Poetry competition CLOSED 5th August 2014 11:26pm
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LizB
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Morbid & True

BlackOrchid666
Ribbons
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 4th July 2014
Forum Posts: 13

Poetry Contest

This is a competition for everyone that has bloody thoughts about someone. The point is to write a tru poem about how you negatively feel about someone.

THELOSTONE666
Miguel Quintero
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 12th Dec 2013
Forum Posts: 2

"FUCK YOU BITCHES" By THELOSTONE666
Alright this goes out to all you wanna be gangstas(Lazy,Bandit,Silent).  Ok I used to have respect for you guys now I hope every single bitch in your click dies not fast and easy but choking on your own blood slow and weasie as you begin to spit out blood clots i'll desolve your eyes using hydrocloric acid drops I won't feel bad about it after I smoke a few weed crops because i'm a cold blooded person that'll have your whole family hanging from their necks praying for the pain to stop but I don't give a fuck about you solo fagots leave you six feet deep with your bodies covered in magots and you think that's it ill continue the cycle with your kid's kids. Like I said, I hope every one of you bitches ends up DEAD!!!!!!!!!

LizB
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 19th Jan 2014
Forum Posts: 65

I want to hurt you so bad, I hope the memory of me kills you in your sleep. I want to be the reason you cut yourself and cry because you miss me so much. I want you to experience the hate and longing that I felt for you. I want you to fall deeply in love and get your heart shattered into a trillion pieces.I need youtobe atyour lowest point like where you kicked me. I want to see blood dripping from your wrists and begging mefor mylove as I rejectyou...like how you rejected me. Your eyes are so beautiful so I want to rip them with my fingers and make you lick the blood. I need for you to for you to suffer like I did. Iwant to kill you but I don't want to hurt you. I want to make you suffer even though I still care for you. I want to take you to beautiful places and make lasting memories only so I can leave you at the altar and you can't go back to those places because my ghost is there. I want to kill you like you killed me. I hope I lurk in your dreams swishing my knives in suspense...like you did to me.

snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
United States 77awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 1873

Horse Shit!
Chicken Shit!
Pig Shit & Bull!
But theirs no shit
Like your shit
And God knows
I've had my full

poet Anonymous

Am I allowed to enter a poem that I've already written and posted, or do I have to write a new one?

poet Anonymous

ATTN: Attention whore and regular whore

It's your face, the way your mind works, your walk, the fact that you're allowed to talk

The fact that we share the same air, your ugly ass hair, that snooty I'm better than you stare

It's your clothes, you're fake personality, I'm so dark and disturbed everybody look at me

It's the fact that you exist that makes me violently pissed
even if I did obliterate every fiber of your being it still wouldn't be enough I'd have to destroy everyone who ever knew and remembers you too

That how fucking much I hate you

TheWayItIs
PerilousKid
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 15th June 2014
Forum Posts: 78

I hope you die from choking on your own salted blood.
I hate your fucking guts.
I'd be honored to kill your ass beating you into a bloody pulp,
Hoping you get sent to the ER,
They better not leave your side because
Bitch, you're going  to die!
I'm ripping out the wires,
and tipping over the fucking cold metal bed,
Leaving you to your death,
shoving meth..
into your wet warm mouth,
And while you're at it, why don't you drown.

Or maybe i could take your ass to the lake,
Take out that shiny black pistol
Popping you in the head leaving you drowning in Fuck's sake.

If that isn't possible,
i could always sneak into your house,
Pour gas into your mouth
and set you on fire.
Oh wait!
Tie you up with wired and hang you on that fucking cross,
You know.
Just fucking DIE!

Fallen_Angel_194
Angel.
Thought Provoker
United States 5awards
Joined 24th May 2014
Forum Posts: 318

I Hate You.
You Left Me! You Left Me To Die!
You Said That You'd Help Me Find My Way Out If The dark.
You Liar!I Hope You Get What's Coming To You.
You Said You'd Never Hurt Me!YOU LIAR!
You Hurt Me SO Much,You Left Me For Dead.For A Little While I Thought You Were Diffrent..But No.Your Just Like Everyone Else.I Hate You So Much.You Liar

snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
United States 77awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 1873

(This little ditty is not how I felt about someone else, rather, what they thought of me)


                 YOU!

You dirty no good rotten son-of-a-bitch!
I’ve had it up to my eyeballs with your shit

I threw your clothes out the window onto the street
Along with your flat screen TV, stereo and DVDs

You sick bastard, and I threw out all your precious porn
The same sick shit you always wanted me to perform

I also chucked your treasured prom night photo
So I’ll never again have to look at your high school bimbo

I even threw out all 12, of your collectable, beer steins
And your craft beer in the fridge; it went flying out, right behind

Now quit begging and get off your knees
And kindly return to me, back my keys

You can plead and bawl
Even whimper and crawl
But I’m getting rid of you tonight
Once and for all

I can’t wait to finally rid
Your memory from my head
You no good-for-nothing slug
Save an occasional fuck in bed

"Guys, isn’t it something?"
 
"Your lover can smear and insult you with unspeakable vulgarities
Some of which you've never heard in your life  
But if in closing, she hints you may have been a good lover
It makes everything else, seem alright!"

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 87awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5600

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BlackOrchid666
Ribbons
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 4th July 2014
Forum Posts: 13

Its alright if you've already posted it. Just post it here too.

A_Conduit
Behappy - Bhairava
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom
Joined 10th July 2014
Forum Posts: 7

To Jason

I have thought long into the night,
With whiskey and weed,
Weed I made you bring me,
About how easily I could ruin your life.

I do not wish to hurt you physically,
Though I would relish the opportunity.
I wish to see you broken.
Clutching at the cuffs of your mother,
Your name carved into her face.

I want to take your niece,
Give her over to the pitbulls.
I want to take your other niece,
And smother her in the cot.
Hello kitty pillowcase over her head.
The cat's on the bag, don't be too curious.

I want your brothers burned,
Setting alight their front doors.
Stood out the back with a hammer,
Waiting for my moment,
Denting their skulls to ravage your mind.

I want you to return home to see your family slaughtered,
Bloody toys of those you cherish, like sponges in your hands.
Shock causing you to talk to silent faces.
Begging for them to come back,
While they lay with your tears in their eyes.

When I hear you speak it pierces my heart,
I feel like screaming truth into your ear’s,
Wish I knew where to start.
Probably easier to kill your family,
To watch you fall apart
Teach you a lesson, in depression,
I have it down to an art





Suicidal_EvilOne
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 31st May 2014
Forum Posts: 1

my innocents you forcefully took.a year long of agony Noone took a second look.to scared to speak the words of truth.to scared to be alone in the dark.my childhood you ruined my soul you took.I hate you for hurting me I'll never be the same. Your voice,face and smell will forever haunt my dreams an be branded in the back of my mind.all the pain I hide inside till my anger an fear collide.you got what you wanted now im empty. I want you as dead as you left me inside.can't stop these tears falling from my eyes.into the dark room I creep while in your bed you lay asleep.take this blade in my hand an hear you scream.cut the back of you anckles so u can't escape.we're gonna have fun ,atleast I will,no need to wait.mutilate your body slowly from head to toe.hear you beg for your life like I tried to beg for mine.psychotic mutilation is my chosen solution.you never paid for you did.your death is my revenge...

Krosgood
Violence
Thought Provoker
United States 12awards
Joined 21st Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 166

To Chuck Blea in Pittsburg California

I don't want to kill you
Oh but I just might
To make you suffer the pain of one thousand agonies
To make you pray for death upon broken knees
To make you bleed the blood of fifty wars
And make you scream like that of one of your beaten whores

I've broken both your hands with my heel
Like I had promised
And made you swallow all of your teeth
You must have looked like a joke pulling them out of your asshole with mangled fingers
Yet you defy once more
And I am forced once again to bring you to gore

Grovel
And beg for mercy as I force feed you glass
Shattered like your bones
Let them rip through your ass
But you run
You hide in the ditches
Scared of my rage
And your bodies death twitches

You won't get away a second time
Oh no
I will cut off your toes and watch you try
But you'll just lay on the ground
And cry

I wish to see you gutted with dissection
Splayed out with wires
Inches above the ground
Suspended by hooks
As your entrails hang down
Feeding the rats who spread like infection

So many ways I envision your pain
Beating and bleeding as you're screaming for days
Nobody will stop me
They've all turned their heads
You don't cross me I'm Violence
And now I see red




Krosgood
Violence
Thought Provoker
United States 12awards
Joined 21st Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 166

Wow. It feels good to let some of this anger out. Thank you for this comp blackorchid666. I needed that.

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