Poetry competition CLOSED 28th August 2014 7:36pm
WINNER
RalfTheNose
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I Sicken Me

ExercisingDemons
Thought Provoker
Canada 1awards
Joined 30th July 2014
Forum Posts: 11

I'm out of liquor.
I've never felt sicker.
My friend better get here quick,
or I might do something savage.

The nasty remedy, I've got to have it.
Just a force of habit.
Out of money, I grab it.

I'm an addict, who drinks until I'm sick.
Spirit broken, but I still can't quit.
I need my fix, I'm about to flip.

Being sober, has me looking over my shoulder.
Uncomfortable with thoughts of comfort.
Deserted thoughts of concern,
to be a sovereign beast.

A lonely one at that, who needs a drink.
Need out of my confining box, to freely think.


MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5594

Congrats on your first win, Ralf!

RalfTheNose
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 7th Aug 2014
Forum Posts: 72

Thank you, HowlingHeart, for this honor, and my first WIN, to boot:D  There was a passel of beautifully saddened words in the group...I especially thought Ennui's was perfectly said, and thought I'd be handing out congratulation, instead of thank you's.

Thanks to you, as well, dear Madame.  Your a shining star among many a blinking lights.  

Waterviolet
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 14th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 628

Congrats ralf way to taker like a champ

RalfTheNose
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 7th Aug 2014
Forum Posts: 72

Waterviolet said:Congrats ralf way to taker like a champ

What can I say, Waterviolet?

I'm a maker, a baker, a candlestick taker...
But I'll flip his ass over, if'n he's a damn faker (YUMMY:D)

anonymouslyhere
Pariah Shadow
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 31st Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 1633

Congrats ralf! Nice comp glad I was apart of it, well deserved ralf.

Waterviolet
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 14th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 628

Well put ralf cheers

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