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Eternal Darkness - 6 words per line, 3 lines

Posted: 22nd July 2014 1:52am
HadesRising
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Such a pleasant fragrance in here
When it's just us two, alone
You putrid flesh turns me on

Posted: 22nd July 2014 2:06am
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when scents of death they permeate
through the chamber of horror speak
there you die a troubled death

Posted: 22nd July 2014 3:00am
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Hanging from the rusted racks
Caked with blood and other fluids
Pitiful, you scream for your release

Posted: 22nd July 2014 12:25pm
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screams not heard beyond the portal
just resonate within the thick walls
where Gehenna burns bright and fiery

Posted: 23rd July 2014 3:00pm
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behind those walls lies this man
whose strength falls apart from misery
who could only scream in dreams

Posted: 23rd July 2014 3:09pm
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such defeat eats into the soul
open wounds ready to be salted
every words cuts even gentle ones

Posted: 23rd July 2014 3:29pm
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only those weak in spirit crumbles
at the peak of tough battles
life maybe rough to those losers

Posted: 23rd July 2014 3:32pm
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losers in battles they cringed within
their cowardice heavy in their mind
choices made, sovereign or their family

Posted: 23rd July 2014 3:46pm
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the triumphants trample upon the thousands
defying death, dismembering foes whose cries
echo in the valley of death

Posted: 24th July 2014 3:53am
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Heaven rains injustice with grateful equality
Showering the land, bless the sky
That rings with guilt and innocence

Posted: 24th July 2014 4:07am
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guilty pleasures behind tight drawn curtains
giggles of happiness, sighs of contentment
as it ate the rat's entrails

Posted: 24th July 2014 11:49am
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the chosen screaming triumphant in battlefields
headhunters running through the virgin jungles
Pirates at sea, all befriended scytheman

Posted: 24th July 2014 1:29pm
Edited: 24th July 2014 1:31pm
poet Anonymous
P- positive
A-attitude
I- in
N- negative
S- situations

Posted: 24th July 2014 4:10pm
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Pamelajohn said:P- positive
A-attitude
I- in
N- negative
S- situations

Pamelaj I see you are having a hard time with this...thanks for trying but still it doesn't make the cut! Please see previous posts, study them carefully and try again. Remember: 6 words per line for a total of 3 lines.

Posted: 24th July 2014 4:25pm
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between dusk and dawn comes darkness
hiding naked shadows under the moonlight
humming soothing melody, bathing with delight

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