Poetry competition CLOSED 30th May 2014 2:16am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNER-UP:
MadameLavender
Psyche This!
Anonymous
Viddax said:This competition has rather confused me, not because of the image but because of its rules. Not sure whether my entry is 20 verse lines but it is less than 20 lines. As for what I think I see and what I actually see, well thats for antoher day and far more than 20 lines.
Combat Caterpillar
With sure strike and swift speed
the robot flies through the air
basked in monochrome glory
reflecting on its arms
along its caterpillar body
and bulbous head,
as it adopts offenisve move 56:
arms back, body down
head forwards
combat parameters initiated
and victory ensured,
an age old pose
for a new being,
a quick attack
that hies its true silver sheen.
A combat caterpillar,
a rearing pillar of attack.
Thanks, Viddax, for pointing out my mistake. It was confusing, wasn't it
? So correction made.
Primo, Dkrui, Miki, johnrot, Austin. . .thanks guys (and gal) for your entry! Some great psyche jobs here
!
Combat Caterpillar
With sure strike and swift speed
the robot flies through the air
basked in monochrome glory
reflecting on its arms
along its caterpillar body
and bulbous head,
as it adopts offenisve move 56:
arms back, body down
head forwards
combat parameters initiated
and victory ensured,
an age old pose
for a new being,
a quick attack
that hies its true silver sheen.
A combat caterpillar,
a rearing pillar of attack.
Thanks, Viddax, for pointing out my mistake. It was confusing, wasn't it
? So correction made. Primo, Dkrui, Miki, johnrot, Austin. . .thanks guys (and gal) for your entry! Some great psyche jobs here
! 
Anonymous
What's that now?
Psyche fucked with me
So I fucked with Ares psyche
Licking at the boot heels of Misogyny
7 layer cake
After 16 hour wake -n- bake
What the fuck---errrrrtttt---slam on brake
Trees are growing down from the sky
The universe is located in my left eye
I don't why but I think I thought I knew a guy
Who knows 37 different ways of saying "that's where it's at"
and who the fuck skinned that dingbat?
Put me in coach I'm ready to play
gyroscope swing and sway
Who the hell knows what happened to alf back in the day
Stop asking me questions, I don't know
Which way did my soul go
Hahahaha yeah I remember soul glow
I'm sick to my stomach don't you know
This has been fun but I have to run
Someone has to go reignite the sun
Psyche fucked with me
So I fucked with Ares psyche
Licking at the boot heels of Misogyny
7 layer cake
After 16 hour wake -n- bake
What the fuck---errrrrtttt---slam on brake
Trees are growing down from the sky
The universe is located in my left eye
I don't why but I think I thought I knew a guy
Who knows 37 different ways of saying "that's where it's at"
and who the fuck skinned that dingbat?
Put me in coach I'm ready to play
gyroscope swing and sway
Who the hell knows what happened to alf back in the day
Stop asking me questions, I don't know
Which way did my soul go
Hahahaha yeah I remember soul glow
I'm sick to my stomach don't you know
This has been fun but I have to run
Someone has to go reignite the sun
Confusion of a girl,
Who's in love with a man she
cant have
Her minds running wild
the vision of her eyes crying
and her brain is scrambled
love in her heart
but hate through her veins
this is love she cant have
in the mind that she lost.
Who's in love with a man she
cant have
Her minds running wild
the vision of her eyes crying
and her brain is scrambled
love in her heart
but hate through her veins
this is love she cant have
in the mind that she lost.
Cry for Help
Abuse worn like a velvet girdle, concealing her truth
curving her world with pretense
reshaping proof of her story
Every bruise and scar has a chapter
written in crimson red blood; hidden
incognito spaces of black and white illusions
Kaleidoscopic bubbles of lies, burst with every blow and strike
he beats her in the name of love; so he says
he’s broken her, making her believe validity in violence
Confusion rotates and fades in and out of her mind
protesting for soundness to abandon her,
soliciting her to leap from the edge of sanity
She’s mastered merging opaque reality with intimate nightmares
and if you close your eyes to the black and white,
and focus on her muted voice
you can hear her whispers for help
~Rain~
Abuse worn like a velvet girdle, concealing her truth
curving her world with pretense
reshaping proof of her story
Every bruise and scar has a chapter
written in crimson red blood; hidden
incognito spaces of black and white illusions
Kaleidoscopic bubbles of lies, burst with every blow and strike
he beats her in the name of love; so he says
he’s broken her, making her believe validity in violence
Confusion rotates and fades in and out of her mind
protesting for soundness to abandon her,
soliciting her to leap from the edge of sanity
She’s mastered merging opaque reality with intimate nightmares
and if you close your eyes to the black and white,
and focus on her muted voice
you can hear her whispers for help
~Rain~
Learning to Grow
Naturally I'm bashful
I see life turning
into obstacles
here I am
itching for solitude
in dream state fashion
despite self esteem
woes childhood clothes
even though blame
not anyone I do
mixed emotions of a
kid misunderstood
now grown, on my own
so who are you?
Dizzy criticisms
burly pink gowns
came to mend
careful man
forgotten not
I've yet born
Naturally I'm bashful
I see life turning
into obstacles
here I am
itching for solitude
in dream state fashion
despite self esteem
woes childhood clothes
even though blame
not anyone I do
mixed emotions of a
kid misunderstood
now grown, on my own
so who are you?
Dizzy criticisms
burly pink gowns
came to mend
careful man
forgotten not
I've yet born
Too Far Gone
Dreamlike state fears
biting nails, I've seen
murder in a chief
far gone from drugs
and alcohol but I
need you to move,
give way to hope
pat back nod & smile
bent over puking
not attractive but classy
has no meaning here
when battling a moving
addiction too far gone
compete if just for me
broken glass theme song
How can I help a soul
unwilling to occur
condemned from Earth
drive nice & slow... now
park next to that church
Dreamlike state fears
biting nails, I've seen
murder in a chief
far gone from drugs
and alcohol but I
need you to move,
give way to hope
pat back nod & smile
bent over puking
not attractive but classy
has no meaning here
when battling a moving
addiction too far gone
compete if just for me
broken glass theme song
How can I help a soul
unwilling to occur
condemned from Earth
drive nice & slow... now
park next to that church
I start, pause, look around, switch, back again,
share, share some more, stop, restart, repeat process...
Imminent change alludes me
bound forever to repeat
stagnant, ever failing.
I do not mean to hurt you
Its a side effect of my curse
replay...
I do not mean to hurt you
its a side effect of my curse.
Honest eyes, charming mouth
strong mind, personality
we roll with passion, an almost love
possessing the qualities you want and need.
these pestering punctuation pull me away
and my life goes back to replay
I start... again.
share, share some more, stop, restart, repeat process...
Imminent change alludes me
bound forever to repeat
stagnant, ever failing.
I do not mean to hurt you
Its a side effect of my curse
replay...
I do not mean to hurt you
its a side effect of my curse.
Honest eyes, charming mouth
strong mind, personality
we roll with passion, an almost love
possessing the qualities you want and need.
these pestering punctuation pull me away
and my life goes back to replay
I start... again.
Sitting
Staring
objects darting around
dots remain in my eyes
dizziness affecting my ground
can not stay focused
What do I expect
black and white zebras
I can't believe I see it
finally popping out
my mind I think is betraying me
from the depths within I seek
I finally give up
defeated and weak
Staring
objects darting around
dots remain in my eyes
dizziness affecting my ground
can not stay focused
What do I expect
black and white zebras
I can't believe I see it
finally popping out
my mind I think is betraying me
from the depths within I seek
I finally give up
defeated and weak
Anonymous
Well I commend all those who submitted and survived the spazzing and vomiting effect. . .so a BIG "thank you".
Excellent job, ENNUI & Madame Lavender
.
Excellent job, ENNUI & Madame Lavender
.
Anonymous
Holy crap!!
Well---I would thank the academy---lmao---all joking aside
thank you that's awesome, I've never won anything ever!!!
Well---I would thank the academy---lmao---all joking aside
thank you that's awesome, I've never won anything ever!!!
Anonymous
Thank you, i did put it with my poems and I am not a sir
oddly that's not the first time someone's called me a guy here
Disturbing trend
oddly that's not the first time someone's called me a guy here
Disturbing trend
