Poetry competition CLOSED 24th September 2014 8:25am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
Oh please help, wont you?
CellarDoor954
Forum Posts: 25
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 25th Jan 2014Forum Posts: 25
HELP NOW!!!!!
PLEASE HELP ME! WHAT THE FUCK DO I HAVE TO DO
TO GET THE MESSAGE THROUGH THAT I NEED YOU!
YOU STUPID FUCKING WHORE!
WHY'D YOU SHUT THE DOOR?!
I NEED YOU NOW MORE THAN EVER BEFORE!
THIS IS FUCKING BULLSHIT!
YOU ARE FUCKING USELESS!
WON'T SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP ME GET THROUGH THIS?!
IT HURTS MY PRIDE TO HURT THIS MUCH INSIDE!
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN MY LIFE LAST NIGHT I ACTUALLY CRIED!
I'M FUCKING WORTHLESS AND PATHETIC!
WON'T SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP ME?! OH FINE, FORGET IT!
GUESS IT'S TIME TO BLOW MY BRAINS OUT!
I'LL JUST STICK THIS GUN IN MY MOUTH NOW!
BYE!
PLEASE HELP ME! WHAT THE FUCK DO I HAVE TO DO
TO GET THE MESSAGE THROUGH THAT I NEED YOU!
YOU STUPID FUCKING WHORE!
WHY'D YOU SHUT THE DOOR?!
I NEED YOU NOW MORE THAN EVER BEFORE!
THIS IS FUCKING BULLSHIT!
YOU ARE FUCKING USELESS!
WON'T SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP ME GET THROUGH THIS?!
IT HURTS MY PRIDE TO HURT THIS MUCH INSIDE!
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN MY LIFE LAST NIGHT I ACTUALLY CRIED!
I'M FUCKING WORTHLESS AND PATHETIC!
WON'T SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP ME?! OH FINE, FORGET IT!
GUESS IT'S TIME TO BLOW MY BRAINS OUT!
I'LL JUST STICK THIS GUN IN MY MOUTH NOW!
BYE!
Juan
Joined 8th Sep 2014
Forum Posts: 1
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 1
As the clock is ticking
Darkness fills the day
The predator is lurking
Ready to take his prey
"Come to me my pretty
Please don't be afraid
I promise not to hurt you
I love you, don't you know?
Fear runs through her veins!
Hold yourself together
Do not show your pain
Do not let him know that
You are so afraid
Tears streaming down her face!
Deep deep breath
Control your shake
For it will be over soon
Remember to say you love him
Save for one more bruise.
Hands so fast so violent
Boots so hard the kick
Please dear God just end this
I cant take much more of this.
He warned me not to speak
Embarrassment that I am
Pathetic and useless and vile
Unable to fulfil my man
No! Do not blame yourself here
it's exactly what he wants
I'm expecting you to stop this
Stop these beatings of your soul.
Time to show your strength!
Get up now you can do this
There is no one left to help
Find it deep within you
Stand strong
Be brave
Break out
I'm begging me right now
Fight for us.
Survive!
Its me and I and us
No one else can hear
we are all alone
Please I'm begging me deeply
My soul, my heart, my bones
He broke us so so deeply
But he said I love you!
A true predator on his hunt!
Darkness fills the day
The predator is lurking
Ready to take his prey
"Come to me my pretty
Please don't be afraid
I promise not to hurt you
I love you, don't you know?
Fear runs through her veins!
Hold yourself together
Do not show your pain
Do not let him know that
You are so afraid
Tears streaming down her face!
Deep deep breath
Control your shake
For it will be over soon
Remember to say you love him
Save for one more bruise.
Hands so fast so violent
Boots so hard the kick
Please dear God just end this
I cant take much more of this.
He warned me not to speak
Embarrassment that I am
Pathetic and useless and vile
Unable to fulfil my man
No! Do not blame yourself here
it's exactly what he wants
I'm expecting you to stop this
Stop these beatings of your soul.
Time to show your strength!
Get up now you can do this
There is no one left to help
Find it deep within you
Stand strong
Be brave
Break out
I'm begging me right now
Fight for us.
Survive!
Its me and I and us
No one else can hear
we are all alone
Please I'm begging me deeply
My soul, my heart, my bones
He broke us so so deeply
But he said I love you!
A true predator on his hunt!
naathalie___
moongirl
Joined 22nd Sep 2014
Forum Posts: 23
moongirl
Twisted Dreamer
Forum Posts: 23
We live everyday the same,
yet everything seems to change.
You're not by my side this time,
when you said you'd always be there.
All I see around me is people going
on with their lives, breathing
perfectly while water is filling my
lungs. I'm drowning in my sorrows.
I need you here this time.
You need to be here for me.
Come back and save me.
You're the one that knows me best,
I thought you weren't like the rest.
I guess I was wrong to think
you would love me forever and
never leave my side.
I will swallow my pride.
I'm sorry for pushing you away.
There will come a day
where i won't be so insecure
about myself.
Please come and don't leave me again.
I am isolated, victim of my own self.
My mind has killed the hope I was
holding on so dearly to.
I am in a dark room.
There is no windows, no walls.
There is only me and
my thoughts.
Please come save me,
you've done it before.
Please, I need you once more.
yet everything seems to change.
You're not by my side this time,
when you said you'd always be there.
All I see around me is people going
on with their lives, breathing
perfectly while water is filling my
lungs. I'm drowning in my sorrows.
I need you here this time.
You need to be here for me.
Come back and save me.
You're the one that knows me best,
I thought you weren't like the rest.
I guess I was wrong to think
you would love me forever and
never leave my side.
I will swallow my pride.
I'm sorry for pushing you away.
There will come a day
where i won't be so insecure
about myself.
Please come and don't leave me again.
I am isolated, victim of my own self.
My mind has killed the hope I was
holding on so dearly to.
I am in a dark room.
There is no windows, no walls.
There is only me and
my thoughts.
Please come save me,
you've done it before.
Please, I need you once more.
sektioN8ty
King Sammy
Forum Posts: 203
King Sammy
Thought Provoker
9
Joined 2nd July 2014Forum Posts: 203
Bottomless pit
Ahhhhhhhhhhh!
Dreams of falling like a skydiver
Sinking face down a bottomless pit
Ahhhhhhhhhhh!
Echoes of my screams resounding in my ears
Dark tunnel keeps swallowing me up
I alone with the dark
The silence of the nights couldn't comprehend the nuisance
I will soon meet up with my tears; they've gushed down my eyes like a stream
Down the tunnel is a lake of my tears I believe
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Nightmares, the horror, frightful moments as a kid
Next door to dada and mama
They can't hear me though
I'm in a sleep, crying for help
Oh gush, Mama percieve my fears in my dreams
Dada cut that bottomless pit in my dreams with your cutlass
The more I scream, the more help flees
The more I go down the pit, the more my dream prolongs
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!
Only time can help
Morning, come quickly please
I'm going through a hell of a night.
Sun rise, come please, won't you?
heeeeeeeeeeeellllllllllllpppp!
heeeeeeeeeeeellllllllllllpppp!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Ahhhhhhhhhhh!
Dreams of falling like a skydiver
Sinking face down a bottomless pit
Ahhhhhhhhhhh!
Echoes of my screams resounding in my ears
Dark tunnel keeps swallowing me up
I alone with the dark
The silence of the nights couldn't comprehend the nuisance
I will soon meet up with my tears; they've gushed down my eyes like a stream
Down the tunnel is a lake of my tears I believe
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Nightmares, the horror, frightful moments as a kid
Next door to dada and mama
They can't hear me though
I'm in a sleep, crying for help
Oh gush, Mama percieve my fears in my dreams
Dada cut that bottomless pit in my dreams with your cutlass
The more I scream, the more help flees
The more I go down the pit, the more my dream prolongs
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!
Only time can help
Morning, come quickly please
I'm going through a hell of a night.
Sun rise, come please, won't you?
heeeeeeeeeeeellllllllllllpppp!
heeeeeeeeeeeellllllllllllpppp!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
BoFantastic
Forum Posts: 333
Thought Provoker
7
Joined 24th Apr 2014Forum Posts: 333
Dispensation Of Fire And Water
fire, fire do as you're told
find a place in space
and burn a hole
water, water do as I say
go to that hole
and fill it up right away
fire and water obey
set things right
make my problem dissolved
so I can sleep tonight
fire, fire
when you're done expire
water, water
when you're done retire
Do as I decree
do this for me
fire, fire do as you're told
find a place in space
and burn a hole
water, water do as I say
go to that hole
and fill it up right away
fire and water obey
set things right
make my problem dissolved
so I can sleep tonight
fire, fire
when you're done expire
water, water
when you're done retire
Do as I decree
do this for me