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The Fibonacci Sequence

AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
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Poetry Contest

Syllable noun 1. a unit of pronunciation having one vowel sound, with or without surrounding consonants, forming the whole or a part of a word; for example, there are two syllables in water and three in inferno.
Write a piece using the order of the Fibonacci sequence - Spiral in, spiral out.

1
1
2
3
5
8
5
3
2
1
1

For every number in the sequence, you are to use a syllable. If you can manage to construct a poem with images and even metaphors in this structure (as an example of poetic techniques that will compliment your piece, all are encouraged) Note, you are allowed to write as many words as you wish, the only restriction is upon your syllables. The hint to a victory here, is in the premise of the challenge, and the relevance your piece has to the spiral, expressed as artistically and poetically as you can.

No needless comments, you have one week.
EDIT - Thank you Atakti for reminding me, punctuation is welcome with open arms.

Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Serenade, Marinade


Shush
hush,
be still.
Dry your eyes —
I'll do it for you.
Such a bitter disappointment...
Don't you know tears make
meat sour?
Smile, sweet,
and
sing.












Not sure about your comment on commas, so please clarify if I misunderstood!

Thanks, Euan.

jvp
Thought Provoker
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Whats Life Batman

red
blue
wonder
what to do
your life can be tough
but if you stick it out enough
you'll find in the end
you will die
my friend
white
flag

anna_grin
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
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Forum Posts: 3367

interesting :)

poet Anonymous

some
shell,
spirals -
nautilus.
Deceiver. Nothing
golden, no, unless boundaries
are pushed, exceptions
overlayed, rules
broken.
Time
cheats.

lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
Palestine 67awards
Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 14458

The Eid-of-little-martyrs

Boom
dead
sing with joy

ein zwei drei vier, feuer!

and the sky will rain phosphorous

"wipe out their children
and mothers"

Sieg Heil

Boom!
dead.


poet Anonymous

Mary Jane

Blain
pain
constrain
mind campaign
emotional reign
psychosomatic daisy chain
alpine golden chain
mary jane
brain drain
strain
sane

gardenlover
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom 23awards
Joined 19th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 625

Acrostic (intercourse)

I
Need
To be
Entering
Right up to the hilt
Come inside your wet warm passage
Our love is complete
United
Replete
Safe
E'er

AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Jan 2013
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Cheers everyone for their entries.

Anyone else up to this simple challenge?

Carpe_Noctem
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 3rd Mar 2013
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The Dogs Breakfast

Last
post
swan song

page twenty one

story all but written
sheep cull in progress, cut the grass

unavoidable mercy seat

let us prey

five bill

no

more

LunaObscura
Utmakalitho Petragammata
Fire of Insight
United States 5awards
Joined 2nd June 2011
Forum Posts: 655

In The Name Of The Law

Right?
Wrong?
Ill thought
Poisonous
In the way of Rome
For those not worth their weight in bone
Power will prevail
And dissolve
The One
For
All



this was a most welcome distraction and challenge

poet Anonymous

The Execution

You
stop
the itch
and notice
you ripped a deep hole.
Kill everything you invented
bury the unused
lug the rest.
Now yours.
Dream
less.

HowlingHeart
Lost Thinker
Joined 22nd July 2014
Forum Posts: 42

Owned


Loved
Beaten
Taken raped
Your will broken
Being owned is your choice
My every command fuels your fire
I give what you crave
You are mine
I'm master
Your
Owned


MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 87awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5601

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jemac
Dangerous Mind
United States 4awards
Joined 25th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 237

Jackson

Best
Dog
Ever
Caught by storm
In a grand mal seizure of pain
Held onto him hard
He could not
Writhing
He
Died

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