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Posted: 30th December 2012 1:37pm
Edited: 30th December 2012 1:53pm
_MMXIII
_MMXIII
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Poetry Contest

What can you say in 11 words?
This competition is to simply write a 3-5-3 poem about whatever you want.
I was up early this morning and wrote a few, so, I want to see how others will write their own.

Examples of My own:

Who are you?
A Breath of Fresh Air.
Inhale! Inhale, Dear.

Curiosity killed me,
There was never any cat!
Hell? It's alright.


Have fun

Posted: 30th December 2012 1:47pm
opheliac
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Brilliant idea! here's my entry.

Anamnesis. ( a poem written a while back)

Sleep sweet longing,
I shall tuck you pleasantly,
in your deathbed.  

Posted: 30th December 2012 2:00pm
Edited: 30th December 2012 2:08pm
DystopianMelody
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Trusting in me
Will always cost you coins
Minted in pain

So move along
Don't drop your anchor here
Incase you sink


(So..... This is more depressing than I thought it would be :s)

Posted: 30th December 2012 4:25pm
Whitewand6
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yeh uoy..


i love you
i love you so much
i really do

Posted: 30th December 2012 4:33pm
lightbaron
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i'm as good
as the day can afford
slight subtle infinite

Posted: 30th December 2012 4:54pm
opheliac
opheliac
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lightbaron said:i'm as good
as the day can afford
slight subtle infinite

Do me a favour will you? Submit this on your profile so i can add it to my reading list. Thank you!

Posted: 30th December 2012 5:12pm
Edited: 30th December 2012 5:18pm
Devilish
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   Raw by nature
a hard routine to follow
 swallow me whole

Posted: 30th December 2012 5:35pm
Edited: 30th December 2012 5:42pm
johnrot
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me and you
until the day we're not
are jus fine


or just maybe
we were never doin ok
to begin with

Posted: 30th December 2012 5:44pm
twistedgirl
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loving you, my
beloved, is all i ever
really, truly wanted.

touching your smooth
skin; laying beside you to
breath you in.

don't get me
confused; sex is nice but
i'm too abused.

just let me
lay beside you beloved; no
price to pay.

i love you;
i will love you even
when i die.

Posted: 30th December 2012 5:59pm
poet Anonymous
I am consumed
by scorched memories of you.

You were God.

Posted: 30th December 2012 7:00pm
Devilish
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Miss_Sub said:I am consumed
by scorched memories of you.

You were God.

WOW! damnnnn woman. beautifully chilling.

Posted: 30th December 2012 7:04pm
TheQuiet
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Fill me up
pour lust in my cup
Drink it now

Posted: 30th December 2012 7:08pm
poet Anonymous
False painted smile
No one can find you,
So you think.


Posted: 30th December 2012 9:03pm
JohnnyDepth
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All night long
I heard him cry out
For the win

Posted: 30th December 2012 9:07pm
JohnnyDepth
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Tasers work well
Electrodes i find more pleasurable
In certain areas

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