Poetry competition CLOSED 20th April 2014 11:38am
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Madintellect (Mike stew)
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new rap battle

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
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Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

As I write it down
delight is found
this fight? I'm crowned

the victor!

I've got more angles
Than a-
protractor!

Due to the your
slow factor

anonymouslyhere
Pariah Shadow
Dangerous Mind
United States 5awards
Joined 31st Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 1633

don't kid around
ive been crowned
im running circles around you
your words are to few
who knew
I could beat yall this bad
so sad...
for you ha!

i anticipate
never complicate
just your fate
im just great
look here mate
i proliferate
dominate
at a rate
faster than you can see
good for me
i gotta passion to burn like battery acid
and ill melt your plastic
make it thick
cause it'll need to stick
make you choke on your spit
or until you quit
cause im on top
yeah that's right
you didn't even put up a fight

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
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Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

I'm not an actor
lick on my sack sir
cause you In fact sure...

Are full of s***
& not cold a bit
I'm told you snitch
get rolled you bitch
can't catch this pitch
or scratch this itch!

Da Da Da daa.daa. I'm loving it.



like you got game?
there's no hot flame!
you'll get shot plain-

And simple
your pain is ample
but still I pass you, like your at a standstill

you wish you had skill
I'm like an anvil


dropped on your rhyme
get squashed. It combines
don't jot on those lines
don't plop poor designs:D

Nada zilch
I outta beltch


still be better than you
I stay ahead ,cuz your poo!
& off of your med, or on glue
u need more  better skill
indeed I'm better till...


you prove me wrong
please move your gone

admit that you've been wrong


you can't touch this
Rhyme that plunges


up from above
you sucking enough


for 10 lives in a row
how many knifes must I throw?
Just to get you to know
you ain't the best with the flow
and I suggest that you go

to hell

the flow
You spill

About as tough as a daffodil
I'm gonna cuff you and slap you till

you step it up

kick up the pace

if luck you chase


I rhyme better
you need a time sweater


for you can travel forward in time
to be empowered by Run

listen coward, no Im..

Much better
clutch dinner

then vomit your description
I'm the bomb so pay attention

the end lol

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
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Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

Got anything better?
this thread needs to be redder

 
I'm psychic & seen,  your words bleed...
I hate your absurd breed

That's the prediction
Me?
I'm Mad Max in action!
Don't take cracks, in the section
Ill  Slice  through your words alwayz
And cut them open like hallways

Mr Russle Flow lol
better hustle yo :-X


Cheers

I win


Cheers

anonymouslyhere
Pariah Shadow
Dangerous Mind
United States 5awards
Joined 31st Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 1633

what are you saying?
I don't know
its pretty clear you're a psycho
hear my flow
take it slow
no need in going fast
I just blew right past
you'll never catch my pace
just drop out of the race

im amazing
trail blazing
mind gazing

you are an animal
one that can't speak
little freak
so go take a sneak peak
at winner circle
ill be there
not hair
nor hide of you
who?
oh yeah no one remembers 2
the loser
they remember the cruiser
the bruiser
the winner
not the spinner
your outta control
good luck with the crash
cause yo words just got smashed

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

U suck more than a vacume
your delusion is sad

I'm in your hair like videl sasoon
my conlusion? Your mad


If u award yourself?
You've ignored your health (mentaly

Not in this century
Could you potentialy


be better

I'm up with skill
Your
currupt & ill


Found the hunch
I'm bound to punch

in the mouth
Time to fly south

Your spit
(couldn't be)
More shit!

Single sylable?

Try better
Or I header


to America
to
take care of ya
aware of the

double thyme u can't flow
is trouble flyin to go

Basically shut up!
And stop replying your so...

Much better.


You were dropped on your head
you get chopped down till dead
3 crows your a skid
your flows shoulda hid
How bout elbows to the head

you cant match skill I sped

your direction
So no more
of
Your low score

your a floor whore



you get walked on
Your fucked
your thought wrong

I'm a plot bomb



..... With a murder plan


crow herding your done
In fact? Your entire
hurting band better run

If you win? Eat cocks
why?
What you say sucks


Canadians beat u with rhymes
same as.we.beat you.with pucks

the end

unencumbered_twine
Lost Thinker
Joined 18th Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 15

All y'all rap like cowards sheltered and shrouded by your own shadows.

Grow a pair,
go down to your local MC,
borrow some snare,
and get thirsty--

for some real Helter Skelter shit
raw enough to make you slit
your own shadow's fuckng throat to have to see such dumb shit you spit
and spew
out of hell only knows what kinda blue-- You're, your, what the fuck is yore?
So suck up the drip and let it rip til you get to a real beat.

But that's just the start
cuz you gotta get to the heart of the matter
and put the mad hatter's scattered infant syndrome at bay,
Dismayed? Maybe if you had a soul,
so go back to forsaking it with that troll in its place and at least save some face for grace.

Maybe go smoke a bowl of something that'll knock you out of those close toed feet you're wearin
Cuz you sure as hell can't pack a punch in sharin words with a toddler modelin raps from mama's carin suburbanite swearin and swurvin all over the will to fight or flight for raising such plight.

Same goes for you Canadian
thinkin you're weavin twisted dreams
when they're really just aliens.

Not even in this millennia
should a paranoia
go so long unmedicated,
so be sure to get your mind incubated
before you header over,

Bound and punch yourself in the mouth again.
I don't want what you're carryin
infected Sumarian from the dreamland
of kindergarten--
three and four lettered and worded turds, I mean rhymes.

So better yet just stay over yonder in kind
and fondle yer mates with wet wipes
to swipe the nasty and make way for the ripe.

Take your time, we'll be alright.

unencumbered_twine
Lost Thinker
Joined 18th Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 15

This strange creature is gonna eatcha,
spit you back out only in a last ditch effort to teach ya..

It's not about what you know or how you know it,
it's about dismembering and re-constructing the dots in a way that's poetic..

Whether it be Cartesian in complexity,
looping through the streams of knowing enough to divine a deity
unable to pull the wool over your eyes disproving it is almighty,

Or enlightened in its deep simplicity,

Maybe lost in romance,
or mad rapping in a trance--
dancing through worlds of lunacy with a pedigree so fine
it must have been tuned by a lobotomy of the maddest of surreal scientists with the learned stoic-ness of a dead locust.

Feel it--
and murder it with love
like lightning once zapped that bug--
Now it's flying around buzzing with a spark
in its heart
most noticeable through the darkest of darks.

I must digress, however,
and bite my tongue to confess
I only lit you up this time to blow you out..see...

No one wins in a battle,
it's like feeding the cattle
and then ringing the dinner bell
before hell's damnation can tell ya what it was for...

Honor among thieves is like envy among poets,
it's a phantom in the shadows of Goethe's wet dream streaming across live TV

You don't want to explicitly show it but it's the genius that lies under the guise of these words we're intelligibly transcribing through such verbiage high on courage

Oh wait,
back to the battle,
the scramble,
I'll just let you run over yourselves over easy,
cuz that's how this battle will conclude,
just like murdering the paradoxes above would be rude.

I'll let you sort it.

Don't get lost in infinitude.

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

Your a douche canue
there's no
Excuse for u


to step up w your lack of skill
bitch you
can't attack this hill



Have you lost your mind
I have ten times
your skill combined

What's the deal? Your blind!
I ignor your kind
to far behind

all that writing
with no skill to find

lol beat it
practice? You need it!

Fact is,defeated



... Is the tale for u
I will impale all u threw

Cause on my scale? They're poo!

Sorry to just leave ya blue

But

except facts!
Your shit lacks

true skill
flown from u? Nill

If I want lip ill rattle my fly bitch

you get destroyed! bwah ahhaha

unencumbered_twine
Lost Thinker
Joined 18th Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 15

This is way too easy, son
Come back when you've developed some taste buds on your tongue.

Should I even mention puberty?
Floating up shit's creek without a hue to see..

You're still stuck in black and white,
impaled by a child's will to fight or flight,
suspended in the middle,
the only thing rattling off those bitch lips some dribble..

I said don't get lost in Infinitude,
Not in an infant's poo, mumbling and covered in drool..

Here buddy, have another try on the fly,
I know it's too far over your head to even begin to ask why

So consider this a one way ticket from cricket airlines--
cuz that's the only thing we'll be hearing when you realize
the age group you've been stealing your material from is yay high.





Satyr
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 20th Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 59

unencumbered_twine said:This is way too easy, son
Come back when you've developed some taste buds on your tongue.

Should I even mention puberty?
Floating up shit's creek without a hue to see..

You're still stuck in black and white,
impaled by a child's will to fight or flight,
suspended in the middle,
the only thing rattling off those bitch lips some dribble..

I said don't get lost in Infinitude,
Not in an infant's poo, mumbling and covered in drool..

Here buddy, have another try on the fly,
I know it's too far over your head to even begin to ask why

So consider this a one way ticket from cricket airlines--
cuz that's the only thing we'll be hearing when you realize
the age group you've been stealing your material from is yay high.






If you wanna get to him then you'll have to get through me
Unencumbered twine
More like a severely mired swine

I've been crowned a King once before
In a battle similar to this with which I've mopped the floor

Satyrs have been known for their seductive prowess
This one's more realized as a lyrical Taoist
I'll put my heart on my sleeve and my words in your face
My tongue will spit vehemence and toxins in this case

I sit here sipping cognac
You should maybe pop some Prozac
As I pull up on a throwback
Nary a chance to even go back

To a time when things were simpler
Dear child, you're now my dinner
I'll eat your heart out while you're living
A cannibalistic Thanksgiving
A killing this chilling is fitting for the driven
The sinning so willing, my grinning is a given

unencumbered_twine
Lost Thinker
Joined 18th Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 15

Finally

A worthy adversary
Be it in form of a double dipping canary
eavesdropping on an intellect gone mad on poo from a fairy

Picking up the tone
and rattling the cage of an old sage

So welcome my Taoist friend
I hope you've learned some Shaolin
Cuz I'm from the old dragon's den

I know you won't mind detoxing your opioid filled self before you come in
A road so slippery as the one of sin
Mopping the floor of an old slaying
petty
but I'll accept your prerequisite
The floor as it is being ready for your exit

Indebted already you are from paying too much mind to humor
I've slayed the last of the dragon slayers of Satyr n had a nice dinner
But I'm still hungry n I see I've snagged a winner
This should be fun
I thank you for tonight's special offer

Prozac is child's play
Haven't you kept up
I see you're still at bay

Your cognac must be too dry
I don't mean to pry
But a door left open carries a million whys

You should know this old friend
A paradox to reckon with a Taoist on a drinking binge

Stuck at his hermitage
out in the middle of the lake in camouflage

Blinded by the wakes of his throwback mistakes
Unable to see the pass n he got caked

Your past victors still bubbling up in your blisters

So take your heart off your sleeve and recognize where it's supposed to be
I'll forgive your words in my face if you'll take your life with honor and recede in grace

To a time when things were simpler for you
Just because something's given doesn't mean it's true

I figured you knew

Must've been too busy driving cannibals to a veggie thanksgiving

Like thinking you're on top when you couldn't be further from winning

unencumbered_twine
Lost Thinker
Joined 18th Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 15

Man

Somebody take this grinning muppet back to Sesame Street
where he can relearn to get back on his feet minus the crack rocks which led to his defeat

A demise prescribed by the lies his elders told him
he was such a sheltered trembling ember so he absorbed the tremors of their scoldings

It's so unfortunate I wanna feel sorry for him
Empathize with the lies he now wears in truth disguises

A Taoist unlearned in the ways of his true masters
I can't think of a more beautiful disaster

So I'll accept the honor to shred his tower of perceived power like a seducer already with his prey in the shower

Where's your prowess now
Look in the mirror and find your conscience's discerned scowl

Study the careful curvatures
to remind you when you reclimb the ladder not to look behind you

I don't think you could live with what you see
But that's just me

Bleeding with tears for the years you wasted in vain just to be slain by a descendent of Cain

unencumbered_twine
Lost Thinker
Joined 18th Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 15

I understand it's a lot to dissect
You're gonna need much time to reflect

So go back to the drawing board
And hopefully you'll return with a Hanzo sword

I need some worthy competition
My vowels are getting angry with repetition

Insides screaming for something substantial to relieve this tumultuous vivisection I've been overseeing

It's not a fun thing to watch your peers foam about at the mouth while running with their insides hanging out

Redeem me from this disease
Put me out of your miseries

It's almost too much to take
for your sakes such discriminate distaste effeminately out of place

I'll be here waiting
surveying the playing field wielding not even a shield inviting the next to yield

At least give me some swill

It could come off as too pretentious to even say I'm too skilled at this guild

But I will.

Beware of my till

anonymouslyhere
Pariah Shadow
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 31st Oct 2013
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CONGRATZ too the winner!

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