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trysca said:
@viddax - no the rhymes work well, but it made me feel that you are somehow trapped there forever, thats just what you meant - i can sense the blandness of those "small gardens of concise grass"...

@priya - look forward to your entry - to be honest it was your poems that inspired me to set the comp - each one is like a mini holiday!

@ Jamie - nice piece of commentary from; a journey from house to home ...?

@ Earthly can sense a touch of despair at the uncontrollable chaos of the city - it shares something with Jamie's perspective.(ps desert has just one 's'!)

Thanks for your entries - these are great work!

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