RUN
Carpe_Noctem
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Run
Rhymes with sun
something to catch up to
as its sinking
Making its way
to chase you another day
Ticking away as time fritters away
its all relative
in an off hand way
Grace
IDryad
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IDryad
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Running
I have been here before
where hearts beat stronger
the colours are brighter
the air is fresher
here hurts are deeper
I absorb observe better
the world feels smaller
laughters are mockingly shriller
I shouldn't run
again...yet I will
if staying feels
too frightening.
I have been here before
where hearts beat stronger
the colours are brighter
the air is fresher
here hurts are deeper
I absorb observe better
the world feels smaller
laughters are mockingly shriller
I shouldn't run
again...yet I will
if staying feels
too frightening.
Anonymous
Boys of October
The Hallow Eve’s full moon hung low
the glint of steel silhouetted in it’s glow
his hand held the knife
wanting a slice of her life
maybe snip off a nipple like a red rose
then perhaps all her pretty painted toes
she bolted and ran
falling right into his plan
he whooped; she hollered
she zagged; he follered
she tripped on descending steps
he caught the rail and his breath
a deserted park what a thrill
a seldom used baseball field
she hid in a dark dugout corner
he taunted saying he had something for her
a struggle ensued
she got away, who knew
dashed towards the pitcher’s mound
tripped on the rubber, sprawled on the ground
screaming and crawling across the wet grass
he was on top of her, again the knife flashed
covered her face with her bare hands
while the blade swung, again and again
so orgasmic were her sickly groans
each time the steel glanced off bone
there was no getting away
from his frenzied foreplay
but there in her eyes flashed a glimmer of hope
it caused him to stop in mid stroke
he wiped the bloodied knife on her torn dress
asked what’s up; demanded she confess
she gurgled, she giggled through the torn smile on her face
saying it wasn’t just anyone she allowed to get to third base
his look was priceless staring deep in her eyes
she allowed the slightest reflection of his own demise
her lips curled back revealing fangs of white steel
as she reached between his legs for her next meal
with razor sharp claws she clamped and sliced
he knew the pleasure of pain, and this was so nice
she rose above him, horns on her head
he knew it was too late to run or beg
her black wings majestically unfurled
her foul breath made all straight things curl
with a swipe of her claw she sliced open his gut
with a flick of a fingernail cut off his nuts
then with a raised claw and a look of pure hate
she shot a glance towards third base then home plate
snarling, “Sport, it’s the bottom of the ninth and your call
you’ve two outs, two strikes, and…..no balls……”
The Hallow Eve’s full moon hung low
the glint of steel silhouetted in it’s glow
his hand held the knife
wanting a slice of her life
maybe snip off a nipple like a red rose
then perhaps all her pretty painted toes
she bolted and ran
falling right into his plan
he whooped; she hollered
she zagged; he follered
she tripped on descending steps
he caught the rail and his breath
a deserted park what a thrill
a seldom used baseball field
she hid in a dark dugout corner
he taunted saying he had something for her
a struggle ensued
she got away, who knew
dashed towards the pitcher’s mound
tripped on the rubber, sprawled on the ground
screaming and crawling across the wet grass
he was on top of her, again the knife flashed
covered her face with her bare hands
while the blade swung, again and again
so orgasmic were her sickly groans
each time the steel glanced off bone
there was no getting away
from his frenzied foreplay
but there in her eyes flashed a glimmer of hope
it caused him to stop in mid stroke
he wiped the bloodied knife on her torn dress
asked what’s up; demanded she confess
she gurgled, she giggled through the torn smile on her face
saying it wasn’t just anyone she allowed to get to third base
his look was priceless staring deep in her eyes
she allowed the slightest reflection of his own demise
her lips curled back revealing fangs of white steel
as she reached between his legs for her next meal
with razor sharp claws she clamped and sliced
he knew the pleasure of pain, and this was so nice
she rose above him, horns on her head
he knew it was too late to run or beg
her black wings majestically unfurled
her foul breath made all straight things curl
with a swipe of her claw she sliced open his gut
with a flick of a fingernail cut off his nuts
then with a raised claw and a look of pure hate
she shot a glance towards third base then home plate
snarling, “Sport, it’s the bottom of the ninth and your call
you’ve two outs, two strikes, and…..no balls……”
Anonymous
Thank you all for sharing. I have read each poem three times over and see worth in each.
The judging was entirely mine, and a matter of personal preference.
If you want my comments on your own entry, please post your poem in your "my poems" pages and just drop me a note requesting feedback.
Thanks again and keep writing, poets.
The judging was entirely mine, and a matter of personal preference.
If you want my comments on your own entry, please post your poem in your "my poems" pages and just drop me a note requesting feedback.
Thanks again and keep writing, poets.
Magnetron
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Fire of Insight
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Grace
IDryad
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IDryad
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Congratulations Magnetron for winning the competition! Primogenito and Easydrops as runners up. Great entries all. Tornado...wow!
Anonymous
No worries, magnetron. A win is a win Well played sir! Congratulations to you and everyone who entered. HollyDove thank you for a well 'run' competition! Grace :-)
Anonymous
Honored.
EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
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D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
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Congratulations Magnetron, Primogenito and Easydrops for your winning entries...great entries all around! Thank you for the challenging comp HollyDove. Well done, keep them coming...