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Challenge : what can you do with 20 words?

Posted: 6th April 2014 7:18am
7th_son
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Another rewrite..
An empire born..
Bricks were made..
boldest of stokes..
Motor was laid..
My pen bleed..
Morton now set..

Posted: 9th April 2014 7:27pm
Grace
Grace
IDryad
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She feels the silence
stirred by the absence
of a usual presence...
nothing is gain
by indifference
but hurt

Posted: 9th April 2014 9:04pm
EngrVV
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Your silence fills the room
with empty spaces cold as ice
Ears are about to explode
and gasping for air...


Posted: 9th April 2014 9:19pm
summultima
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uma
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that red hibiscus
bled in greys
seemed
to attain immense
silence of the hearts
as it flew away happily
mind-crushed

Posted: 9th April 2014 10:03pm
lepperochan
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Stop the bus
I've arrived at my conclusion
you may keep the change
apparently, you'll need it a lot more

Posted: 10th April 2014 5:24am
LunaObscura
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lepperochan said:Stop the bus
I've arrived at my conclusion
you may keep the change
apparently, you'll need it a lot more


Nice^

There's a place I like to go
Two stops past 'where it's at'
... Long walk to nowhere, save the fare

Posted: 13th April 2014 8:14pm
souladareatease
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Etched in rolled up hills
plants there
perfect sod
daffodil
shimmering under sun sighed ambiance
breaking a long cold grip  


Posted: 13th April 2014 10:06pm
Magdalena
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Sometimes
there is not enough air
in the dough
for it to rise
and it suffocates
she chokes
silence leers

Posted: 15th April 2014 3:46pm
7th_son
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her actions voicing fears..as silence leers..
unwritten in tears.. and masked by veneers..
lying soft spoken hides this shy sonneteer..

Posted: 16th April 2014 4:56am
lepperochan
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the slope was greased
far too slippery
so there's no surety
of making the climb
even with thick knotted rope

Posted: 16th April 2014 11:31am
7th_son
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a thick knotted rope..
hung from an old oak..
pulled tight i did choke..
swung a bit, but it broke..

Posted: 16th April 2014 3:37pm
EngrVV
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hanging painfully until last breath
body drops from the gallows
another one bites the dust…
to cheers of forgotten souls.

Posted: 16th April 2014 4:54pm
Edited: 16th April 2014 4:55pm
poet Anonymous
Their souls were erased
while their bodies defaced
Are our morals displaced
When death is embraced?
This world is disgraced.

Posted: 16th April 2014 6:56pm
7th_son
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why is this world.. forever being disgraced..
toxicity unfurled.. with the utmost of haste..
markers whorled.. mankind's will to waste..

Posted: 16th April 2014 7:20pm
poet Anonymous
The waste of mankind......?
Now that thought I should erase
Our morality yet defined
Or the darkness should we embrace?

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