Poetry competition CLOSED 4th February 2015 00:34am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
shaunda
and JohnFeddeler
nitty gritty
Anonymous
I want to feel the roughness of your hand against the smoothness of my face
Will you, the chosen one, put this elemental in her place
I dream of the beast in you ravaging the innocence in me
In my fantasies, by your dominating power, you set my spirit free
Will you put your hand on the back of my head
Gather up in your fingers my snake like dreads
Pull my hair so hard and push my precious face into the dirt
Loose control now baby, show this bitch what it's like to get hurt
Let the lust take control of your animalistic mind
Control me Master, a more willing victim you will never find
Right here, right now cherish this sacred moment
Your intensity, your rule over me is so very potent
You know I would do anything your filthy mind desires
I'll be your perfect little rag doll Sire
I want to feel you deep inside me stretching beyond measure
Let me spread myself with my fingers, offer you full view of your treasure
Fucking me so hard I'm screaming out my Masters name
I'm so eager, craving the infliction of pain
You satisfy my lurid hunger, turning me over I gaze at this magic before me
Horns grown with an unmistakable look in your eye like we are falling
Drowning in the blood of our blissful ardour
I have never wanted to die in somebody's arms before
Bind my limbs and use my carcass for your forbidden play
For I am not forbidden, not to you, not on this devotional day
Can I let you see the fear in my eyes, can I push you that far
I want you to loose yourself so much that even you don't recognise who you are
Freedom comes at a price
My body is your sacrifice
Do I need to ask you twice...?
Will you, the chosen one, put this elemental in her place
I dream of the beast in you ravaging the innocence in me
In my fantasies, by your dominating power, you set my spirit free
Will you put your hand on the back of my head
Gather up in your fingers my snake like dreads
Pull my hair so hard and push my precious face into the dirt
Loose control now baby, show this bitch what it's like to get hurt
Let the lust take control of your animalistic mind
Control me Master, a more willing victim you will never find
Right here, right now cherish this sacred moment
Your intensity, your rule over me is so very potent
You know I would do anything your filthy mind desires
I'll be your perfect little rag doll Sire
I want to feel you deep inside me stretching beyond measure
Let me spread myself with my fingers, offer you full view of your treasure
Fucking me so hard I'm screaming out my Masters name
I'm so eager, craving the infliction of pain
You satisfy my lurid hunger, turning me over I gaze at this magic before me
Horns grown with an unmistakable look in your eye like we are falling
Drowning in the blood of our blissful ardour
I have never wanted to die in somebody's arms before
Bind my limbs and use my carcass for your forbidden play
For I am not forbidden, not to you, not on this devotional day
Can I let you see the fear in my eyes, can I push you that far
I want you to loose yourself so much that even you don't recognise who you are
Freedom comes at a price
My body is your sacrifice
Do I need to ask you twice...?
crimsin
Unveiling
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Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 25th Jan 2011 Forum Posts: 2640
MuseOfTheFountain said:I want to feel the roughness of your hand against the smoothness of my face
Will you, the chosen one, put this elemental in her place
I dream of the beast in you ravaging the innocence in me
In my fantasies, by your dominating power, you set my spirit free
Will you put your hand on the back of my head
Gather up in your fingers my snake like dreads
Pull my hair so hard and push my precious face into the dirt
Loose control now baby, show this bitch what it's like to get hurt
Let the lust take control of your animalistic mind
Control me Master, a more willing victim you will never find
Right here, right now cherish this sacred moment
Your intensity, your rule over me is so very potent
You know I would do anything your filthy mind desires
I'll be your perfect little rag doll Sire
I want to feel you deep inside me stretching beyond measure
Let me spread myself with my fingers, offer you full view of your treasure
Fucking me so hard I'm screaming out my Masters name
I'm so eager, craving the infliction of pain
You satisfy my lurid hunger, turning me over I gaze at this magic before me
Horns grown with an unmistakable look in your eye like we are falling
Drowning in the blood of our blissful ardour
I have never wanted to die in somebody's arms before
Bind my limbs and use my carcass for your forbidden play
For I am not forbidden, not to you, not on this devotional day
Can I let you see the fear in my eyes, can I push you that far
I want you to loose yourself so much that even you don't recognise who you are
Freedom comes at a price
My body is your sacrifice
Do I need to ask you twice...?
wow gorgeous Muse blown away by this lust filled ink
Will you, the chosen one, put this elemental in her place
I dream of the beast in you ravaging the innocence in me
In my fantasies, by your dominating power, you set my spirit free
Will you put your hand on the back of my head
Gather up in your fingers my snake like dreads
Pull my hair so hard and push my precious face into the dirt
Loose control now baby, show this bitch what it's like to get hurt
Let the lust take control of your animalistic mind
Control me Master, a more willing victim you will never find
Right here, right now cherish this sacred moment
Your intensity, your rule over me is so very potent
You know I would do anything your filthy mind desires
I'll be your perfect little rag doll Sire
I want to feel you deep inside me stretching beyond measure
Let me spread myself with my fingers, offer you full view of your treasure
Fucking me so hard I'm screaming out my Masters name
I'm so eager, craving the infliction of pain
You satisfy my lurid hunger, turning me over I gaze at this magic before me
Horns grown with an unmistakable look in your eye like we are falling
Drowning in the blood of our blissful ardour
I have never wanted to die in somebody's arms before
Bind my limbs and use my carcass for your forbidden play
For I am not forbidden, not to you, not on this devotional day
Can I let you see the fear in my eyes, can I push you that far
I want you to loose yourself so much that even you don't recognise who you are
Freedom comes at a price
My body is your sacrifice
Do I need to ask you twice...?
wow gorgeous Muse blown away by this lust filled ink
J_J_Jay_Jr
Forum Posts: 218
Fire of Insight
17
Joined 20th Sep 2012Forum Posts: 218
I'll tell you
I'll tell you what you were.
You were a notch on my bed post,
locker room bragging rights.
You were a cunt to receive my dick,
a receiver of my wet dream's emissions.
You were a blonde to follow the redhead,
not as good as the brunet.
You were way too short, barely up to my chin,
not fun size at all.
Your boobs were so small, most boys have more,
couldn't fill a training bra.
You were skinny, arms bony and legs gangly,
all skeletal angles and points.
You were a slippery mouth with a wet double jointed tongue,
that swallowed my cum.
Your mop head's hair, never combed, much less fixed,
made good handles to hold your mouth around my cock.
Your eyes were out of a cartoon, shadowed like a raccoon,
one green and one blue.
Your fingers were anorexic, without the grip of a noodle,
barely good to stroke me before I entered you.
Your ass was something to grip with my hands,
as I unload my cum inside you.
That's why I ignored you when I was with my guys.
So why did it shatter my heart, cause me to sink to my knees,
and wish I could die?
When you walked out of my life, with a tear in your eye,
and whispered over your shoulder,
"I loved you."
I'll tell you what you were.
You were a notch on my bed post,
locker room bragging rights.
You were a cunt to receive my dick,
a receiver of my wet dream's emissions.
You were a blonde to follow the redhead,
not as good as the brunet.
You were way too short, barely up to my chin,
not fun size at all.
Your boobs were so small, most boys have more,
couldn't fill a training bra.
You were skinny, arms bony and legs gangly,
all skeletal angles and points.
You were a slippery mouth with a wet double jointed tongue,
that swallowed my cum.
Your mop head's hair, never combed, much less fixed,
made good handles to hold your mouth around my cock.
Your eyes were out of a cartoon, shadowed like a raccoon,
one green and one blue.
Your fingers were anorexic, without the grip of a noodle,
barely good to stroke me before I entered you.
Your ass was something to grip with my hands,
as I unload my cum inside you.
That's why I ignored you when I was with my guys.
So why did it shatter my heart, cause me to sink to my knees,
and wish I could die?
When you walked out of my life, with a tear in your eye,
and whispered over your shoulder,
"I loved you."
kriticool
Forum Posts: 596
Fire of Insight
32
Joined 1st Nov 2011Forum Posts: 596
.:BROKEN:.
http://8020.photos.jpgmag.com/1631787_217645_dbc0718deb_m.jpg
hard to judge, that’s
exactly how she wanted to be
the greater greatness of indecision’s envy
she for and against her own madness
hers is that darker life and
at this point, at this level there’s
nothing but torn away faith
gone...her eyes are again glassy and
again she’s one of the broken ones
half strutting-half shuffling
creeping across brittle shards of glass
rusted nails crunch under foot and
absent is the sound of that cross she bears
yet her pale soul...knows nothing else so
she’s been actively on the lookout
scrounging for another dry taste of earth
her tongue...again dangles false promises
it slides down & away from parched lips
her hands reaching to grasp those uncaring hips
for her it’s been...too much of the moon
not enough of the sun and here
here is where that darker life
wherein her soul's fate is certain and
her madness won’t make any difference
not to him or...anyone else
...
photo: Diane Bartlett
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Semaj
Forum Posts: 52
Semaj
Thought Provoker
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Joined 9th Dec 2013Forum Posts: 52
reel from the stain of gramp walt's brain vault
an orgy of red white and blue greenbill credit sliding too fat for the coaster seats of their overindulgent candy tongue looping revelry has come to the finale of walt's day, he dons the dark mickey mask of dreams, like black crescent moon scimitars he cracks a jafar smile at the jihad he has prepared for miss minnie but first spreads snow white on his desk, lays two gum-numb tingling blizzard lines along her pink strips and buries his jet face in her pristine pure cocaine pussy landing and lap snorts his cock lust in tony scarface delirium, throws his coke powdered zombie mouse skull face back with force, stares pupil plate eye wild at snow, jams his fingers down her throat till she gags, throws her to the floor, screams "You wanna play games? You wanna play rough?" , get minnie (ball gag (red to match her bow of course) in mouth) out of the cage, tie her to the desk, she wants to say hello to my little friend!, walt's lookin at minnie, nothin mousy about this 18 year old indiana teen, wants to be a porn princess, who used to wear the minnie costume in the park during the day, walt watched through the camera of her dressing room get undressed the areola of her tits like pink suns that shot walt's golden tassel seeds from his corn stalk thinking about plowing her trim furrow, when christ he thought, i almost forgot to kill somebody's mom or dad, placed his hand on minnie's belly, thumb gently rubbin her clit, asked her if she liked it, nodded and hummed she, mm mm in approval, turned and looked at the crucifix hanging behind and smiled, ah ha, the best kids story of all time right on my wall and the father is already dying for us, and wanting the poor fellow to at least have a little fun on the way out, and thinking he had a much superior last temptation dream than an endless married missionary once a month magdalene matrimony ordered a diminutive tinker bell victoria secret angel fairy to blow some fairy dust in his eyes to ease the pain and flutter 69 upside down puttin her pouty lips on his resurrection and hooking her legs around his head giving the dying man a quenching taste of her wet river on his dry parched lips, walt was ready to go and knew, the devil had some tricks, but even the son of god could not resist the magic kingdom cum of his tinker bell and when she took in the one and only explosion of god maker seed in her mouth the spires of the castle were turning into cock towers as the cumulonimbus heavens billowed into sky vagina and lowered their velvety pink cloud pussies on the cock ramparts and spires till the night was showered in a firework of candy colored patriotic red white and blue god bless puritan porn america spunk and instead of death row murder round their necks kids wear swirly circle lollies to honor the blessing of brief pleasure in the midst of a nail to the cross existence
an orgy of red white and blue greenbill credit sliding too fat for the coaster seats of their overindulgent candy tongue looping revelry has come to the finale of walt's day, he dons the dark mickey mask of dreams, like black crescent moon scimitars he cracks a jafar smile at the jihad he has prepared for miss minnie but first spreads snow white on his desk, lays two gum-numb tingling blizzard lines along her pink strips and buries his jet face in her pristine pure cocaine pussy landing and lap snorts his cock lust in tony scarface delirium, throws his coke powdered zombie mouse skull face back with force, stares pupil plate eye wild at snow, jams his fingers down her throat till she gags, throws her to the floor, screams "You wanna play games? You wanna play rough?" , get minnie (ball gag (red to match her bow of course) in mouth) out of the cage, tie her to the desk, she wants to say hello to my little friend!, walt's lookin at minnie, nothin mousy about this 18 year old indiana teen, wants to be a porn princess, who used to wear the minnie costume in the park during the day, walt watched through the camera of her dressing room get undressed the areola of her tits like pink suns that shot walt's golden tassel seeds from his corn stalk thinking about plowing her trim furrow, when christ he thought, i almost forgot to kill somebody's mom or dad, placed his hand on minnie's belly, thumb gently rubbin her clit, asked her if she liked it, nodded and hummed she, mm mm in approval, turned and looked at the crucifix hanging behind and smiled, ah ha, the best kids story of all time right on my wall and the father is already dying for us, and wanting the poor fellow to at least have a little fun on the way out, and thinking he had a much superior last temptation dream than an endless married missionary once a month magdalene matrimony ordered a diminutive tinker bell victoria secret angel fairy to blow some fairy dust in his eyes to ease the pain and flutter 69 upside down puttin her pouty lips on his resurrection and hooking her legs around his head giving the dying man a quenching taste of her wet river on his dry parched lips, walt was ready to go and knew, the devil had some tricks, but even the son of god could not resist the magic kingdom cum of his tinker bell and when she took in the one and only explosion of god maker seed in her mouth the spires of the castle were turning into cock towers as the cumulonimbus heavens billowed into sky vagina and lowered their velvety pink cloud pussies on the cock ramparts and spires till the night was showered in a firework of candy colored patriotic red white and blue god bless puritan porn america spunk and instead of death row murder round their necks kids wear swirly circle lollies to honor the blessing of brief pleasure in the midst of a nail to the cross existence
avengingkittens
Joined 31st Jan 2015
Forum Posts: 1
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 1
Am I a monster because I am not sad as I slit your throat?
When you were once my antidote.
For the pain I felt inside.
I didn’t even have a clue.
That you didn’t even give a shit about me.
You made me want to hang from a tree.
Or lie breathless on the bathroom floor.
There is so much gore.
I hate you from my core.
Do you know how many times I broke down on the floor?
I’m covered in your blood, how can you still control my thoughts?
I just want you to get out of my fucking head.
Ha-ha, now you’re dead…
When you were once my antidote.
For the pain I felt inside.
I didn’t even have a clue.
That you didn’t even give a shit about me.
You made me want to hang from a tree.
Or lie breathless on the bathroom floor.
There is so much gore.
I hate you from my core.
Do you know how many times I broke down on the floor?
I’m covered in your blood, how can you still control my thoughts?
I just want you to get out of my fucking head.
Ha-ha, now you’re dead…
deadwolf
Forum Posts: 195
Fire of Insight
6
Joined 28th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 195
This is the End:
This is it
This is the End,
Help me kill her
Lord; help me to kill her
She needs to die, and she needs to die soon… so she can be reborn again,
In purest form,
purged from the flaws of her design,
As I was;
Finally free from her sickly wearing body, her asthma and never ending worries of nagging fears,
Desperately in need of a stranger’s hand
Yes… yes my love, this is it, the Beautiful end
```~~~… … …~~~```
You are home from work, once again;
Oh, Very Dear One, there is danger out there, there is danger here… Today
Lost in a wilderness of my anger and rage,
Waiting for you to return to me, my summer rain,
I shall soon set you free, once again, to… Truly, be with me;
I prayed East and I prayed West,
I prayed to the God Lord,
and was warmed,
I prayed to the Snake
And felt Charmed,
He gave me strength,
He gave me strength to… Set You Free, again, Yes Once again,
Set me / us / and you free… Again
````~~~D…W~~~```
I awoken, today; The killer in me’s from the killer once in you,
I Want to Kill you, and I will, I will soon darlin’, soon,
Sweet Darlin; in time you will come to see the reasoning and the rhyme, streamlined
There could be no other way for it,
The flaw in our design left to walk alone;
looking up we arise to greet you,
The killer in us rises to greet you,
He rises and We walk past the ancient rooms,
Knives hammers and poisons forlorn,
I want kill you by death, I want to feel it, I want to feel it with my bare hands
But, listen close, listen close, before you slip away into the neverness with the rider of death
I want to feel another kiss, and let it gently rain
cause soon, we will meet again
```~~~RAWR, AHHHHHHRRRRR~~~```
No my love, no, Do not stray, Do not Close your eyes or bow your head,
It is the perfect storm, the one you were choosing to ignore,
I want you to see me, the power and the glory I possess
and these hands… in these hands, it lie, eternal judgment, and sealed fate;
Never cry, oh never cry, the rider of doom never sighs, the rider and his ship are being filled
Trapped within my thoughts, a prisoner of thought, trapped in a world of false pleasures and pain
She falls silent, her eyes rolled back into her head, her body goes limp
the darkness takes you
Lost in the corridors of your own mind
that which was, and that what should of have never be
A ghost among my thoughts now, liken onto so much jetsam left foaming along the empty edges of the sea,
Left divided abandoned and wanting the impossible
And we ride out, sailing across the dark ocean and the sea eternal, in death much like in life
The flaw, in our design, left divided, conquered and walking alone
I arise and we walk over to greet you,One last time, again,
```~~~… …~~~```
This is it
This is the End,
Help me kill her
Lord; help me to kill her
She needs to die, and she needs to die soon… so she can be reborn again,
In purest form,
purged from the flaws of her design,
As I was;
Finally free from her sickly wearing body, her asthma and never ending worries of nagging fears,
Desperately in need of a stranger’s hand
Yes… yes my love, this is it, the Beautiful end
```~~~… … …~~~```
You are home from work, once again;
Oh, Very Dear One, there is danger out there, there is danger here… Today
Lost in a wilderness of my anger and rage,
Waiting for you to return to me, my summer rain,
I shall soon set you free, once again, to… Truly, be with me;
I prayed East and I prayed West,
I prayed to the God Lord,
and was warmed,
I prayed to the Snake
And felt Charmed,
He gave me strength,
He gave me strength to… Set You Free, again, Yes Once again,
Set me / us / and you free… Again
````~~~D…W~~~```
I awoken, today; The killer in me’s from the killer once in you,
I Want to Kill you, and I will, I will soon darlin’, soon,
Sweet Darlin; in time you will come to see the reasoning and the rhyme, streamlined
There could be no other way for it,
The flaw in our design left to walk alone;
looking up we arise to greet you,
The killer in us rises to greet you,
He rises and We walk past the ancient rooms,
Knives hammers and poisons forlorn,
I want kill you by death, I want to feel it, I want to feel it with my bare hands
But, listen close, listen close, before you slip away into the neverness with the rider of death
I want to feel another kiss, and let it gently rain
cause soon, we will meet again
```~~~RAWR, AHHHHHHRRRRR~~~```
No my love, no, Do not stray, Do not Close your eyes or bow your head,
It is the perfect storm, the one you were choosing to ignore,
I want you to see me, the power and the glory I possess
and these hands… in these hands, it lie, eternal judgment, and sealed fate;
Never cry, oh never cry, the rider of doom never sighs, the rider and his ship are being filled
Trapped within my thoughts, a prisoner of thought, trapped in a world of false pleasures and pain
She falls silent, her eyes rolled back into her head, her body goes limp
the darkness takes you
Lost in the corridors of your own mind
that which was, and that what should of have never be
A ghost among my thoughts now, liken onto so much jetsam left foaming along the empty edges of the sea,
Left divided abandoned and wanting the impossible
And we ride out, sailing across the dark ocean and the sea eternal, in death much like in life
The flaw, in our design, left divided, conquered and walking alone
I arise and we walk over to greet you,One last time, again,
```~~~… …~~~```
JohnFeddeler
Forum Posts: 325
Tyrant of Words
83
Joined 18th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 325
Thanks for the nod, emo1, great comp. fine work, Muse & Shaunda...
emo1
Forum Posts: 190
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 31st Oct 2011Forum Posts: 190
thank you all. you all made it hard to judge
shaunda
Forum Posts: 261
Fire of Insight
13
Joined 19th Sep 2012Forum Posts: 261
Thank you so much. :)