Poetry competition CLOSED 21st May 2013 8:49pm
WINNER
lightbaron
lightbaron
RUNNER-UP:
Atakti
An erotic challenge.
ORGASM
SEX-I have missed
that feeling of lust
my weakness bust
i need it i must
go back and do it again
the build up the wait lick me? and plate
wriggling around i move and slide
with exitement im craving this high
the throbbing inside waiting to come
speed me up slow me down
tease me please me i want to com
not just once not just twice
fuck me for life
im desperate and horney
im tingling im begging
dont stop me from getting
the incredibal high
that money cant buy
arising higher and higher the pleaseure the desire
realaesd at last
mmm relax its past
i calm i sit
i can go to bed at last
SEX-I have missed
that feeling of lust
my weakness bust
i need it i must
go back and do it again
the build up the wait lick me? and plate
wriggling around i move and slide
with exitement im craving this high
the throbbing inside waiting to come
speed me up slow me down
tease me please me i want to com
not just once not just twice
fuck me for life
im desperate and horney
im tingling im begging
dont stop me from getting
the incredibal high
that money cant buy
arising higher and higher the pleaseure the desire
realaesd at last
mmm relax its past
i calm i sit
i can go to bed at last
I crawl on my knees to your shrine
Make an offering of pleasure at your altar
I'm not the first to see your Holiness
Just the first to worship at it
the point of a which you reach your threshold
Your choices are two
Get dragged across the floor by your hair
Mopping up the skin of my knees
Teeth scraping then tasting every stair and road I drag down
I mount you from behind fucking you pass my shrine
(The one which you chose to ignore)
People from your village scream from the side's of the streets
you are his cum toilet
Your his cock holster
Your just a floor of a peep show
You will know then that you chose poorly
Or we will both look up to see us bowing to each other
Blissfully dripping
Truly understanding why those words are so typical
'treasure', 'core', 'flower', folds', breath/neck, skin/skin, cock/pussy/balls etc. etc.
Never rolling your eyes ever again
In less in the throws of a moan then you see
The color of the vain's on the side of my cock
are the same as the vain's coursing through your neck
The color is violet
Make an offering of pleasure at your altar
I'm not the first to see your Holiness
Just the first to worship at it
the point of a which you reach your threshold
Your choices are two
Get dragged across the floor by your hair
Mopping up the skin of my knees
Teeth scraping then tasting every stair and road I drag down
I mount you from behind fucking you pass my shrine
(The one which you chose to ignore)
People from your village scream from the side's of the streets
you are his cum toilet
Your his cock holster
Your just a floor of a peep show
You will know then that you chose poorly
Or we will both look up to see us bowing to each other
Blissfully dripping
Truly understanding why those words are so typical
'treasure', 'core', 'flower', folds', breath/neck, skin/skin, cock/pussy/balls etc. etc.
Never rolling your eyes ever again
In less in the throws of a moan then you see
The color of the vain's on the side of my cock
are the same as the vain's coursing through your neck
The color is violet
WET DREAM
u were in my dream last night
I painted your naked body in my tainted sky
I touched you till the clouds dripped with white
my body was aching
my purity was waiting
my sanity was fading
we molded together, gentle strokes, our fluids held us together
scratches down your back, our climax lasted forever
our shadows danced in the moonlight, black magic enchanted through the breeze
sinful pleasures, dark delights
your body quivered
my legs twitched
my body shivered
your arms held me
we longed for affection
we loved the attention
we wanted the comfort
you kissed down my spine griped me by my sides, pulled me to my knees, licked down my thighs
our screams sang a beautiful song
the stars lite up the sky
late night moans harmonized
soothing release lightened the night
day was to approach and you faded away
along went my pleasure
alone went a part of me
I woke up alone wet in my own satisfaction
Anonymous
Innuendo
Can you feel the resonance throb gently
through our subtle intercourse?
Your cadenced innuendo
seduces me with words
as you tacitly evoke emotional
and sensual response
Rhythmic stanzas mount
and liquid phrases flow
as you strip down all my syllables
and metaphor my lines.
You penetrate my verse with
your transfixing, forceful pen,
word play creating images
that surge within in my mind.
Our duet's about to climax
I'll keep up with your outpouring -
tantalizing,
rhyme for rhyme.
Your phrasing courses through me.
and I'm about to overflow
as you cause me to erupt in rhythm
with your epic final note,
"In you... ended in O..."
Can you feel the resonance throb gently
through our subtle intercourse?
Your cadenced innuendo
seduces me with words
as you tacitly evoke emotional
and sensual response
Rhythmic stanzas mount
and liquid phrases flow
as you strip down all my syllables
and metaphor my lines.
You penetrate my verse with
your transfixing, forceful pen,
word play creating images
that surge within in my mind.
Our duet's about to climax
I'll keep up with your outpouring -
tantalizing,
rhyme for rhyme.
Your phrasing courses through me.
and I'm about to overflow
as you cause me to erupt in rhythm
with your epic final note,
"In you... ended in O..."
Stitched
Impulses that thrash
in the chambers of red
have trembled in fear
of what you have said
you reign over me
with those crimson lips
that slender seduction
that drips from your legs
upon my withering self
dominating my senses
you've caged my soul
your attraction belies
about what you desire
knowing you too well
I'll still sear in the fire
your nails drill into my spine
with lust and cruelty so kind
so humble, so sweet i beg
for you to devour me
leave not a morsel behind
I'm lost in your hair
slipping from your back
releasing your garments
my tongue will caress
a slave to your touch
held in your bust
this is how much I love you
your skin be stitched to mine.
Impulses that thrash
in the chambers of red
have trembled in fear
of what you have said
you reign over me
with those crimson lips
that slender seduction
that drips from your legs
upon my withering self
dominating my senses
you've caged my soul
your attraction belies
about what you desire
knowing you too well
I'll still sear in the fire
your nails drill into my spine
with lust and cruelty so kind
so humble, so sweet i beg
for you to devour me
leave not a morsel behind
I'm lost in your hair
slipping from your back
releasing your garments
my tongue will caress
a slave to your touch
held in your bust
this is how much I love you
your skin be stitched to mine.
Every time he looked up....
My libodo comes out,
yes....its an eye to Eye contact,
which made my shower shout.
I shouted in a strange manner,
Go.....I am getting Wet,
He still made me aroused,
To play some dirty Pranks.
Its a strange game of Love,
In which Only Sounds and Thoughts creates sex appeal,
And We both came to know...
that Our Libodo Worked to get a new zeal.
My libodo comes out,
yes....its an eye to Eye contact,
which made my shower shout.
I shouted in a strange manner,
Go.....I am getting Wet,
He still made me aroused,
To play some dirty Pranks.
Its a strange game of Love,
In which Only Sounds and Thoughts creates sex appeal,
And We both came to know...
that Our Libodo Worked to get a new zeal.
wowza! thank you kindly Violet. I got the subtle hint that you didn't want the same old thing, by the constant reposting of your expectations...hahaha
It honestly was a challenge to me, so the recognition feels awesome
A fun comp for me. congrats to the others who stretched the cliché erotica into something else
It honestly was a challenge to me, so the recognition feels awesome
A fun comp for me. congrats to the others who stretched the cliché erotica into something else
Thank you to all who entered (that word makes me giggle like a loony whenever I type it here... I wonder why!)
Lb, Your entry "labor days", was great. To me, it was as honest as I could have hoped for.. and you
were Confident enough to give us that. That confidence- being comfortable enough to tell it straight-
is an attractive quality in a piece of writing (imo) so, LB, thank you and congratypoo!
Aish and Atakti, you both didn't flinch a millimetre and I thank you both for that.
Congrats to you two too!
Lb, Your entry "labor days", was great. To me, it was as honest as I could have hoped for.. and you
were Confident enough to give us that. That confidence- being comfortable enough to tell it straight-
is an attractive quality in a piece of writing (imo) so, LB, thank you and congratypoo!
Aish and Atakti, you both didn't flinch a millimetre and I thank you both for that.
Congrats to you two too!
Anonymous
LB, congratulations!!! Atakti and Aish, congratualtions as well. Great job to all who took up the challenge. Thank you violet for an awesome competition. Happy to be one of the all who entered ; )
