Poetry competition CLOSED 3rd October 2014 11:32am
WINNER
blue_angel
blue_angel
RUNNERS-UP:
Grace
and J_J_Jay_Jr
Page:
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Anonymous
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here's a freestyle on the spot one for you... Inspired by: JohnFeddeler, Awakenedsoul &
and yours for the first two lines...
-masking minds -
sexy maiden,
a star wilted raven
bearing a silken tongue,
weaving her beat on a sacred drum
tear filled clouds colliding
with words rousing the mind
creating scornful worlds
with an ink dipped sword
back alley man
with fire in his hands
slicing his verse to
paralyze our nerves
those blistering twist
consume our wits
noir bleeding streets
come alive in your midst
those pallid letters carry
our senses to the edge of forever.
gather in the lustrous masses,
for the poetry pouring Masters!
and yours for the first two lines...
-masking minds -
sexy maiden,
a star wilted raven
bearing a silken tongue,
weaving her beat on a sacred drum
tear filled clouds colliding
with words rousing the mind
creating scornful worlds
with an ink dipped sword
back alley man
with fire in his hands
slicing his verse to
paralyze our nerves
those blistering twist
consume our wits
noir bleeding streets
come alive in your midst
those pallid letters carry
our senses to the edge of forever.
gather in the lustrous masses,
for the poetry pouring Masters!
DU residents
A masked man
a red haired girl
a sad looking young man
strumming his guitar
a beautiful naked woman
looking out of the window
animes, purpled haired
sensuous poses
Soulful eyes
rockers with their guitars
Cute bears on helicopters
pretty girl with pink hair
a few scythmen and flowers
a leopard and a wolf
with the cats and angels
hats and caps...pirates
citizens of DU district
population 17577 and growing
here they are poets
orators, story tellers
at times soapbox warriors
showing their true self
In DU the pompous and the sarky
the romantic and the pragmatic
the arrogant and the humble
live together
DU citizens
they don't look any stranger
than residents of anywhere.
A masked man
a red haired girl
a sad looking young man
strumming his guitar
a beautiful naked woman
looking out of the window
animes, purpled haired
sensuous poses
Soulful eyes
rockers with their guitars
Cute bears on helicopters
pretty girl with pink hair
a few scythmen and flowers
a leopard and a wolf
with the cats and angels
hats and caps...pirates
citizens of DU district
population 17577 and growing
here they are poets
orators, story tellers
at times soapbox warriors
showing their true self
In DU the pompous and the sarky
the romantic and the pragmatic
the arrogant and the humble
live together
DU citizens
they don't look any stranger
than residents of anywhere.
Anonymous
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Guess who...
Sun sets, dusk rises in hue
Lights out
Moon lights o're her
Blue rays shones love through her eyes
She's blue
White-blue for a clue
I see her aroused emotions grinning in the blues' rhythm
She's blue
Oval face, slender neck
Long hair, outstanding eyebrows
She's an embodied agent of beauty
Her avatar blue like the avatar movie
Who is cute?
Take a queue on my last point of view
Truth is, she has no one next to her
Look through my iris and get your vision tuned to mine; you will see, she's incompareable.
She's sweet
Her ink touch is 'elixirc'
The sweet stick in her mouth is a quill ready to be sharpened into a pen nib with her Penknive.
Touch me with your ink and I'll turn to diamond
Sun sets, dusk rises in hue
Lights out
Moon lights o're her
Blue rays shones love through her eyes
She's blue
White-blue for a clue
I see her aroused emotions grinning in the blues' rhythm
She's blue
Oval face, slender neck
Long hair, outstanding eyebrows
She's an embodied agent of beauty
Her avatar blue like the avatar movie
Who is cute?
Take a queue on my last point of view
Truth is, she has no one next to her
Look through my iris and get your vision tuned to mine; you will see, she's incompareable.
She's sweet
Her ink touch is 'elixirc'
The sweet stick in her mouth is a quill ready to be sharpened into a pen nib with her Penknive.
Touch me with your ink and I'll turn to diamond
So, why is my avatar a coffee cup?
This is the answer.
I drink my coffee black.
Stirring sugar into it,
Is the vision I have of you,
As we sat sipping in the morning,
And the taste of your lips,
That still lingers,
Decades later.
Cream mixed in becomes,
The liquid chocolate of your skin,
Still brings tingling to mine,
And is a memory,
That delights my eyes,
Decades later.
Decades later,
Still,
Heartache,
Heartbreak,
Hurt,
Regret.
In lament,
I drink my coffee black.
This is the answer.
I drink my coffee black.
Stirring sugar into it,
Is the vision I have of you,
As we sat sipping in the morning,
And the taste of your lips,
That still lingers,
Decades later.
Cream mixed in becomes,
The liquid chocolate of your skin,
Still brings tingling to mine,
And is a memory,
That delights my eyes,
Decades later.
Decades later,
Still,
Heartache,
Heartbreak,
Hurt,
Regret.
In lament,
I drink my coffee black.
HEAVENLY GRACE
Embrace the wood nymph of heavenly grace
grace sculptured with warm embrace
Visions of your poems inspire my mission
mission of charity only seen in my visions
Desire to help others becomes a roaring fire
fire within the depths of my wanton desire
Kind words of yours fill my empty mind
mind of mine thinking you’re one of a kind
Whispers of your loving heart in silent vespers
vespers culled from verses of poetic whispers
Wind shall carry your poems to the blind
blind to see the beauty of the passing wind
Desires to learn the limits caught in fire
fire ignited with love in cascading desires
Romantic you are and may seem pedantic
pedantic only to those who are not romantic
Seeking love among the stars when nobody is looking
looking at your beautiful creative mind is all I’m seeking
[Inspired by Idryad (Grace), meaning wood nymph written in mirror sestet]
Embrace the wood nymph of heavenly grace
grace sculptured with warm embrace
Visions of your poems inspire my mission
mission of charity only seen in my visions
Desire to help others becomes a roaring fire
fire within the depths of my wanton desire
Kind words of yours fill my empty mind
mind of mine thinking you’re one of a kind
Whispers of your loving heart in silent vespers
vespers culled from verses of poetic whispers
Wind shall carry your poems to the blind
blind to see the beauty of the passing wind
Desires to learn the limits caught in fire
fire ignited with love in cascading desires
Romantic you are and may seem pedantic
pedantic only to those who are not romantic
Seeking love among the stars when nobody is looking
looking at your beautiful creative mind is all I’m seeking
[Inspired by Idryad (Grace), meaning wood nymph written in mirror sestet]
Anonymous
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Oh my,,, I've been away, so sorry for my delay in response. Thank you utterly to all of you for the congrats. I'm taken by the response, all of the entries were wonderful. Thank you, Penknife for hosting this awesome comp.! And also, I send a huge congrats to, JJ and Grace! With much respect - blue angel
