Poetry competition CLOSED 4th September 2014 9:16pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
Mystic landscape Compilation (will be published)
Marshmellion
MoonBlossems
Joined 8th June 2012
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MoonBlossems
Lost Thinker
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Poetry Contest Description
Create a fantasy landscape ei:floating islands, crystal canyons,ect
The books name is The Celestial Plains
-if you submit a poem and are accepted you will receive a free copy of the book.
-if you submit an art piece with your poem I will try to have it included into your page/ pages
- I am creating a compilation of poems that will get published if possible and have credits to all accepted poems and there author.
the goal of this project is to create a magical/ alien world.
I will be accepting 1 poem from each theme and if you want to add a new theme or idea just submit your poem and comment saying the theme.
You can submit as many as you want and be accepted as many times as you are fit to.
Rules:
-no swearing/crude humor
-as short as 2 quatrains(8 lines) and as long as you feel describes your thoughts
-please try to keep the real world out of the story(like humans and buildings)
-(mabey a fantasy city/ruins would be ok but the goal of this is landscape and magic orientated, no feeling/love stories just descriptions)
-if you don't want to be published under your D.U.P name then put that at the end of your poem as PBS: name you want published here
I will put Inbox the winners to tell them they are the winners of the category.
THEMES
The night/day sky
(i would very much like to see swirling/dancing stars, also two different colored suns that when they eclipse once a day, change the colour of the sky for a brief moment)
Descriptions of the grass, genaric plantlife(magical of course, Ei: Ice Lotus or fire lilies)
Floating islands
Crystal canyons
The jeweled forest
Pegasus Island
The cosmic caves
(stars on the ceiling and living constellations sort of thing)
The Onyx desert
The Emerald mountains
Your addon here
Feel free to make as many biomes, caves, mountains as you can come up with.
Here is my go at a place iv labeled The Crystal Spires
Stare to the north
at sunset and dawn.
The crystal spires stretch on and on.
They tower and glow
and are seen from long
Listen now,
As they sing-a-song,
that starts at dawn
and lasts until the sunsets gone.
When the sun is set
the sing-a-song stops
and a new one does begin.
Until the dawn
they sing a song,
a song of tranquil calm,
For when the crystals sleep and slumber so
a lullaby is heard from the grounds below.
When the moonlit sky awakes with dawn,
the crystals sing,
a sing-a-song.
PBS: Lotus
-if you submit a poem and are accepted you will receive a free copy of the book.
-if you submit an art piece with your poem I will try to have it included into your page/ pages
- I am creating a compilation of poems that will get published if possible and have credits to all accepted poems and there author.
the goal of this project is to create a magical/ alien world.
I will be accepting 1 poem from each theme and if you want to add a new theme or idea just submit your poem and comment saying the theme.
You can submit as many as you want and be accepted as many times as you are fit to.
Rules:
-no swearing/crude humor
-as short as 2 quatrains(8 lines) and as long as you feel describes your thoughts
-please try to keep the real world out of the story(like humans and buildings)
-(mabey a fantasy city/ruins would be ok but the goal of this is landscape and magic orientated, no feeling/love stories just descriptions)
-if you don't want to be published under your D.U.P name then put that at the end of your poem as PBS: name you want published here
I will put Inbox the winners to tell them they are the winners of the category.
THEMES
The night/day sky
(i would very much like to see swirling/dancing stars, also two different colored suns that when they eclipse once a day, change the colour of the sky for a brief moment)
Descriptions of the grass, genaric plantlife(magical of course, Ei: Ice Lotus or fire lilies)
Floating islands
Crystal canyons
The jeweled forest
Pegasus Island
The cosmic caves
(stars on the ceiling and living constellations sort of thing)
The Onyx desert
The Emerald mountains
Your addon here
Feel free to make as many biomes, caves, mountains as you can come up with.
Here is my go at a place iv labeled The Crystal Spires
Stare to the north
at sunset and dawn.
The crystal spires stretch on and on.
They tower and glow
and are seen from long
Listen now,
As they sing-a-song,
that starts at dawn
and lasts until the sunsets gone.
When the sun is set
the sing-a-song stops
and a new one does begin.
Until the dawn
they sing a song,
a song of tranquil calm,
For when the crystals sleep and slumber so
a lullaby is heard from the grounds below.
When the moonlit sky awakes with dawn,
the crystals sing,
a sing-a-song.
PBS: Lotus
LobodeSanPedro
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Tyrant of Words
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I sure hope you have someone else editing for grammar and spelling.
Marshmellion
MoonBlossems
Joined 8th June 2012
Forum Posts: 35
MoonBlossems
Lost Thinker
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Of course i do, I'm terrible at it and i have no patience for editing myself.
MadameLavender
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Guardian of Shadows
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Who is the publisher/company?
Marshmellion
MoonBlossems
Joined 8th June 2012
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MoonBlossems
Lost Thinker
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My Mother and grandfather are published authors, they said compile/write first, publish later. so I am.
they are going to help find a publisher when the collection is complete.
they are going to help find a publisher when the collection is complete.
Anonymous
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chriswwriter
Joined 10th June 2014
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Twisted Dreamer
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Interesting... ok, I'll come back to this tomorrow. Published is good, more is better.
chriswwriter
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Twisted Dreamer
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Heh, you're gonna love me then, I make up my own words and throw comma's at a page like Pollock threw paint. *scratches behind ears* Did you know it's a proven scientific fact that lone wolves don't survive long without the pack? Consider that the next time you come flashing your teeth, ok o' literary guru? Ok.
Hi, *sticks hand out with a friendly smile*, Chris.
Hi, *sticks hand out with a friendly smile*, Chris.
Marshmellion
MoonBlossems
Joined 8th June 2012
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MoonBlossems
Lost Thinker
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hello their, care to throw some commas my way.
*shakes hand*
*shakes hand*
Marshmellion
MoonBlossems
Joined 8th June 2012
Forum Posts: 35
MoonBlossems
Lost Thinker
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Marshmellion
MoonBlossems
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MoonBlossems
Lost Thinker
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[/quote]
I think they meant write first your own poems and publish the same (your own) later. [/quote]
I already have 8 poems for this "competition" that are my own and am writeing another now, and many other poems. what im doing is giving others a chance to contribute and get published. Also its called a compilation (a common thing, so the point is its not all my stuff.
I think they meant write first your own poems and publish the same (your own) later. [/quote]
I already have 8 poems for this "competition" that are my own and am writeing another now, and many other poems. what im doing is giving others a chance to contribute and get published. Also its called a compilation (a common thing, so the point is its not all my stuff.
RavenofSorrow
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Fire of Insight
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does it have to be a new piece?
Marshmellion
MoonBlossems
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MoonBlossems
Lost Thinker
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no it need not be a new piece.
RavenofSorrow
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Fire of Insight
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Electric Lady Land
There’s a place I go inside my head
When on the inner paths I tread
When my eyelids turn to led
And I sink into my bed
Pulsating pictures point the way
As I drift by purple pelican bay
where fully flavored gum trees sway
and lickable liquorish leeches lay
I dived into a sea of dreams
In a yellow submarine
A thousand miles past Pepperland
I came to a shore of purple sand
Where drifting dreamers in a daze
Were not the slightest bit amazed
to see bicycling butterflies
Gliding past them towards the sky
I wandered through a fractal forest
To the big rock candy mountains
Eventually I came to rest
By a cascading crystal fountain
In its clear and jeweled waters
An angels face reflected there
With a rainbow row of flowers
Placed within her silver hair
But as I turned around
She was nowhere to be found
Somewhere trees were falling down
But they never made a sound
There’s gold at the bottom of the well
where devilish dooly doppers dwell
They spend their spare time racing snails
On the backs of turtle shells
Cellophane sorcerers seal seven secrets in pristine prismic pyramids
and place their cryptic scriptures on the wall where shiny silver beetles crawl
Electric ladys lounge near a lagoon of liquid light as laughing leprechauns chase speedy sprites
I watched a circus show that featured flying purple people eaters
And alien acrobats turning somersaults and wintersaults
without ever coming to a halt
I sat with Humpty on a bench
And told him "None of this makes sense"
He replied with a sudden burst of laughter
"does it even really matter?"
I said" maybe not but anyway
I must be off I cannot stay.
I haven't much more time for play
Ill come again some other day."
So I caught a flight with Mr. Kite
Until the land was out of sight
I opened my eyes at 6:15
And couldn't quite remember where id been
(Hope its not cliche that i stole the title from a hendrix album.. and the mention of the yellow submarine.. thats just the way i imagine touring my subconscious..)
There’s a place I go inside my head
When on the inner paths I tread
When my eyelids turn to led
And I sink into my bed
Pulsating pictures point the way
As I drift by purple pelican bay
where fully flavored gum trees sway
and lickable liquorish leeches lay
I dived into a sea of dreams
In a yellow submarine
A thousand miles past Pepperland
I came to a shore of purple sand
Where drifting dreamers in a daze
Were not the slightest bit amazed
to see bicycling butterflies
Gliding past them towards the sky
I wandered through a fractal forest
To the big rock candy mountains
Eventually I came to rest
By a cascading crystal fountain
In its clear and jeweled waters
An angels face reflected there
With a rainbow row of flowers
Placed within her silver hair
But as I turned around
She was nowhere to be found
Somewhere trees were falling down
But they never made a sound
There’s gold at the bottom of the well
where devilish dooly doppers dwell
They spend their spare time racing snails
On the backs of turtle shells
Cellophane sorcerers seal seven secrets in pristine prismic pyramids
and place their cryptic scriptures on the wall where shiny silver beetles crawl
Electric ladys lounge near a lagoon of liquid light as laughing leprechauns chase speedy sprites
I watched a circus show that featured flying purple people eaters
And alien acrobats turning somersaults and wintersaults
without ever coming to a halt
I sat with Humpty on a bench
And told him "None of this makes sense"
He replied with a sudden burst of laughter
"does it even really matter?"
I said" maybe not but anyway
I must be off I cannot stay.
I haven't much more time for play
Ill come again some other day."
So I caught a flight with Mr. Kite
Until the land was out of sight
I opened my eyes at 6:15
And couldn't quite remember where id been
(Hope its not cliche that i stole the title from a hendrix album.. and the mention of the yellow submarine.. thats just the way i imagine touring my subconscious..)