Poetry competition CLOSED 2nd August 2014 1:01pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
LobodeSanPedro
and m_abbott1999
Page:
Deep Underground Diction
Anonymous
Poetry Contest Description
Acrostic Categories
Hello all,
This comp came to me before I fell asleep last night--don't ask why. Anyway, here's the competition:
Chose three categories you post your poems most in. Mine would be Dark, Drugs, and Erotic. Take the letters of the categories and write an acrostic poem about each one. What you're be judged on is how unique you come up with the words written--DICTION! But your diction cannot be cliche like the following.
Example:
Depth
Amazing
Rules
Kill
Be unique with your words, if you desire to make sentences with each line or one of the lines, that's okay, but again, be unique with your diction and don't make the sentences too long.
Guidelines:
No Collabs
Proper Grammar (if you're doing sentences)
Use your brain power
Hope you guys find this interesting, PM me with ?'s or post them below.
One Week!
This comp came to me before I fell asleep last night--don't ask why. Anyway, here's the competition:
Chose three categories you post your poems most in. Mine would be Dark, Drugs, and Erotic. Take the letters of the categories and write an acrostic poem about each one. What you're be judged on is how unique you come up with the words written--DICTION! But your diction cannot be cliche like the following.
Example:
Depth
Amazing
Rules
Kill
Be unique with your words, if you desire to make sentences with each line or one of the lines, that's okay, but again, be unique with your diction and don't make the sentences too long.
Guidelines:
No Collabs
Proper Grammar (if you're doing sentences)
Use your brain power
Hope you guys find this interesting, PM me with ?'s or post them below.
One Week!
Anonymous
Anyone?
:(
Alright, I'll be more original and creative next time is all---all good.
:(
Alright, I'll be more original and creative next time is all---all good.
m_abbott1999
Madi
Forum Posts: 509
Madi
Fire of Insight
2
Joined 2nd Dec 2013Forum Posts: 509
Self, Drugs, Erotic
Self-absorbed
Enigmas of
Lone
Frequenting.
Distant
Recognitions of
Unconstitutional happenings,
Gyrating
Spokewise.
Epicenter of
Rationale,
Originating from
The fantasies
Indigenous to the
Crib of
Sexual desires.
Self-absorbed
Enigmas of
Lone
Frequenting.
Distant
Recognitions of
Unconstitutional happenings,
Gyrating
Spokewise.
Epicenter of
Rationale,
Originating from
The fantasies
Indigenous to the
Crib of
Sexual desires.
dungendona
Forum Posts: 65
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 24th Sep 2012Forum Posts: 65
Tortured Soul
The chains that bind the insanity of my thoughts
I am bound to until my body dies and rots
The darkness holds a firm cradled grip
On a damned soul deep in this crypt
There are no tears to cry or bleed
No emotion or feeling, there is no need
The air is thin, I struggle for breath
A tortured soul until my death
by dungendona
The chains that bind the insanity of my thoughts
I am bound to until my body dies and rots
The darkness holds a firm cradled grip
On a damned soul deep in this crypt
There are no tears to cry or bleed
No emotion or feeling, there is no need
The air is thin, I struggle for breath
A tortured soul until my death
by dungendona
Anonymous
Observational Spiritual Love
Obliteration from incremental things
Beyond the countenance of the framework
Scaling
Equating
Resonating with mirrored reflections
Vanquishing unending chain of bondage.
An abandonment of revolutionary nonsense
Tormented minds twisted tongues
In synthesis of second-hand lives perched
On the formidable scale
Nuance
Abstracted
Lachrymosely
Sacred mantra chants
Permeates luminosity
In every creation, energy
Renewing spirit supreme
Immortalizing the soul
Through the mysteries, of
Ultimate Vedanta mystics
Awakening, transforming
Life; unfolded in infinity
Let the snowflakes fall
gentle and unassuming
On the Nazca lines
weeping in the pores
Vulnerable and exposed
beyond the ken
Embracing the fervency;
we sizzle
Obliteration from incremental things
Beyond the countenance of the framework
Scaling
Equating
Resonating with mirrored reflections
Vanquishing unending chain of bondage.
An abandonment of revolutionary nonsense
Tormented minds twisted tongues
In synthesis of second-hand lives perched
On the formidable scale
Nuance
Abstracted
Lachrymosely
Sacred mantra chants
Permeates luminosity
In every creation, energy
Renewing spirit supreme
Immortalizing the soul
Through the mysteries, of
Ultimate Vedanta mystics
Awakening, transforming
Life; unfolded in infinity
Let the snowflakes fall
gentle and unassuming
On the Nazca lines
weeping in the pores
Vulnerable and exposed
beyond the ken
Embracing the fervency;
we sizzle
PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Forum Posts: 1483
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
30
Joined 5th Dec 2012 Forum Posts: 1483
Dark, Love, Anger
http://media-cache-ec0.pinimg.com/236x/c3/5e/02/c35e0247c6deffafaef8c905a41296cb.jpg
Decript messages,
Are they
Real indeed
Knowing mystery
Lies, I'm not made
Of. It's so
Vicouisly tiring,an unnecessary
Eventuallity
Although, it maybe unbelievable,
Nevertheless, the truth.
Geniunly, I pour out my soul,
Everything I have said, dream, wrote, and sang is
Real. Absolutely, horrifying real. Even if they're not about me
http://media-cache-ec0.pinimg.com/236x/c3/5e/02/c35e0247c6deffafaef8c905a41296cb.jpg
Decript messages,
Are they
Real indeed
Knowing mystery
Lies, I'm not made
Of. It's so
Vicouisly tiring,an unnecessary
Eventuallity
Although, it maybe unbelievable,
Nevertheless, the truth.
Geniunly, I pour out my soul,
Everything I have said, dream, wrote, and sang is
Real. Absolutely, horrifying real. Even if they're not about me
xxdementedwitchxx
Joined 30th July 2014
Forum Posts: 1
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 1
Deep
Art
Revolutionary
Kingdom
Deliberate
Recreational
Use
Gone
Sad
Sad
Eccentric
Life
Forever
Art
Revolutionary
Kingdom
Deliberate
Recreational
Use
Gone
Sad
Sad
Eccentric
Life
Forever
LobodeSanPedro
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words
109
Joined 16th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 3304
Observational Dark Erotica aka ODE
Obsessed with Pandora's
Box, I've
Studied the
Errors and
Rantings of many.
Visionaries and false prophets
Abound
Telling and selling
Innuendo as
Ominous truth.
Nonetheless we
Align are souls to drunken scripture that
Leads us to the
Deepest recesses of inhumanity.
Archangels flex their wings
Reflecting the layers of primordial
Kindling,
Enticing all who dare find
Revelation in
Orgasmic flames.
Tongues and
Ink scribe stories of
Carnal conquests
Akin to the foibles of the Gods.
Obsessed with Pandora's
Box, I've
Studied the
Errors and
Rantings of many.
Visionaries and false prophets
Abound
Telling and selling
Innuendo as
Ominous truth.
Nonetheless we
Align are souls to drunken scripture that
Leads us to the
Deepest recesses of inhumanity.
Archangels flex their wings
Reflecting the layers of primordial
Kindling,
Enticing all who dare find
Revelation in
Orgasmic flames.
Tongues and
Ink scribe stories of
Carnal conquests
Akin to the foibles of the Gods.
k1551ng5c4r5
Forum Posts: 11
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 20th July 2014Forum Posts: 11
Song Lyrics, Love, Anger
Sometimes I wonder about
Ominuous thoughts
Navigating through my head
Getting deeper into my blasted soul.
Lies, betrayal inside of me.
Your saddened heart is in my head
Right now at the moment.
Is this what we call love?
Constant wars back and forth,
Slashing and tearing us out both.
Longing to belong to somewhere
Or someone.
Vicious is me.
Everyone is happy unlike me.
Aggravated at what I've become,
Now I stand, screaming at the moon,
God, please help me kill the demon within,
Enchant my dark saddened soul to bliss,
Rewrite me if you must.
Sometimes I wonder about
Ominuous thoughts
Navigating through my head
Getting deeper into my blasted soul.
Lies, betrayal inside of me.
Your saddened heart is in my head
Right now at the moment.
Is this what we call love?
Constant wars back and forth,
Slashing and tearing us out both.
Longing to belong to somewhere
Or someone.
Vicious is me.
Everyone is happy unlike me.
Aggravated at what I've become,
Now I stand, screaming at the moon,
God, please help me kill the demon within,
Enchant my dark saddened soul to bliss,
Rewrite me if you must.
Anonymous
Congrats to VEE!!!! And to Madi and LSP for your intellectual entries. And thank you to everyone else who submitted an entry :)
Anonymous
SW, thank you very much for this award and congratulations to runners up LSP and Madi and everyone else who took part in this comp.
LobodeSanPedro
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words
109
Joined 16th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 3304
Congratulations Vee! - I almost didn't bother to enter after reading your entry but I needed the challenge to keep my mind moving. Congrats to Madi as well too. Many thanks to our host.
Salud
Salud