Poetry competition CLOSED 5th August 2014 8:21am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
Atakti
and case28
The Fibonacci Sequence
AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
Forum Posts: 1797
Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
9
Joined 22nd Jan 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Poetry Contest Description
Syllable noun 1. a unit of pronunciation having one vowel sound, with or without surrounding consonants, forming the whole or a part of a word; for example, there are two syllables in water and three in inferno.
Write a piece using the order of the Fibonacci sequence - Spiral in, spiral out.
1
1
2
3
5
8
5
3
2
1
1
For every number in the sequence, you are to use a syllable. If you can manage to construct a poem with images and even metaphors in this structure (as an example of poetic techniques that will compliment your piece, all are encouraged) Note, you are allowed to write as many words as you wish, the only restriction is upon your syllables. The hint to a victory here, is in the premise of the challenge, and the relevance your piece has to the spiral, expressed as artistically and poetically as you can.
No needless comments, you have one week.
EDIT - Thank you Atakti for reminding me, punctuation is welcome with open arms.
1
1
2
3
5
8
5
3
2
1
1
For every number in the sequence, you are to use a syllable. If you can manage to construct a poem with images and even metaphors in this structure (as an example of poetic techniques that will compliment your piece, all are encouraged) Note, you are allowed to write as many words as you wish, the only restriction is upon your syllables. The hint to a victory here, is in the premise of the challenge, and the relevance your piece has to the spiral, expressed as artistically and poetically as you can.
No needless comments, you have one week.
EDIT - Thank you Atakti for reminding me, punctuation is welcome with open arms.
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Serenade, Marinade
Shush
hush,
be still.
Dry your eyes —
I'll do it for you.
Such a bitter disappointment...
Don't you know tears make
meat sour?
Smile, sweet,
and
sing.
Not sure about your comment on commas, so please clarify if I misunderstood!
Thanks, Euan.
Shush
hush,
be still.
Dry your eyes —
I'll do it for you.
Such a bitter disappointment...
Don't you know tears make
meat sour?
Smile, sweet,
and
sing.
Not sure about your comment on commas, so please clarify if I misunderstood!
Thanks, Euan.
jvp
Forum Posts: 91
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 21st June 2014Forum Posts: 91
Whats Life Batman
red
blue
wonder
what to do
your life can be tough
but if you stick it out enough
you'll find in the end
you will die
my friend
white
flag
red
blue
wonder
what to do
your life can be tough
but if you stick it out enough
you'll find in the end
you will die
my friend
white
flag
anna_grin
ANNAN
Forum Posts: 3367
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
15
Joined 24th Mar 2013Forum Posts: 3367
interesting :)
Anonymous
some
shell,
spirals -
nautilus.
Deceiver. Nothing
golden, no, unless boundaries
are pushed, exceptions
overlayed, rules
broken.
Time
cheats.
shell,
spirals -
nautilus.
Deceiver. Nothing
golden, no, unless boundaries
are pushed, exceptions
overlayed, rules
broken.
Time
cheats.
lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Forum Posts: 14458
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14458
The Eid-of-little-martyrs
Boom
dead
sing with joy
ein zwei drei vier, feuer!
and the sky will rain phosphorous
"wipe out their children
and mothers"
Sieg Heil
Boom!
dead.
Boom
dead
sing with joy
ein zwei drei vier, feuer!
and the sky will rain phosphorous
"wipe out their children
and mothers"
Sieg Heil
Boom!
dead.
Anonymous
Mary Jane
Blain
pain
constrain
mind campaign
emotional reign
psychosomatic daisy chain
alpine golden chain
mary jane
brain drain
strain
sane
Blain
pain
constrain
mind campaign
emotional reign
psychosomatic daisy chain
alpine golden chain
mary jane
brain drain
strain
sane
gardenlover
Forum Posts: 625
Fire of Insight
23
Joined 19th Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 625
Acrostic (intercourse)
I
Need
To be
Entering
Right up to the hilt
Come inside your wet warm passage
Our love is complete
United
Replete
Safe
E'er
I
Need
To be
Entering
Right up to the hilt
Come inside your wet warm passage
Our love is complete
United
Replete
Safe
E'er
AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
Forum Posts: 1797
Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
9
Joined 22nd Jan 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Cheers everyone for their entries.
Anyone else up to this simple challenge?
Anyone else up to this simple challenge?
Carpe_Noctem
Forum Posts: 2915
Tyrant of Words
8
Joined 3rd Mar 2013Forum Posts: 2915
The Dogs Breakfast
Last
post
swan song
page twenty one
story all but written
sheep cull in progress, cut the grass
unavoidable mercy seat
let us prey
five bill
no
more
LunaObscura
Utmakalitho Petragammata
Forum Posts: 655
Utmakalitho Petragammata
Fire of Insight
5
Joined 2nd June 2011Forum Posts: 655
In The Name Of The Law
Right?
Wrong?
Ill thought
Poisonous
In the way of Rome
For those not worth their weight in bone
Power will prevail
And dissolve
The One
For
All
this was a most welcome distraction and challenge
Right?
Wrong?
Ill thought
Poisonous
In the way of Rome
For those not worth their weight in bone
Power will prevail
And dissolve
The One
For
All
this was a most welcome distraction and challenge
Anonymous
The Execution
You
stop
the itch
and notice
you ripped a deep hole.
Kill everything you invented
bury the unused
lug the rest.
Now yours.
Dream
less.
You
stop
the itch
and notice
you ripped a deep hole.
Kill everything you invented
bury the unused
lug the rest.
Now yours.
Dream
less.
HowlingHeart
Joined 22nd July 2014
Forum Posts: 42
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 42
Owned
Loved
Beaten
Taken raped
Your will broken
Being owned is your choice
My every command fuels your fire
I give what you crave
You are mine
I'm master
Your
Owned
Loved
Beaten
Taken raped
Your will broken
Being owned is your choice
My every command fuels your fire
I give what you crave
You are mine
I'm master
Your
Owned
MadameLavender
Forum Posts: 5601
Guardian of Shadows
87
Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5601
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jemac
Forum Posts: 237
Dangerous Mind
4
Joined 25th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 237
Jackson
Best
Dog
Ever
Caught by storm
In a grand mal seizure of pain
Held onto him hard
He could not
Writhing
He
Died
Best
Dog
Ever
Caught by storm
In a grand mal seizure of pain
Held onto him hard
He could not
Writhing
He
Died