Poetry competition CLOSED 11th September 2014 1:47pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNER-UP:
EngrVV
Going The Distance
sektioN8ty
King Sammy
Forum Posts: 203
King Sammy
Thought Provoker
9
Joined 2nd July 2014Forum Posts: 203
I'm coming for you
How far is pluto to rocket an astronaut?
Cut through the polars, the East is just like a
miles stretch from the west.
You'd probably be chasing shadows when
your ambition is to throw your emotions into
the thin air.
How far is love and how close is an alternative?
Maybe alternatives are far from my options.
She's the dream I awake to live for.
It's impossible to cage the wind, but I ll travel
along it till I find her enclosed within my ribs
No essence of rubbing time to the mud if my
intentions were to end on skype or a book of
faces; It would have been a long dropped call!
I'll search for her like the FBI, she's guilty of
stealing my heart through my gadgets.
If she's got the voice I hear, she's an angel
If that's her looks, she's a beauty goddess
I'll risk travelling to mercury for love
I'm coming for you my love
I've got my passport ready
I'm coming to take you along
jemac
Forum Posts: 237
Dangerous Mind
4
Joined 25th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 237
If she found her own true love
and all they shared was true
he wanted to be more than
just her lover
then no ocean or land
could keep her from
venturing to where
they could fall into each other.
and all they shared was true
he wanted to be more than
just her lover
then no ocean or land
could keep her from
venturing to where
they could fall into each other.
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1781
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1781
Grace, beautiful good luck!
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1781
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1781
sektioN8ty, good job good luck!
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1781
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1781
jemac, Thanks for your entry good luck!
dartford
Paul S...
Forum Posts: 249
Paul S...
Tyrant of Words
29
Joined 13th June 2013 Forum Posts: 249
let's keep a little mystery,
imagine if we met...
what would she think of me
and imagine the regret...
imagine if we met...
what would she think of me
and imagine the regret...
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1781
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1781
Hi Paul, Thanks for your entry, good luck!
RalfTheNose
Forum Posts: 72
Twisted Dreamer
2
Joined 7th Aug 2014Forum Posts: 72
I kissed a girl I'd met online
Was sorta disappointing
True my tongue did tingle
Seeking out her lips
But lapping at the 'lectric screen
Her face scrunched up and puckered
Left me limp with bell drooped low
Ma' cockle chilled with burrrrrrrrrr
http://lapromenadecult.files.wordpress.com/2011/05/baci-virtuali-online.jpg
Was sorta disappointing
True my tongue did tingle
Seeking out her lips
But lapping at the 'lectric screen
Her face scrunched up and puckered
Left me limp with bell drooped low
Ma' cockle chilled with burrrrrrrrrr
http://lapromenadecult.files.wordpress.com/2011/05/baci-virtuali-online.jpg
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1781
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1781
RalfTheNose
Thanks for your entry, good luck!
Thanks for your entry, good luck!
Anonymous
Dreamer's Edge
I no longer care
for the perpendicular and horizontal
arrows on flight
with the greasy residue of a snake oil
I no longer dare
to surrender to empyrean to-getter-ness
under the same
overcast countenance of hum-drum-whims
I no longer bear
the ironic sighs of shallow dissonance
half halted adolescence
receded to the distance of the dead
Let these words, fall
like ashen flakes
on oceans of allusions
Let them ripple
on dormant dreams
shifting mountains
outward,
toppling fences
crumpling
the blind moon
flung to dreamer's edge.
I no longer care
for the perpendicular and horizontal
arrows on flight
with the greasy residue of a snake oil
I no longer dare
to surrender to empyrean to-getter-ness
under the same
overcast countenance of hum-drum-whims
I no longer bear
the ironic sighs of shallow dissonance
half halted adolescence
receded to the distance of the dead
Let these words, fall
like ashen flakes
on oceans of allusions
Let them ripple
on dormant dreams
shifting mountains
outward,
toppling fences
crumpling
the blind moon
flung to dreamer's edge.
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1781
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1781
Thank you to ALL for participating, and while there can be only one winner,
in my eyes, your all winners! Congratulations to Phoenix_Snow for taking the win!
VV, and Rina great job too!
in my eyes, your all winners! Congratulations to Phoenix_Snow for taking the win!
VV, and Rina great job too!
malin69
malin
Forum Posts: 820
malin
Dangerous Mind
5
Joined 12th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 820
Thank you Zazzles for this comp, and congratulation for Phoenix_Snow, VV and Vee! A nice trio of winners!
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1781
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1781
Malin, how sweet of you to say! Your entry was also very good!
RalfTheNose
Forum Posts: 72
Twisted Dreamer
2
Joined 7th Aug 2014Forum Posts: 72
Congrats to Phoenix for a great read and kudos to the runners-UP! Thanks to you, as well ,Zazzles...twas a fun ride:D
Grace
IDryad
Forum Posts: 16212
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 16212
Congratulations to the winner Phoenix, and runners up EngrVV and Rina. Excellent writes all.