Poetry competition CLOSED 23rd October 2014 4:29pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNER-UP:
BoFantastic
DUP ROCKS MY WORLD
I fell from the wEb
Knitting my web about the net to make a cob of Sektion8ty. My spin got stucked, like in a game of death with no umpire, I had no referee. I mistakenly stepped on a mat rolled o're a deep hole- then down the hole I travelled. As the fall continues, my voice echoed for help, lo and behold I hit the bottom; deep, deep beyond underground, deep down Mariana's trench -It's the deepest trench a swimmer can ever kiss
Shattered in fears and lost in my Ignorance, I regained consciousness.
Back to my feet, on the qui vive
Like in church; I sat on the pew and listened to multitudes of preachers present sermons from the alter.
In my heart of congregation, I acknowledged a cannon.
Within minutes the Deep Underground's fang injected a venom in me called 'poye-tree'. The venom reacted with the dexterity in me and I began to convulse my obscure talent.
Looking like a strange creature amongst the poetry breeds; I took my penknive, sharpened my nib, dipped it in a bowl of ink and started my journey like a lost thinker through DUP town. I held unto my new dreams though initially they seemed twisted. I came across tyrants of words from dangerous mind who were refined by fire of insight, they got me provoked in thoughts. Then the angels came around with swords of words to guide me through the dark shadows to the mistress of the Underground.
I've made mistakes.
I've hurt my neighbours with hate.
Some where around the corner, I was taught to love and shine.
Hopefully, I'll be a better neighbour than 'nine'
I'm pro'bly still a poor writer after sinking in the deep for over 100days but I'm obviously better than the novice I was. I stumbled o're this town, but I'd rather remain in the deep than swim back to the bank where money lies......
In this town, I'm part of it's grandure.
I sip from the inexperienced brochures.
I grow on the feeds of the experienced critiques.
DUP what have I to requite?
Knitting my web about the net to make a cob of Sektion8ty. My spin got stucked, like in a game of death with no umpire, I had no referee. I mistakenly stepped on a mat rolled o're a deep hole- then down the hole I travelled. As the fall continues, my voice echoed for help, lo and behold I hit the bottom; deep, deep beyond underground, deep down Mariana's trench -It's the deepest trench a swimmer can ever kiss
Shattered in fears and lost in my Ignorance, I regained consciousness.
Back to my feet, on the qui vive
Like in church; I sat on the pew and listened to multitudes of preachers present sermons from the alter.
In my heart of congregation, I acknowledged a cannon.
Within minutes the Deep Underground's fang injected a venom in me called 'poye-tree'. The venom reacted with the dexterity in me and I began to convulse my obscure talent.
Looking like a strange creature amongst the poetry breeds; I took my penknive, sharpened my nib, dipped it in a bowl of ink and started my journey like a lost thinker through DUP town. I held unto my new dreams though initially they seemed twisted. I came across tyrants of words from dangerous mind who were refined by fire of insight, they got me provoked in thoughts. Then the angels came around with swords of words to guide me through the dark shadows to the mistress of the Underground.
I've made mistakes.
I've hurt my neighbours with hate.
Some where around the corner, I was taught to love and shine.
Hopefully, I'll be a better neighbour than 'nine'
I'm pro'bly still a poor writer after sinking in the deep for over 100days but I'm obviously better than the novice I was. I stumbled o're this town, but I'd rather remain in the deep than swim back to the bank where money lies......
In this town, I'm part of it's grandure.
I sip from the inexperienced brochures.
I grow on the feeds of the experienced critiques.
DUP what have I to requite?
CONGRATULATIONS to the winners of this comp and once again thank you all for participating. Thanks Jes and John for your contributions...sorry you're above the "age driving requirement."
SWITCHBLADE: WINNER
REX24: 1st RUNNER-UP
BOFANTASTIC: 2nd RUNNER-UP
SWITCHBLADE: WINNER
REX24: 1st RUNNER-UP
BOFANTASTIC: 2nd RUNNER-UP
Anonymous
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Lena-underneath said:Congratulations Switchblade! Reks and BoFantastic, you guys were awesome, congrats!
Thank you Mr. EngrVV for creating a fun comp. It was an honor to participate among some very fine writers ; )
I had a hard time deciding between you and Bo because both of you had some positive and inspiring points. Please join again in my next comp
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@EngrVV
Thank you Mr. EngrVV for creating a fun comp. It was an honor to participate among some very fine writers ; )
I had a hard time deciding between you and Bo because both of you had some positive and inspiring points. Please join again in my next comp
... @EngrVV
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