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Evolving Competition

Angel_Of_Darkness
Rune L
Fire of Insight
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Joined 22nd Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 608

Poetry Contest

Make a new rule for the poet below you
Write a poem and the rules for the poet below you.  

Rules for the competition: each poet must post their poem as both a reply and on their poem list. They must also read the poem of the poet after them and comment on it on their poem list. Endless entries per poet,  but no commenting on the thread.

Rules for the first entry: 20 lines or less,  rhyming, and dark.

Angel_Of_Darkness
Rune L
Fire of Insight
United States 2awards
Joined 22nd Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 608

Change of rules: commenting allowed.  Anybody?

Arthur
The literate one
Lost Thinker
Australia 1awards
Joined 11th July 2014
Forum Posts: 78

The darkness is all around me,
A dark pulsating sea.
a sea trying to drown me,
why can't you see?
you stand there watching,
as I sink down to the dark things.
and I'm slowly drowning,
falling to the place, where the evil sings.
the darkness pulls me down,
and all you do is frown.

Do you enjoy this?
watching me die?
I hear them hiss,
fallen angles of the sky.
the devils laughing,
they know I'm here,
they know I'm coming...
I scream for help, why don't you hear?
I've finished drowning, this is it,
I slowly fall... Down to the pit...


(ok, next entry. A ballad styled horror story, 14 lines...)

Angel_Of_Darkness
Rune L
Fire of Insight
United States 2awards
Joined 22nd Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 608

I honestly thought more people would try this...

Arthur
The literate one
Lost Thinker
Australia 1awards
Joined 11th July 2014
Forum Posts: 78

I hope they do...

Angel_Of_Darkness
Rune L
Fire of Insight
United States 2awards
Joined 22nd Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 608

Did the forums go down?

I mean,  absolutely no posts between 5:30 and 9:30?

Arthur
The literate one
Lost Thinker
Australia 1awards
Joined 11th July 2014
Forum Posts: 78

Either that or no one posted

joeregan
Joey Regan
Lost Thinker
Joined 2nd Jan 2014
Forum Posts: 13

The horror on his face
dreading and distraught
nothing but a silence
and a single growing thought

but at a last a call
he jumps at the reply
he thinks "is this for real?
could he possibly be the guy?"

He was to nervous to look
or even peek at the man
his blood is pumping
as he opens with his hand

The fear is over. no ghoul or ghost
rather someone new, has responded to this post


next entry. 4 haiku's that make a story

Arthur
The literate one
Lost Thinker
Australia 1awards
Joined 11th July 2014
Forum Posts: 78

joeregan said:The horror on his face
dreading and distraught
nothing but a silence
and a single growing thought

but at a last a call
he jumps at the reply
he thinks "is this for real?
could he possibly be the guy?"

He was to nervous to look
or even peek at the man
his blood is pumping
as he opens with his hand

The fear is over. no ghoul or ghost
rather someone new, has responded to this post


next entry. 4 haiku's that make a story


has this been posted in your poems list?
if so, what is it titled?

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