel the magic, raise the dead.
Put a bullet in his head.
Seek revenge, bide my time.
Bring my family back to life.
Feel him fighting. Feel his pain.
Raise my friend back from the grave.
Spill his blood to get revenge.
Hold my brother's hand again.
I want one man gone.
By my own hand.
I want to bring back one.
And have a family again.
He'll be different.
He'll be dead.
I'll be broken once again.
Broken mind and broken soul.
Just to make my family whole.
Anonymous
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Three Wishes
the Wishmaster knows my answers
before they are spoken
he recognizes the look of hunger
knows instinctively what I’ve craved all my life
I want to be lovely
I want to be loved
I want the pleasure
to never end
I awaken in a fire-lit room
on a bed of red satin
he is there already
the one from my dreams
the loving is all I craved it to be
I am lost in the white-hot shards
of a tender yet ruthless ecstasy
over and over
but soon the pleasure grows too acute
for it is relentless
unmerciful
it’s too late before I realize
I’m being loved to death
my skin molding itself
into the finest china
bones turning to dust
I am becoming a perfectly-featured doll
pummeled into fissures
the fine brittle stuff of me
chipping and flaking away
my body cavity
caving in
flesh and muscle disintegrating
into a fine pale powder
until all that is left of me
is my glossy doll face
cradled in red sheets
the look upon my visage
a frozen eternal sweep
of a glowing horror
an anguished
satiation
Three Wishes
the Wishmaster knows my answers
before they are spoken
he recognizes the look of hunger
knows instinctively what I’ve craved all my life
I want to be lovely
I want to be loved
I want the pleasure
to never end
I awaken in a fire-lit room
on a bed of red satin
he is there already
the one from my dreams
the loving is all I craved it to be
I am lost in the white-hot shards
of a tender yet ruthless ecstasy
over and over
but soon the pleasure grows too acute
for it is relentless
unmerciful
it’s too late before I realize
I’m being loved to death
my skin molding itself
into the finest china
bones turning to dust
I am becoming a perfectly-featured doll
pummeled into fissures
the fine brittle stuff of me
chipping and flaking away
my body cavity
caving in
flesh and muscle disintegrating
into a fine pale powder
until all that is left of me
is my glossy doll face
cradled in red sheets
the look upon my visage
a frozen eternal sweep
of a glowing horror
an anguished
satiation
Anonymous
Dezire gawn awl wrong
Eye hadda dreem dat catphish bawt uh strapponn penniss.
Und he cawed me upp on hiz cell und wanted tew vizitt me und havva sleepover.
Eye woke upp inna coal sweat.
Itt wuz drippin' evryware.
Lyke blood sqirtin' evryware.
Itt wuz goree.
Eye ain't know hoe.
Awl my dezire izt gawn now.
Eye sleep wit mai lytes on
und pray fer darkniss tew cum.
Nawt him.
Datz sikk und gross.
Eye hadda dreem dat catphish bawt uh strapponn penniss.
Und he cawed me upp on hiz cell und wanted tew vizitt me und havva sleepover.
Eye woke upp inna coal sweat.
Itt wuz drippin' evryware.
Lyke blood sqirtin' evryware.
Itt wuz goree.
Eye ain't know hoe.
Awl my dezire izt gawn now.
Eye sleep wit mai lytes on
und pray fer darkniss tew cum.
Nawt him.
Datz sikk und gross.
