Poetry competition CLOSED 9th May 2014 7:18am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
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HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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Poetry Contest Description
comp for newbies
Okay, newbies (or with no comp wins) here's your chance. More experienced poets are welcome to showcase their work. I lived on my cartoons (He-Man, GI Joe, Transformers, etc.) when I was growing up so that's what I want to see. Write me an epic poem about your favorite cartoon.
MAKE IT EXCITING
ONE POEM PER POET
TWO WEEKS
NEW POEMS
MAKE IT EXCITING
ONE POEM PER POET
TWO WEEKS
NEW POEMS
Devilish
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Dangerous Mind
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Hey there you .. I'm still a pup can i come sit on the porch and watch ?.. lol
Austin_Rura
Austin Rura
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Austin Rura
Thought Provoker
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what a fun idea!
The Gromble done put together quite the ensemble...
Krumm, he can see you with his eye on his thumb,
Oblina, let her mislead ya leave ya a in a screamin feva'
but Ickis just looms and slobers, fool cant even scare the toddlers.
lookout AAAHH Real Monsters!!! LOL
The Gromble done put together quite the ensemble...
Krumm, he can see you with his eye on his thumb,
Oblina, let her mislead ya leave ya a in a screamin feva'
but Ickis just looms and slobers, fool cant even scare the toddlers.
lookout AAAHH Real Monsters!!! LOL
Anonymous
I'm down for the challenge.
4Ever4Gotten
Danielle Nicole
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Danielle Nicole
Thought Provoker
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Joined 6th Mar 2013Forum Posts: 337
This is gonna be a fun one
Madintellect
Mike stew
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Mike stew
Fire of Insight
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Joined 29th Mar 2014Forum Posts: 232
HadesRising said:Okay, newbies (or with no comp wins) here's your chance. More experienced poets are welcome to showcase their work. I lived on my cartoons (He-Man, GI Joe, Transformers, etc.) when I was growing up so that's what I want to see. Write me an epic poem about your favorite cartoon.
MAKE IT EXCITING
ONE POEM PER POET
TWO WEEKS
NEW POEMS
Tailbspin:
A bear and cub, fly a plane
Making deliverys, why was this seen?
Because it was a gooder
I thought the stories much better
than spunge bob
My opinion is newer Shit
is retarded and stupid ignorant
fun blob
of a child's mind
duuuh duuuh duuuh
is the style u find
loonie toons had me smiling as kid
animaniacs? Some hilarious Shit.
The end
Mad Intellect®
©2014
:)
MAKE IT EXCITING
ONE POEM PER POET
TWO WEEKS
NEW POEMS
Tailbspin:
A bear and cub, fly a plane
Making deliverys, why was this seen?
Because it was a gooder
I thought the stories much better
than spunge bob
My opinion is newer Shit
is retarded and stupid ignorant
fun blob
of a child's mind
duuuh duuuh duuuh
is the style u find
loonie toons had me smiling as kid
animaniacs? Some hilarious Shit.
The end
Mad Intellect®
©2014
:)
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 8th June 2013Forum Posts: 1613
Nice. Keep em coming guys
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
34
Joined 8th June 2013Forum Posts: 1613
Here is my contribution
Master of the Universe
Across the fields of battle
Where the earth does shake
Trample the opposition
And leave the dead in my wake
Astride my mighty beast
Across the plains and trees
I bring war to the weak
I rise, a shadow robed priest
Born of tales of treachery
Leaving flame on the trail
Destroy, annihilation
And leave this world in the hell
Devised of my own will
By the sword, break the seal
For I am the soul stealer
Arise, til my foes are nil
Skull! Upon this face
Place! Their broken hearts
Part! With their freedom
Kneel! Upon your knees
Plead! From the dirt
Curse! I am master
Of the universe
"Now. I, Skeletor, am Master of the Universe!
YES! Yes... I feel it, the power... fills me.
Yes, I feel the universe within me!
I am... I am a part of the cosmos!
Its energy flows... flows through me!
Of what consequence are you now?
This planet, these people, they are nothing to me!
The universe is power - pure, unstoppable power!
And I am that force, I am that power!
KNEEL BEFORE YOUR MASTER!"
Prepare for a life in chains
To live as a slave
Secure in your position
For the night will seize the day
Exist under sorcery
Looking up from your knees
I will hold this dominion
I rise to hold the key
Such foolish pride
To stand before me
Defenseless, powerless
I will break you
"Fool!
You are no longer my equal!
I am more than man!
More than life!
I... am... a... God!"
Crimson smear, blood stained lash
You cower before
Me, broken in damnation
The bodies wash to the shore
The fallen, my enemy
Hear screams across seas
You know I am the power
As you die on fallen leaves
"Do you hear?
The Alpha...
and the Omega...
death and rebirth...
and as you die,
so will I be reborn!"
quotations taken from the film Masters of the Universe
Master of the Universe
Across the fields of battle
Where the earth does shake
Trample the opposition
And leave the dead in my wake
Astride my mighty beast
Across the plains and trees
I bring war to the weak
I rise, a shadow robed priest
Born of tales of treachery
Leaving flame on the trail
Destroy, annihilation
And leave this world in the hell
Devised of my own will
By the sword, break the seal
For I am the soul stealer
Arise, til my foes are nil
Skull! Upon this face
Place! Their broken hearts
Part! With their freedom
Kneel! Upon your knees
Plead! From the dirt
Curse! I am master
Of the universe
"Now. I, Skeletor, am Master of the Universe!
YES! Yes... I feel it, the power... fills me.
Yes, I feel the universe within me!
I am... I am a part of the cosmos!
Its energy flows... flows through me!
Of what consequence are you now?
This planet, these people, they are nothing to me!
The universe is power - pure, unstoppable power!
And I am that force, I am that power!
KNEEL BEFORE YOUR MASTER!"
Prepare for a life in chains
To live as a slave
Secure in your position
For the night will seize the day
Exist under sorcery
Looking up from your knees
I will hold this dominion
I rise to hold the key
Such foolish pride
To stand before me
Defenseless, powerless
I will break you
"Fool!
You are no longer my equal!
I am more than man!
More than life!
I... am... a... God!"
Crimson smear, blood stained lash
You cower before
Me, broken in damnation
The bodies wash to the shore
The fallen, my enemy
Hear screams across seas
You know I am the power
As you die on fallen leaves
"Do you hear?
The Alpha...
and the Omega...
death and rebirth...
and as you die,
so will I be reborn!"
quotations taken from the film Masters of the Universe
EmptyTree
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Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 10th Oct 2013Forum Posts: 24
Are Japanese Cartoons allowed?
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 8th June 2013Forum Posts: 1613
Sure
Anonymous
Cartoon fanatic
Yes I was a fiend
How charismatic
The tube cartoons beamed
The morning I snuck
In a show or two
Laughing at the duck
Tom and Jerry too
Hanna-Barbera
Huckleberry Hound
The Flintstones era
Where was Scooby found?
George being fired
From Spacely Sprockets
A show inspired
Of space and rockets
That crazy caveman
And the Teen Angels
Pebbles and Bamm-Bamm
Or Smurfly fables
What of Herculoid
And those spacey pest
H to Murgatryoid
Or exit stage left
Jabberjaw was cool
And Hong Kong Phooey
Rocking after school
And both were screwy
Short Mr. Magoo
His eyes were so bad
Issues he went through
They thought he was mad
Hey Hey Hey Boo Boo
Pick-a-nick baskets
Think we should look through
For yummy snacklets
Go Speed Racer Go
Mysterious X
Was his older bro
The pole he protects
Aardvark and the ant
Whimsical banter
The show was revamped
From the Pink Panther
Don’t get me started
I have to be frank
The dearly departed
Voices of Mel Blanc
Yosammite Sam
Varmint, Say yer prayers
Or Captain Caveman
Tasmanian hairs
That debonair skunk
Seeking for l’amour
They feared how he stunk
The girls he adores
Speedy the mouse
He out witted cats
In Tweetys birdhouse
Sylvester combats
Barnie and Dino
The Bunny and Pig
Or Mr. Cosmo
That rooster was Big
Marvin the Martian
Space modulator
Bugs wants to ride in
His flying saucer
After school I watched
Crazy coyote
All his plans were botched
Denying his trophy
Wow!!! I did obsess
There are plenty more
I have to confess
I can’t account for
Yes I was a fiend
How charismatic
The tube cartoons beamed
The morning I snuck
In a show or two
Laughing at the duck
Tom and Jerry too
Hanna-Barbera
Huckleberry Hound
The Flintstones era
Where was Scooby found?
George being fired
From Spacely Sprockets
A show inspired
Of space and rockets
That crazy caveman
And the Teen Angels
Pebbles and Bamm-Bamm
Or Smurfly fables
What of Herculoid
And those spacey pest
H to Murgatryoid
Or exit stage left
Jabberjaw was cool
And Hong Kong Phooey
Rocking after school
And both were screwy
Short Mr. Magoo
His eyes were so bad
Issues he went through
They thought he was mad
Hey Hey Hey Boo Boo
Pick-a-nick baskets
Think we should look through
For yummy snacklets
Go Speed Racer Go
Mysterious X
Was his older bro
The pole he protects
Aardvark and the ant
Whimsical banter
The show was revamped
From the Pink Panther
Don’t get me started
I have to be frank
The dearly departed
Voices of Mel Blanc
Yosammite Sam
Varmint, Say yer prayers
Or Captain Caveman
Tasmanian hairs
That debonair skunk
Seeking for l’amour
They feared how he stunk
The girls he adores
Speedy the mouse
He out witted cats
In Tweetys birdhouse
Sylvester combats
Barnie and Dino
The Bunny and Pig
Or Mr. Cosmo
That rooster was Big
Marvin the Martian
Space modulator
Bugs wants to ride in
His flying saucer
After school I watched
Crazy coyote
All his plans were botched
Denying his trophy
Wow!!! I did obsess
There are plenty more
I have to confess
I can’t account for
EmptyTree
Forum Posts: 24
Twisted Dreamer
3
Joined 10th Oct 2013Forum Posts: 24
Memories are of no importance to men
Within modern times and cultures
So it was to me as well back then;
In ignorance, with obscure futures.
My life changed its way today
When in that closet someone did lay
Within crimson pools of her own
And so my composure with wind blown.
I took off and left my sanity there,
As I take off, going back to my lair.
Not knowing what would take place
As I pressed send; starting this race.
I, Kyouma-mad scientist, the chosen one
First to make a machine and make Time run
Run backwards that is, using my phone
Aha, And again my genius is shown!
The murder prevented, lives made better
For my friends, assistant, future lover?
But my once thought paranoia
The organization! They finally show
My genius, my work, about it they know
And they send me threats, messages
Death letters until one grave day
They break in through the door
Shot my beloved friend and made their way
I journey back through time to save my friend
And time and time again things would stay the same
Death would be present for my dear friend
In all sorts of ways, In all word lines I find,
Shot down, Stabbed, Run over, lots of ways!
All tragically painful for me to....say
I can't save her no matter what way
I've gone back in time so many times now
And seen her die time and time again
So my spirit has grown dead as well, my friend
I am destroyed by the thought, this is our end
Our friendship's over, "Why God, then?"
But then I sit back and notice when
In every world line, there was a friend
That genius I saved when she was first murdered
Helped me do all and attempt to save that friend.
She became my lover and so I loved her in a way
That defied time; in memories that would stay.
She devised a plan to save that friend of mine
But that way would require her to stay
Within another world line, She would know me not
And so I am murdered, in spirit and love
As I pursue to fight this Ragnarok.
But time lies. She would still remain there
Present in my memory Forever still there
We both would be in a love in different world lines
Forever to be in a romance in different worlds.
She insisted I leave with no words left
Torn apart, I did and left to save my friend.
Finally in the Alpha world line, she's safe
They're both safe and that's all that matters.
But a friend of mine that defies Time
Told me I needed to save her, my love, this time
From death, from the blade and from not knowing me.
I take the blade willingly and painfully agree
There is not enough blood that I once had seen
With her laid on the floor, I thrust on through
My blood drenched her and so now I knew
I had saved her, this was the first sight
For my old self to know and think about tonight.
I walk in to the unknown, faces I've never seen
And I see her, whom I loved in a different time
I stop in awe, and so does she
And "The future is unknown with infinite possibilities"
So as it is the choice of the Steins;Gate
Here's mine,
Inspired from Steins; Gate
Within modern times and cultures
So it was to me as well back then;
In ignorance, with obscure futures.
My life changed its way today
When in that closet someone did lay
Within crimson pools of her own
And so my composure with wind blown.
I took off and left my sanity there,
As I take off, going back to my lair.
Not knowing what would take place
As I pressed send; starting this race.
I, Kyouma-mad scientist, the chosen one
First to make a machine and make Time run
Run backwards that is, using my phone
Aha, And again my genius is shown!
The murder prevented, lives made better
For my friends, assistant, future lover?
But my once thought paranoia
The organization! They finally show
My genius, my work, about it they know
And they send me threats, messages
Death letters until one grave day
They break in through the door
Shot my beloved friend and made their way
I journey back through time to save my friend
And time and time again things would stay the same
Death would be present for my dear friend
In all sorts of ways, In all word lines I find,
Shot down, Stabbed, Run over, lots of ways!
All tragically painful for me to....say
I can't save her no matter what way
I've gone back in time so many times now
And seen her die time and time again
So my spirit has grown dead as well, my friend
I am destroyed by the thought, this is our end
Our friendship's over, "Why God, then?"
But then I sit back and notice when
In every world line, there was a friend
That genius I saved when she was first murdered
Helped me do all and attempt to save that friend.
She became my lover and so I loved her in a way
That defied time; in memories that would stay.
She devised a plan to save that friend of mine
But that way would require her to stay
Within another world line, She would know me not
And so I am murdered, in spirit and love
As I pursue to fight this Ragnarok.
But time lies. She would still remain there
Present in my memory Forever still there
We both would be in a love in different world lines
Forever to be in a romance in different worlds.
She insisted I leave with no words left
Torn apart, I did and left to save my friend.
Finally in the Alpha world line, she's safe
They're both safe and that's all that matters.
But a friend of mine that defies Time
Told me I needed to save her, my love, this time
From death, from the blade and from not knowing me.
I take the blade willingly and painfully agree
There is not enough blood that I once had seen
With her laid on the floor, I thrust on through
My blood drenched her and so now I knew
I had saved her, this was the first sight
For my old self to know and think about tonight.
I walk in to the unknown, faces I've never seen
And I see her, whom I loved in a different time
I stop in awe, and so does she
And "The future is unknown with infinite possibilities"
So as it is the choice of the Steins;Gate
Here's mine,
Inspired from Steins; Gate