what do you want?

Every Good Story

Every good story
Is all about a girl
Or two guys in a bed
Kissing and somehow knowing
What love is when love is
So far away it seems to be just
A constellation

All I have ever wanted
Is love that does not falter
And fade

Again, 50 words or less
One entry each
Give a title...

Blank Question Mark


I don't know what I want?

Maybe because I WANT
so many things?

So for the meantime
I refuse to desecrate additional brain cells
particularly on what I want.
Let me just live for today
and see what tomorrow offers.

Maybe at that point,
I will know what I want.

_Fourty-five Words Quoted for this .45 that I'm Loadin'

I want power to get what's owed.

I want to be here to water my flowers long after the seeds get sowed.

I want to chill and sit back.

I don't want to be the one that has to feel I'm having a fucking heart attack.

Thank you all. This comp ends tomorrow but due to the number of entries, 2 judges, and the point system, I will announce the winners and evalutions on thursday. as always, you guys really set the bar high.

I want

EVERYTHING

but self aware enough to know if I got it
I still wouldn't be happy

I want to not want anything

might be a bit longer on the results here. I apologize, but I am not feeling well and its slow going....bare with me.
thank's :-)

thank's again for the entries and for patiently waiting on me to get back and judge it.

the winner was chosen from the entries that tied with the highest scores by myself and another judge.

Clarity of meaning -----35 points total
depth or potency of the piece------45 points total
structure and flow where applicable-----15 points total
Grammar---5 points total
compliance with rules of competition (non compliance results in disqualification)


Annagrin—Disqualified, no title

Evan
C.O.M. 30 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  85/100

Grace
C.O.M.  35 points
D.O.P. 40 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  90/100

Madame L
C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 30 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  85/100

Miss G
C.O.M. 30 points
D.O.P. 30 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  80/100

Joelsmlove

C.O.M. 30 points
D.O.P. 40 points
S.A.F. 10 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  85/100

Missy

C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 40 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  95/100


Jonrot

C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 40 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  95/100

Dkrui

Disqualified-no title


Sar Val


C.O.M. 30 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 10 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  80/100

Guardian Demon
Disqualified-no title


Rachelmae
Disqualified, no title


Nikki Vee

C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 30 points
S.A.F. 10 points
G. Sp. 15 points
Total=  85/100

Sw9618

C.O.M.  30 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 10 points
G. Sp. 10 points
Total=  85/100

Madintellect
Disqualified-over word count, no title, multiple entries

Uma

C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 10 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total= 85/100

Magdalena
C.O.M. 40 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  95/100

Primogenito

C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  90/100

Xmar 82

C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 10 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total= 85/100

Madi

C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 30 points
S.A.F. 10 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  85/100

Brainsandwich
C.O.M. 40 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  95/100

Heartless
C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 30 points
S.A.F. 10 points
G. Sp. 15 points
Total=  85/100

Domore

C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 30 points
S.A.F. 10 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=80  

Littleprince

C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 25 points
S.A.F. 10 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  75/100

Queenofwhatever
Disqualified, no title

Unencumbered
Disqualified, no title

Lanooz

C.O.M. 40 points
D.O.P. 25 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  85/100

Harleyquinn
C.O.M. 40 points
D.O.P. 30 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  90/100

Rain C
C.O.M. 40 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  95/100

Indigo
C.O.M. 40 points
D.O.P. 30 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total=  90/100

Eris

C.O.M. 40 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total= 95/100


Unknown emo
Disqualified, no title

Alexander Case
C.O.M. 40 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total= 95/100

Sinead M
C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total= 90/100

Whale

C.O.M. 40 points
D.O.P. 30 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total= 90/100

Impartialbrillianc
Disqualified, no title

Pathospassion
C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total= 90/100

Devlin

C.O.M. 35 points
D.O.P. 35 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total= 90/100


Austinrura

C.O.M. 40 points
D.O.P. 30 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total= 90/100

Ennui

C.O.M. 30 points
D.O.P. 30 points
S.A.F. 15 points
G. Sp. 5 points
Total= 80/100

Thank you Miki for a great comp.  Well done John for the win and Missy.

my pleasure! thank's Magdalena and congrats to you, Jon, and Missy!

Congratulations John for winning...yay! To Magdalena and Missy, wow. Good write all.:)

thanx miki...to say i can comply to your high standards and still to your poetic liking is flattering mam......

good job missy and mags!!!    high 5!!!!!

Not trying to whine here, but I definitely left a title. "Us" was the title. It was centered, so you might have missed it.