Poetry competition CLOSED 29th October 2014 2:46am
WINNER
LobodeSanPedro
LobodeSanPedro
RUNNER-UP:
brainsandwich
Short Poem!!
Anonymous
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LONELY NIGHTS (Fibonacci)
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JD & You
I read you slowly into the night, the femme fatale of your yearning
aspirations, If you knew, knew your words were taken in with the
same craving thirst as your masterful desires exquisitely penned,
then you too would be reading behind a locked door, there's no
better way than to read you, than naked with a bottle of JD to help
caress to on those luscious thoughts that threaten to spill over
with every syllable provided by you, for me.
I read you slowly into the night, the femme fatale of your yearning
aspirations, If you knew, knew your words were taken in with the
same craving thirst as your masterful desires exquisitely penned,
then you too would be reading behind a locked door, there's no
better way than to read you, than naked with a bottle of JD to help
caress to on those luscious thoughts that threaten to spill over
with every syllable provided by you, for me.
Not for nothing but I see a lot of poets putting up incredible work here ... But our "host" hasn't been on since this competition started and if the birth date given in the profile is to be believed - I don't think the youngster will be back.
Is it possible a mod could take over this competition?
... And maybe there should be a 30 day wait period for newbies to host.
Is it possible a mod could take over this competition?
... And maybe there should be a 30 day wait period for newbies to host.
The Smile of a Thug
Fierce with a face of casting a hex.
Looks, scary with an outgrowth of a stinging
tail.
She's Like;
a corp ruthless to crimes,
a soldier shooting with no mercy in a firing
squad,
an assasin that tortures his victim to death.
Her presence brings forth;
fear,
pain,
panic,
truth,
confession, the worst you could do to yourself
is to dare the otherwise.
Her anger is visible even in the darkest shade.
Wrinkles in thug of war with her face's skin.
She's a radical thug.
She 'll never compromise her horror for pity.
But all I see is a contrary face.
A maladaptive looks of thug.
She's like a cease fire between her thug looks
and my repulsive smile.
The only shot I get on my forehead from her is
inspiration.
I tell the blind what I see beyond the horizon of
her venom.
Do you See how innocent she looks?
I ask her diety if she is sinless...
she's Cute,
caring and lovely.
Oh ma God....
She's the greatest smile on the sadest face.
If all you see is a thug,
Then you'd probably gotten your iris distorted.
She's the devil you see.
But she's like a god to me, and each day she
gives me flows with even greater grace....
Fierce with a face of casting a hex.
Looks, scary with an outgrowth of a stinging
tail.
She's Like;
a corp ruthless to crimes,
a soldier shooting with no mercy in a firing
squad,
an assasin that tortures his victim to death.
Her presence brings forth;
fear,
pain,
panic,
truth,
confession, the worst you could do to yourself
is to dare the otherwise.
Her anger is visible even in the darkest shade.
Wrinkles in thug of war with her face's skin.
She's a radical thug.
She 'll never compromise her horror for pity.
But all I see is a contrary face.
A maladaptive looks of thug.
She's like a cease fire between her thug looks
and my repulsive smile.
The only shot I get on my forehead from her is
inspiration.
I tell the blind what I see beyond the horizon of
her venom.
Do you See how innocent she looks?
I ask her diety if she is sinless...
she's Cute,
caring and lovely.
Oh ma God....
She's the greatest smile on the sadest face.
If all you see is a thug,
Then you'd probably gotten your iris distorted.
She's the devil you see.
But she's like a god to me, and each day she
gives me flows with even greater grace....
Anonymous
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LobodeSanPedro said:Not for nothing but I see a lot of poets putting up incredible work here ... But our "host" hasn't been on since this competition started and if the birth date given in the profile is to be believed - I don't think the youngster will be back.
Is it possible a mod could take over this competition?
... And maybe there should be a 30 day wait period for newbies to host.
They might be back before the competition ends and they will be reminded. If they don't return at all after a stipulated time, the comp will go into voting.
The 30 days period is an interesting idea and has been noted. Thank you LSP.
Is it possible a mod could take over this competition?
... And maybe there should be a 30 day wait period for newbies to host.
They might be back before the competition ends and they will be reminded. If they don't return at all after a stipulated time, the comp will go into voting.
The 30 days period is an interesting idea and has been noted. Thank you LSP.
