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Posted: 9th May 2016 4:09am
dejure
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vick
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So he spoke
And so he fucking spoke
What a miracle ?

Posted: 9th May 2016 5:05am
Grace
Grace
IDryad
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her clock unwinds
waiting for his key to
move her pendulum

Posted: 9th May 2016 7:47pm
poet Anonymous
her hands turned
his mainspring began to tighten
the cuckoo sang

Posted: 12th May 2016 6:53am
Trixareforkids
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Sang your tune
while you played my harp
sweet music abounds

Posted: 12th May 2016 8:54pm
poet Anonymous
tickled your ivories
toes pushed apart your petals
stucatto ran amuck....

Posted: 18th May 2016 8:36am
Trixareforkids
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I can't stop
the withdraw symptoms suck and
you taste fantastic



Posted: 18th May 2016 5:41pm
poet Anonymous
their throttles stuck
the interstate became their bed
finally they merged

Posted: 18th May 2016 7:46pm
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IDryad
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randomly checking out
where the birds fly to
In the treetops

Posted: 18th May 2016 7:55pm
Trixareforkids
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Treetops appear nervous
always shaking and bowing down
yet, they stand

Posted: 19th May 2016 3:41am
poet Anonymous
baby's in treetops?
why would you write that...
what the hell???

Posted: 21st May 2016 8:27pm
Jade-Pandora
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My baby ticks the tock
Makes all the trees roll and rock,
I suck a Tootsie Roll

Posted: 22nd May 2016 8:01pm
berea440oh
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Jade-Pandora said:My baby ticks the tock
Makes all the trees roll and rock,
I suck a Tootsie Roll

I think your piece has too many words in it.

Just saying, of course.

Posted: 22nd May 2016 10:01pm
Edited: 22nd May 2016 10:02pm
Jade-Pandora
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berea440oh said:

I think your piece has too many words in it.

Just saying, of course.

Oh rats, you're right ... I was doing 5/7/5 like a Senryu omg

Thanks for the heads up, I'll think of something ... Sorry.

Posted: 22nd May 2016 10:07pm
Edited: 22nd May 2016 10:08pm
Jade-Pandora
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My baby rocks
I suck at Tootsie Roll
Clock tick tocks

Posted: 22nd May 2016 10:11pm
Trixareforkids
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Candy rolled up
wearing nothing but a grin
What a treat

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