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Write a hiku on you're favourite activity.

Posted: 26th July 2014 1:43am
Edited: 26th July 2014 11:03am
Koku
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Poetry Contest

Write a hiku that isn't shit, and has relivance too your favourite activity.
The haiku is a Japanese verse in three lines. Line one has 5 syllables, line 2 has 7 syllables and line three has 5 syllables. Haiku is a mood poem and it doesn't use any metaphors or similes. Usually when Haiku is taught the students are only given the restriction of the number of lines and syllables.

TRY IT!!

Posted: 26th July 2014 1:47am
poet Anonymous
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Posted: 26th July 2014 1:55am
Austin_Rura
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We bitch and complain
writing nonsense to no one.
Poets and artists?

Posted: 26th July 2014 2:09am
Edited: 26th July 2014 2:10am
DreamerSeeker
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If you think the website is terrible,
then why the heck,
are you here?


There. Is my haiku good enough?


Posted: 26th July 2014 9:06am
Koku
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FANTASTIC ATTEMPTS.
DreamSeeker is now in the lead although he has no idea the rules and regulations of a hiku aparntly.
Good job, please don't be afraid too submit another one!

Posted: 26th July 2014 10:02am
hemihead
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I hate fuckers
who post shit like this
they are dull cunts

Posted: 26th July 2014 10:21am
poet Anonymous
For Koku:

It's a shame this site
Has no "Bomb Drop" click button
To kill trolls like you

Posted: 26th July 2014 10:38am
Koku
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Ahhh, but dull is but a colour in the rainbow.
NAh seriously upon joining this site i'm starting too like it more and more c;
Love ya'll

Posted: 26th July 2014 10:53am
Edited: 26th July 2014 11:24am - edited 2 times
Magdalena
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Mine was a "hiku" not a "Haiku" but I deleted it anyway.

Posted: 26th July 2014 11:01am
Koku
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The haiku is a Japanese verse in three lines. Line one has 5 syllables, line 2 has 7 syllables and line three has 5 syllables. Haiku is a mood poem and it doesn't use any metaphors or similes. Usually when Haiku is taught the students are only given the restriction of the number of lines and syllables.

Write one ffs.

Posted: 26th July 2014 11:16am
Edited: 26th July 2014 12:35pm - edited 4 times
Magdalena
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Koku said:The haiku is a Japanese verse in three lines. Line one has 5 syllables, line 2 has 7 syllables and line three has 5 syllables. Haiku is a mood poem and it doesn't use any metaphors or similes. Usually when Haiku is taught the students are only given the restriction of the number of lines and syllables.

Write one ffs.

Ahhh.  You found google and how to spell "Haiku"

Copied and pasted from here >>>>>> http://www.edu.pe.ca/stjean/playing%20with%20poetry/Hennessey/howtohaiku.htm

Credit your source Koku, credit your source ffs.

Posted: 26th July 2014 11:19am
Edited: 26th July 2014 11:31am
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Hiku... ? ...


Posted: 26th July 2014 1:44pm
poet Anonymous
"Write a hiku that isn't shit, and has relivance too your favourite activity."

jaysus!

haiku*
relevance*
to*

and that was just one bloody sentence.


Posted: 26th July 2014 2:57pm
poet Anonymous
you changed the rules of the opening post. Originally you wanted a haiku to diss DUP. You had an army of devil icons and several "DIE DIE DIE DIE..." chants. Really, the first few people who entered here saw the same words I did.

So why did you change the subject to "your favorite activity"?

Posted: 26th July 2014 4:52pm
Magdalena
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I saw the OP.  So he is not getting away with trying to make the members here look like they are picking on the "newbie"(?) by pulling a fast one.

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