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Salvation

Angeliki
Angela Psyhopoulos
Fire of Insight
Australia 7awards
Joined 1st Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 100

Poetry Contest

If you could describe the most intense salvation ever felt
Hello fellowship

It doesn't have to be lots of words
do it as dramatic as possible
ENjoy it

poet Anonymous

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THE SALVATION OF THE TREES

The redwood trees are being cut down

Attempts to save them have been found

In the forest in Oregon

A little redwood could be found

The little tree wanted to be grand

Was so little he could barely stand

The western winds blew so hard

Shook him so violently he thought he would fall

Mother Earth whispered in his ear

I am on your side my dear

Soon the humans will be washed away

By a tsunami coming this way

There will be water

There will be floods

You will think you will not make it

Time to stand your ground

Do not let the forces overcome

Your determination to live and flourish

You were here before humans came

As you grow it would be a shame

To give up so easily

To the voracious wood cutters of this earth

For do you know

The rapture will come

To get the good, the decent, the virtuous

All the humans who came to save you

Who are only here temporarily

We are all on this earth for a while

Bend with the wind while soaking up the rain

Feel the snow warm you and see the sunshine

Focus on being the best tree of your kind

One day you too will touch the sky.

EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
United States 40awards
Joined 11th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 2483

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EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
United States 40awards
Joined 11th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 2483

Retreat

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Salvation comes knocking at my door
Hastily grabs it as I slip on the floor
A three-day retreat it was
For all my sins to wash

No holds barred telling
Of secrets kept for so long
Total strangers we are
We surrender by far

Killing spree by a fifteen-year old kid
Got the most attention as we all did
For he has borrowed fifteen lives
Just trying to survive

Misty-eyed and emotions overflowing
Tears drop, can't prevent from falling
As if tears can wash away our sins
Feeling goosebumps on our skins

ScreamYourHeartOut
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 16th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 6

life and death are misunderstood you see
life is your captor and death merely wants to set you free...
death wont lie to you, he will give you the answer straight
while life, she'll just play with you... and make you hate.
death is my salvation

Angeliki
Angela Psyhopoulos
Fire of Insight
Australia 7awards
Joined 1st Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 100

Another army citadel this eagle sits upon to glare
At Marshalls correcting the jubilee
Is an Apostasy celebrating proposals?
Absence of security reach an epic.
The academics are all hiding away from the masque.
And one man left to tell his wife a story the
Fortress told so well. Modest. Humble he sowed the path.
She had to walk there, happiness potamic whispering nights.
You could tell it was their turn to celebrate the success of Marxism,
The survivors the grandeur, the only thing left is to forego
A dwell that’s going to be home forever even if so for a little libation.
If thay ever find a home, to jubilate what had begun as an oration.

poet Anonymous

"Not a Vacation"
http://images.askmen.com/fine_living/keywords/vacation_965867.jpg
And,
who cries for
us tortured ones,
temporal-relief
spewed from
thick-ancient-texts,
lies rained
upon the sick.
Swallowing
sweet-covered
bitter-pills
for mindless comfort,
expanding horizons,
one-foot-in-front-of-another-foot.
Walking timeless
circadian
paths of pain,
we fight
the
diminished light
licking
the pavement dry,
hoping for rewards
only we can give.
Breathing deeply,
a common thread
separating
the living
from
the dead.
I awaken to
a hypnotic-tune
nobody hears,
save me.
Not a vacation,
but
so surreal,
so real,
my salvation,
an unearthly
cosmic-vibration.

iam_awake
Strange Creature
Joined 20th Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 1

I went out of my mind, out of body and time
I met a man with no eyes
sitting in rags on the highest
Sand dune in a land who nobody dared name
For it was so cold so desolate no life could maintain
But here was this man.
I walked up to him silent
Hoping his thirst had not driven him to violence
But as I crept up to him I was caught off guard
For what he did next, only made him a god
He lay his hand beside him on the ground
In invitation, surprising and simple yet so profound
We sat there, for what seemed like eternity
Questioning, my thoughts racing,
Until he raised his finger purposefully
Then it hit me like when I first learned of the birds and the bees
Thinking ceased, I felt the sand on my skin, heard a faint breeze,
The dry in the air and aware of my own startled ness
All of the sudden I knew I wanted to be part of this
He turned to me with deep hollow sockets
Blacker than death yet deep and full of life
They pierced my soul and I blew like a rocket
My body took off and yet somehow I remained
He felt my pain and confusion but only nodded his head
I wanted to cry for i thought I was dead
But my tears flowed from the heavens in the form of rain
This man told me I was one with everything yet he never even spoke
I was deeper than ever. Then I awoke


EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
United States 40awards
Joined 11th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 2483


Journey of Faith


I've been soul-searching
Got lost, can't find my way back
Shadow of DEATH lurks
Trying to steal my SOUL

I thirst for KNOWLEDGE
I hunger for the TRUTH
My WISDOM was shrouded
With clouds of DOUBT

Gather around people of FAITH
Let's embark on a new ARK
Sail into the UNKNOWN
And take a  giant LEAP
Into the RIVER of DARKNESS
Until we reach the HEAVENLY GATES

It doesn't matter how we get there
As long as we arrive together as ONE
Leaving the RAINBOW behind us
The SEA of TRANQUILITY awaits
For those who walk
In the VALLEY OF PEACE

With just a ripple of HOPE
We can cross that river
Through the bridge of SALVATION
Weary as we carry our BURDENS
Everlasting PEACE is our reward
For taking the same journey
Leaving nobody behind

poet Anonymous

About a Butterfly II

Thinking as feet hit the pavement, eyes can’t tell if the sky is clear or cloudy
Air floats around, and trees whisper to one another secrets centuries old
A new born flutters, on to my hands that been corrupted by hatred and blood

Wings painted by the sun and nurtured by nature, the butterfly sits with a comfort and ease
Not seeing a monster, but something beautiful as if its own reflection was using its wings as a blanket
The butterfly’s eyes looked up, and the wind started speaking

The tree whispering…

‘If it’s beautiful, it’s beautiful no matter what
Look to the sky,
Whether there’s a storm brewing like the ocean filled with coffee
Or the sun’s warm closing earth off from the freezing abyss of space
It’s beautiful.

Worry not if the sky is clear or cloudy,
But only if your eyes lose sight of the sky.’

Kou_Indigo
Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
Tyrant of Words
United States 69awards
Joined 15th Sep 2011
Forum Posts: 2794

- Ishtar’s Chosen -

Once I rejected thee, not accepting that I am thy Chosen One!
The darkness tried to claim me, and I fought it with such vigor,
And through thee I triumphed, but only through thee so won…
Was the spiritual battle I waged, when unto thee I did thus stir!
I beheld all the vast universes that span the vast gap of eternity,
And all of this that is, hath the gods so lain at thy naked feet.
Ishtar, great and terrible Goddess of the fair sparkling stars,
All the heavenly bodies do bow before thee, all in submission.
Weaver, thou art, of the silk threads of every divine destiny,
Higher than the heavens above is thy great and golden seat!
Mighty is thy gilded voice, the breaker of Death’s iron bars,
Even the god angels must kneel and beg for thy permission.
How thou art loved, oh Goddess, and how thou art also feared,
Pain and pleasure in equal portion are thy weapons and rewards…
By these, how many wanton hearts and souls are daily seared,
By lovely fires hotter and sharper than wicked flaming swords.
Divine Devastatrix thou art, of both human and celestial lands,
The keys of life and death are ever shining, ever light and dark,
Ever shining, ever so brightly, eternally safe within thy keeping…
Giving their incomprehensible powers into thy immortal hands.
Power to render the world unto Hell itself, even barren and stark,
Or by heavenly grace, to end all pain and all sorrowful weeping…
To grow gardens of pure Paradise, from out of hot desert sands!
Thou are lent bejeweled and silvery wings, powered by the Light,
Crafted by the high spirits of wind, of storm, of fire and of frost.
Thou are beloved of all who do walk in the sun, and in the night,
Whether they be blessed or damned, saved or forest in dark lost.
Thou dost fly about, unseen, amongst the cities and the nations…
Blessing the worthy, whilst reducing others to ruin and to blight.
Those gifted by thee, do rise far above their appointed stations,
Rewarded are thy truly righteous ones, far beyond their sight.
Thou art at the service of thy noblest desires and whims alone,
To no other force wilt thou deign to display any humbled will…
Thy spirit is stronger than any world of rock and of solid stone,
Even blood itself must obey thee, even when it doth swift spill!
Oh Lady, called fair, at the sound of thee, of thy blessed voice,
The Earth herself must, in deep obedience to thee, bow down…
She cannot compare to thy grander beauty; where is her choice!
She places yet another perfect stone into thy light coppery crown,
Whilst all the ancient elemental spirits gather around, to rejoice!
When mortals come before thee, let them each bow their head…
Let them come before thee in respectful fear, and in trembling,
For thou art: Ishtar, Inanna, Queen of the Living and the Dead.
Let them get hence, to thy shrines, to every truly sacred place…
Thy statues and idols let them begin, so reverently, assembling,
All to the greater glory of thy sovereign and truly divine grace!
There is truly no goddess who could ever rule in thy holy stead,
None more ideal in nature form, or in radiant and ageless face…
All do receive, from thee, their just and well-deserved portion,
For thou art wise and good, as well as being relentless and cruel!
Thou art terrible as the Leviathan that rises from the First Ocean,
Thou art shining and fair, beyond the glitter of a precious jewel!
The humble ones who devote their lives to thee, even above all,
They weep for thee, tears of joyful worship in thy holy name…
They offer up songs of lamentation, for all who hear not thy call,
They set their hearts to salvation, longing for thy Sacred Flame.
They seek its’ embrace along thy great and blessedly sacred path,
Unto the house of thy glory, unto thy kingdom of eternal bliss!
The wise do seek thy blessings, whilst fools yet incur they wrath,
Whilst, above all, thy Chosen do receive thy pure healing kiss…
It doth cure all, until at last one doth become divine and remade.
As if all praises were not for thee so enough, there is finally this,
Those Chosen that boldly call upon thee need never be afraid.
I came to accept thee, and to accept us as one, for such we are…
Thou most glorious aspect of my higher self, nobly ascendant!
Now I sing thy praises, and I hold very sacred the name Ishtar.
My songs are joyful, for I no longer need to sing a sad lament!

hekate
no
Strange Creature
Joined 10th Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 13

décès

i tried,
they pushed me away,
said i was nothing,
only standing in their way.
soon i found a friend,
death was her name.
she kept me company,
and stopped the pain.
they realized,
they tried,
but it was too late,
by then death and i
became too close to bear.

(k.t)

CWS64
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 14th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 34

I looked into the mirror and saw nothing but the abyss of my drug blown pupils the blackhole of my addiction
 My soul fell uncontrollably into it  
I dove head first into the hidden shadows of my being 
I had nothing to grasp but the darkness surrounding me
I do not believe it had a bottom 
Two options left 
 To continue into this  living death
Or reach up out of it
I am reaching
 God take my hand

synthetic1
Bbbbbbbb
Thought Provoker
United Kingdom 4awards
Joined 4th Oct 2012
Forum Posts: 14

Salvation

Phah! Me thinks not
You cad and bounder
Leave me floundering within the vile raw fish soup
Me thinks you left I unattended beside the pecking coup
I detest thine hollowest of (spines)
Where you claimed we both could rest
Yet my dearest fellow your missing yours
Spineless freak
Ill maybe lend thee mine instead
And if perchance one whimsical day
You decide to stroll back by
Beware my fair weathered invertibrate
I may garrot thine
Meagrely  verdi eyes

So off you trot
Belovedlonglost soul mate
Phah! salvation
Who fell
Grand National sixth high hurdle
Spineless  swine
Mine stomach now doth curdle
I hate your guts
As they are a rare and shallow space
Yet I miss your smile and green green eyes
The dearest of devinest face. Xx

Balefulmalevolence
Thought Provoker
United States 6awards
Joined 6th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 143

"Forever in your debt"

I've been standing
With empty hands
For so long
My eyes are so tired
And my thoughts are so wrong

I cut my wrists
To avert my mind from the pain
This blade was my only friend
When a cleaver mind is in turmoil
It's best to stay away
But you were there

Through my darkness
You stood by my side
And you dragged me to my feet
When I could not stand
My hands won't stop shaking,
so unsteady.
My breathing so faulty
I lost my breath
Maybe that's why
I couldn't scream

Beyond best friends
We are forever brothers
Face down on cement
I will always pick you up
If you need it

I'll never forget
Just like you didn't regret
Helping me
Thank you will never be enough

Hear me now
For i'm screaming again
I'm letting everyone know
Who was there
When they were not
I still tremble
Because I'm still scared

Unbreakable...
As best friends,
Nothing can stop us.



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