Go to page:

Challenge : what can you do with 20 words?

Posted: 1st September 2014 3:28pm
case28
case28
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42awards
Joined 16th June 2013
Forum Posts: 2077
people don't appreciate silence
of an empty room
sounds of the ocean
an approaching plane
or a car speeding away

Posted: 1st September 2014 3:40pm
Grace
Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 16181
People are never satisfied
with anything given to them
or any achievements reached
they want more and everything
else

Posted: 1st September 2014 3:48pm
case28
case28
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42awards
Joined 16th June 2013
Forum Posts: 2077
Some want more than friendship
more than time of day
and sleepless nights
some want control
and won't let go

Posted: 1st September 2014 4:05pm
Grace
Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 16181
Obsessive compulsive and needing
to possess being there clingy
always wanting to be reassured
now that sounded eerily like me

Posted: 2nd September 2014 4:30pm
souladareatease
souladareatease
Tyrant of Words
United States 29awards
Joined 28th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 5085
Possessed
Seven churches
my first introduction
to Larry Lalonde
before
Primus
he was metal through and through
glad he progressed

Posted: 2nd September 2014 5:02pm
Grace
Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 16181
Possessed that's scary
walking around like a zombie
controlled like toy cars
zooming around in concrete parks
waiting to crash

Posted: 2nd September 2014 6:42pm
souladareatease
souladareatease
Tyrant of Words
United States 29awards
Joined 28th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 5085
Again
You bring me to think
of albums
long since forgot
these same folks
were hit after hit
oh sigh

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B_Ll0As4FPI

Posted: 2nd September 2014 11:16pm
Grace
Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 16181
there are messages
contained in all the songs
Fair to beauty, balance to sigh
none love and not be cut

Posted: 2nd September 2014 11:26pm
lepperochan
lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
Palestine 67awards
Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 14456
a message bottled up
and flung to the ocean
it's writer
beaten to death by society
before it passed midway  

Posted: 2nd September 2014 11:29pm
Magdalena
Magdalena
Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
Wales 62awards
Joined 21st Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 2993
I kinda felt desolate
in the face of
"what comes next"
questioning my
human being status
wishing for something else.

Posted: 3rd September 2014 1:54am
Grace
Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 16181
I wonder how they feel
slaughtering humans
could well be distant kins
how far down have they
fallen...

Posted: 3rd September 2014 3:44pm
rmglover
rmglover
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 12th Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 2
Challenge
They challenge
Am human?
Am bastard,
Procrasted

Remember the time
Baste over brine
Soaked in surf, see
Salt's combined

Posted: 3rd September 2014 9:53pm
lepperochan
lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
Palestine 67awards
Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 14456
there's no more need for hiding
I stopped searching out your name
a couple of hours ago
then breathed air

Posted: 3rd September 2014 10:29pm
souladareatease
souladareatease
Tyrant of Words
United States 29awards
Joined 28th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 5085
Cracked pots and cobwebs
keep me
huddled in corners
telling myself
my nose knows
to deadbolt doors.
then...
freedom calls.

Posted: 4th September 2014 11:07am
Grace
Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 16181
Huddled in pain
hoping for gain
donating organs
to those in need
I only need the basics

Go to page:
Go to: