Poetry competition CLOSED 29th April 2014 3:47am
WINNER
lepperochan (Craic-Dealer)
lepperochan (Craic-Dealer)
RUNNERS-UP:
anna_grin
and Madintellect
Crushing DU
Poetry Contest Description
Ever stalked the profile of a fellow DU member? Read all their poems, commented endlessly, exchanged messages, or just admired from afar? Here's your chance to write about your DU crush. Make it interesting, no holds barred.
Poetry or prose in any length
New pieces only
Up to two entries
Describe your Underground crush
Be creative
(Using their name is optional)
New pieces only
Up to two entries
Describe your Underground crush
Be creative
(Using their name is optional)
Crushed Underground
he walks into my heart
through words written
graceful from the start
until the very end
he twists his words
forming sharp knives
plunging into my mind
opening up old wounds
yet truth he shares
resounds in my awareness
wishes that beginnings
can start at the ending.
he walks into my heart
through words written
graceful from the start
until the very end
he twists his words
forming sharp knives
plunging into my mind
opening up old wounds
yet truth he shares
resounds in my awareness
wishes that beginnings
can start at the ending.
Anonymous
Without warning
You existed only briefly,
the casually haunted soul
who tapped your bones
at my door, silently
and without warning
and though the years passed
in colour-less blurs
and awkward saviours,
I still imagined your voice
as you sang me to sleep.
I remembered your letters
with fondness as my only
could-have-been, though
questions did not nourish
my heart when you had gone
past my conscious reasons
to kiss sinful slumbers
that lingered when words
danced with my will
to simply dream.
You existed only briefly,
the casually haunted soul
who tapped your bones
at my door, silently
and without warning
and though the years passed
in colour-less blurs
and awkward saviours,
I still imagined your voice
as you sang me to sleep.
I remembered your letters
with fondness as my only
could-have-been, though
questions did not nourish
my heart when you had gone
past my conscious reasons
to kiss sinful slumbers
that lingered when words
danced with my will
to simply dream.
m_abbott1999 said:[quote-259645-anonymouslyhere][quote-259623-m_abbott1999]Thanks for the start! It's appreciated :)
your actually my DU crush [/quote]
Write about it then! No brownie points though
P.s. thanks, but you've got the wrong girl.[/quote]
I was joking, just seeing what the reaction would be. ive learned never have a crush on anyone online
your actually my DU crush [/quote]
Write about it then! No brownie points though
P.s. thanks, but you've got the wrong girl.[/quote]
I was joking, just seeing what the reaction would be. ive learned never have a crush on anyone online
Anonymous
Describe my DUP crush
There are so many to choose
It’s enough to make me blush
In their ink I myself loose
My preoccupation
I look for inspiration
Ameliorate my dictation
To let out all of my frustration
Infatuation
Their verse I admire
Icons of veneration
In my own prose I aspire
My pen in its infancy
I search for expression
Their intimacy
My obsession
I express my reverence
To those whose ink I adore
Infatuation I write
Confess my DUP crush
There are so many to choose
It’s enough to make me blush
In their ink I myself loose
My preoccupation
I look for inspiration
Ameliorate my dictation
To let out all of my frustration
Infatuation
Their verse I admire
Icons of veneration
In my own prose I aspire
My pen in its infancy
I search for expression
Their intimacy
My obsession
I express my reverence
To those whose ink I adore
Infatuation I write
Confess my DUP crush
Anonymous
A
Poet
Revealing
Of whom he’s fond
I have crushed a lot
On DU expression
Acknowledged my own weakness
For poetry that inspires
The one, few, or many I obsess
Diligently I read opening thoughts
Admiration I search for my voice
Through these competitions I grow
Evolving through this art form
Confronting my issues
And improve my craft
So maybe I
Will be my
DU
Crush
Poet
Revealing
Of whom he’s fond
I have crushed a lot
On DU expression
Acknowledged my own weakness
For poetry that inspires
The one, few, or many I obsess
Diligently I read opening thoughts
Admiration I search for my voice
Through these competitions I grow
Evolving through this art form
Confronting my issues
And improve my craft
So maybe I
Will be my
DU
Crush
i swear her smile
was orange
her boyish grace
perfectly contrasted in the sky green
of her eyes
if they were green at all
space woman
wonder girl
if she would of
id lick tomato sauce
from the corners of her lips
and think of this joke i know
about momma tomato poppa tomato
and baby tomato
and not say it
so as not to be crushed
was orange
her boyish grace
perfectly contrasted in the sky green
of her eyes
if they were green at all
space woman
wonder girl
if she would of
id lick tomato sauce
from the corners of her lips
and think of this joke i know
about momma tomato poppa tomato
and baby tomato
and not say it
so as not to be crushed
My forever Underground Crush
Her username's from a villian
one of the most sexiest I've seen;
her picture in only black and white
shows off that beautiful profile.
We spoke for the first time
after a poem with such name
a confusing mind game of my own,
we both agreed, it must've been fate.
Yet she's so far apart,
an entire continent and an ocean divides us;
as if fate wasn't more of a tease,
we get along so well it scares me.
Should she feel the same way
I don't even want to think what we'd do;
we're both just too young for this,
maybe that's why she'll never know.
Anonymous
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m_abbott1999 said:Poetry or prose in any length
New pieces only
Up to two entries
Describe your Underground crush
Be creative
(Using their name is optional)
No length?
(Perfect
that's when i-
show strength.
here we go, hmmm
haha well there's plenty to choose
if we lived closer?
I'd remedy blues
I'm learning like news
Ive given her plenty views
within her poems, are hidden clues
of far from innocent blues
she said that use
but her beauty? it has the most-
colourful hues
there is no other i'd choose
I would love her askews...
...I can feel pain, below strengh
in her poetry
she deserves just
to know that she
has her home to go
simply to sleep at night.
I feel as if I know you
I'd to see you stay alright..
fuck eh!
just know that you have a place to stay
up In Canada
I know what its like not at home
hugs I'm sending ya!
I have with room with your game
not sure what loom in your brain
your adorable
hun I wish I was
an orricle
see if you
guess
ill email my
address
you could deliver
a kiss
please deliver
guess
I respect u a lot
its I'm new and your hot?
I just smoked a dube
I forgot....
anyway... to the united states!
wait a while, I just blew
your own bedroom
just a crush so ya know
name rhymes with..madly
Ok fine. Then hedly...
Naah first one.
Haha
end rhyme:
I don't have a caddy
& u won't find here ratty
right now I'm smoking a fatty
Why dont we get chaty
I appreciate your reading what i write
If we ever get to meet it would be delight
I can dig I "got the wrong girl?"lol
Anyway...
Lmao
Fuck
this site
is addictive
;)
The end
New pieces only
Up to two entries
Describe your Underground crush
Be creative
(Using their name is optional)
No length?
(Perfect
that's when i-
show strength.
here we go, hmmm
haha well there's plenty to choose
if we lived closer?
I'd remedy blues
I'm learning like news
Ive given her plenty views
within her poems, are hidden clues
of far from innocent blues
she said that use
but her beauty? it has the most-
colourful hues
there is no other i'd choose
I would love her askews...
...I can feel pain, below strengh
in her poetry
she deserves just
to know that she
has her home to go
simply to sleep at night.
I feel as if I know you
I'd to see you stay alright..
fuck eh!
just know that you have a place to stay
up In Canada
I know what its like not at home
hugs I'm sending ya!
I have with room with your game
not sure what loom in your brain
your adorable
hun I wish I was
an orricle
see if you
guess
ill email my
address
you could deliver
a kiss
please deliver
guess
I respect u a lot
its I'm new and your hot?
I just smoked a dube
I forgot....
anyway... to the united states!
wait a while, I just blew
your own bedroom
just a crush so ya know
name rhymes with..madly
Ok fine. Then hedly...
Naah first one.
Haha
end rhyme:
I don't have a caddy
& u won't find here ratty
right now I'm smoking a fatty
Why dont we get chaty
I appreciate your reading what i write
If we ever get to meet it would be delight
I can dig I "got the wrong girl?"lol
Anyway...
Lmao
Fuck
this site
is addictive
;)
The end
