DU Poetry Competitions WHAT IF... you wrote a limerick using the subject What If! (page 3)

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Magdalena
Spartalena

Tyrant of Words

Joined 21st Apr 2012
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A limerick is sequence of AABBA rhythm of

1.
There was an old man from Peru, (A)
da DUM da da DUM da da DUM (3 DUMS)
2.
who dreamed he was eating his shoe. (A)
da DUM da da DUM da da DUM (3 DUMS)
3.
He awoke in the night (B)
da DUM da da DUM (2 DUMS)
4.
with a terrible fright, (B)
da da DUM da da DUM (2 DUMS)
5.
and found out that it was quite true. (A)
da DUM da da DUM da da DUM (3 DUMS)

blah...

Posted: 26th January 2014 5:14pm

Edited: 26th January 2014 5:15pm

Anonymous

I've spent hours at this but to no avail

Posted: 26th January 2014 5:50pm

Edited: 1st February 2014 9:18pm - edited 2 times

gardenlover

Fire of Insight

Joined 19th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 625

What if I could write better rhymes
I might win contests more of the times
Writing alliteration
Without much frustration
Might help me fulfil my dreams

ArtisticaDreamer

Thought Provoker

Joined 18th Dec 2013
Forum Posts: 23

Okay, Magdalena, you are right! Can't have a proper limerick with out the AABBA! So here is my new submission...

What if...

Everyone came out to play
Charades, a potter's delight for his clay
Would be difficult
Boring life, mystical
To dream not my What If plays

gardenlover

Fire of Insight

Joined 19th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 625

What if I take you on vacation
Would you agree to a sexual relation
Appear as a couple
A kiss and a cuddle
And nightly perform fornication

Posted: 4th February 2014 3:07am

Edited: 5th February 2014 1:27am

ArtisticaDreamer

Thought Provoker

Joined 18th Dec 2013
Forum Posts: 23

what if i, took you on vacation
free me, sexual gratification
appear as we are, odd couple
in and out, your eyes my fumble
quitting the phony master bed a ration

What if...

Posted: 17th February 2015 9:11am

Edited: 17th February 2015 9:59am

Sandman68

Thought Provoker

Joined 15th Feb 2015
Forum Posts: 305

Birds take your limericks to peck it
Why do so many people wreck it?
They do have rules
You rhyming fools
WHAT IF you goddamn once check it?

And in the end, there were, perhaps, limits to how much he could let himself change.

Sandman68

Thought Provoker

Joined 15th Feb 2015
Forum Posts: 305

A writer who goes by Schiitaryn
Blew an old guy cuz she was darin'
When giving him head
At some point turned dead
So she quit as he had stopped carin'

And in the end, there were, perhaps, limits to how much he could let himself change.

Posted: 17th February 2015 9:22am

Edited: 17th February 2015 9:22am

Sandman68

Thought Provoker

Joined 15th Feb 2015
Forum Posts: 305

A poet named Artistica Dreamer
was said to be quite a screamer
Post-sex coffee her treat
She liked it real sweet
But used jizz in the cup and not creamer

And in the end, there were, perhaps, limits to how much he could let himself change.

Sandman68

Thought Provoker

Joined 15th Feb 2015
Forum Posts: 305

While tending the crops Garden Lover
Stripped down with her lover above her
A storm through the trees
Brought forth a cold breeze
And made both of them run for cover

And in the end, there were, perhaps, limits to how much he could let himself change.

Sandman68

Thought Provoker

Joined 15th Feb 2015
Forum Posts: 305

Magdelena's intention to rile
the limerick structure and style
Using da da DUM DUM
with twerks of her bum
Her teaching skills won by a mile

And in the end, there were, perhaps, limits to how much he could let himself change.

Sandman68

Thought Provoker

Joined 15th Feb 2015
Forum Posts: 305

It seems Big Balls Man LOL
Limerick structure was hell
There were too many lines
That proved too many times
He just didn't do it too well

(just kidding Balls. Rhyming words :p)

And in the end, there were, perhaps, limits to how much he could let himself change.

Sandman68

Thought Provoker

Joined 15th Feb 2015
Forum Posts: 305

It still appears I'm a Lost Thinker
with limerick rhymes i do tinker
Till change it they do
to prove growth anew
WHAT IF I just stay Heavy Drinker?

And in the end, there were, perhaps, limits to how much he could let himself change.

Posted: 17th February 2015 10:31am

Edited: 17th February 2015 2:04pm - edited 4 times

Anonymous

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Posted: 17th February 2015 11:45am

Edited: 17th February 2015 2:04pm

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