Poetry competition CLOSED 27th August 2014 10:41am
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dkzksaxxas_DanielX (DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
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Who's Your DADA!

poet Anonymous




Dads on Lease

I got two
One with each sister

the first was notorious for
Losing all of our money
down at the bookies or
in the pub

I'd seen him passed out
Drugged
the smell of liquor  
and tobacco wafting past the door
I'd wait behind

quietly worrying
Too often  

the second was decent
a workaholic
devoted
to my mother anyway

and she's not a fan of mine
so I lost another borrowed "dad"

and
the  "real" one


he went back to his wife
and kids
I was told

We've never met
and he's likely dead

poet Anonymous


THIS IS NOT AN ENTRY

Fingerprints Gasp


Hands move
float on air
shaping
nothing there?
guiding angels
breaking despair
mindless motion?
beyond repair?
dendrite shadows
glassy pain
puppet strings
pull again
heart caress
repress care
hands move
float on air


whale
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Cool poetry been written
Nice one MM - thanks for taking on the theme - great poem

whale
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Keep reading Devillish as well - definitely a rolla - more please - dAdA - was designed to fuck your mind so that u could be free of conventional expression - mind fucks pls apply

poet Anonymous

Too bad there's no wingding font for message choices. :(

poet Anonymous



nothing nothing nothing nada dada striket

whale
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Nice holly - the negative of nothin is ....

poet Anonymous

It's the only way I could submit my message in wingding.
It can be decoded. It's a war zone sign.

ask me for translation if you need it.

dkzksaxxas_DanielX
DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn
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uh, like does that mean 'I win'?

poet Anonymous

dkzksaxxas_DanielX said:
uh, like does that mean 'I win'?


lol.

It's titled "End War".

Really, each symbol represents a letter. Translation is in my poetry collection. (see poem "End War".)

But that's just one interpretation. Viewers may find other messages in it.

poet Anonymous

THIS IS GNAT AN UMPHFREE

Better Left Boldly Unsaid
A haiku



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poet Anonymous


THIS IS NUT AN EHNVY

DAMA LLAMA!


Yaha!  Thees chessacheez ess exsexccible
inna rhinestone briney crucible
But gnaw!  Butt GNAAAWWW!
A crux:  gonad newly gomad!

Newsit firma stirt, ye hert nadinit.
Bad  Bad Badafly !
Pushmipullu dingadong
ye gee all gloesy licka gloworm
bah bananah loofa nut no belong!

Muffalotta moose!  
Maracas I brewst
Effa coo cooma cumma tummy achin!

whale
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Mmm... Now I understand why these comps have a maximum number of poems allowed - Holly I loves ya but can u just pick you favourite 3 and delete the rest - thx love

Dadadoggy - you won the moment u were born but for this interlude of paradox known as art as competition we all got 2 wait till the last spin of tension wrenching excitement ... (Drum Roll) (applause)

poet Anonymous

whale said:Mmm... Now I understand why these comps have a maximum number of poems allowed - Holly I loves ya but can u just pick you favourite 3 and delete the rest - thx love



You can decide what three you like best
and ignore the rest.

I'm not deleting anything. The entries have dates and if for some crazy reason a person copies and pastes them, those dates are proof I wrote them first.

I won't submit anymore, since it's too much for ya to handle. But you may want to edit the OP, to reflect the change of your rules to "3 poems limit".

 

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