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opheliac

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Re: Heartache
Posted on: 02/10/10 at 13:40:54 CST

i did it once and as usual i didn't have the response i would like...
aghhh it sucked! and from that moment i sweared i would never open my heart out to anyone.. i don't know if that's a good thing or not..
but i won't risk the chance of breaking my heart again!

this above all to your own self be true - William Shakespeare

Jack Heslop
(Heslopian)

Dangerous Mind

Member Since: 08/30/09
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Re: Heartache
Posted on: 02/10/10 at 13:51:29 CST

Then look for someone whose also had their heart broken, and try to piece a whole one together from the remains. That's what true love is, surely...

I would face him, and say simply: I am sad that you are not strong, and do not swim and sail and ski, but you have a strong soul, and I will believe in you and make you invincible on this Earth.

David.S
(Viddax)

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Re: Heartache
Posted on: 02/10/10 at 14:08:23 CST

Jack Heslop said:
Then look for someone whose also had their heart broken, and try to piece a whole one together from the remains. That's what true love is, surely...

If you lose a heart then find another and forge anew the broken bond to birth something greater than the sum of the parts. Or, live with half a heart in all its unstable blessing curse.

Stay unstable it makes life interesting, it gets you through after you've loved and lost.

Louis Lee Warner
(Donchonorgo)

Twisted Dreamer

Member Since: 01/06/10
Forum Posts: 100

Re: Heartache
Posted on: 02/10/10 at 14:39:11 CST

Jack Heslop said:
Then look for someone whose also had their heart broken, and try to piece a whole one together from the remains. That's what true love is, surely...

The reversed five of Pentacles would argue otherwise. xxx Hehe. x

Disposition changes perception.

SJ
(Disregardme)

Twisted Dreamer

Member Since: 09/30/09
Forum Posts: 40

Re: Heartache
Posted on: 02/10/10 at 20:38:49 CST

Viddax said:
Your tale is pure trajedy to my ears SJ, what will you do now if you don't mind me asking?
Liking the poem Abracadabra, it captures the feeling perfectly.
Love can be desire, but that desire needs to be spiritualized not discarded for its connotations to the body.

Well it took me 6 years to tell him how I felt. I am so glad I did, especially knowing now that I would never get another chance. I made a promise to him and myself that I would use my pain and heartache. I am writing everyday for a year and planning on getting those poems published. He has affected my life more than I realized. I am working on using everything that I have learned from him about love and working on bettering myself.

My real message to everyone who is too scared is this: Don't let fright keep you from doing what you need to. Don't count on tomorrow. Tomorrow is never guarranteed.

We love to love not expecting to be loved in return.

I live in between the raindrops. Untouched by mortal eyes. Invisible in the most ordinary way.

David.S
(Viddax)

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Re: Heartache
Posted on: 02/11/10 at 10:47:12 CST

There is something to be said for Unrequited Love, it has possibilities in its unknown. I gave mine away too soon for fear of losing her. Yet it seems that whenever i rebuild my heart she asks me how I feel about her and my heart collapses all over again like a tragic jenga tower.

Stay unstable it makes life interesting, it gets you through after you've loved and lost.

David.S
(Viddax)

Thought Provoker

Member Since: 10/10/09
Forum Posts: 499

Re: Heartache
Posted on: 02/11/10 at 10:48:42 CST

Oh yes, thank you for your response SJ, it is much appreaciated. Its just a pain that some things we only learn when its gone or through pain, isn't it?

Stay unstable it makes life interesting, it gets you through after you've loved and lost.

Louis Lee Warner
(Donchonorgo)

Twisted Dreamer

Member Since: 01/06/10
Forum Posts: 100

Re: Heartache
Posted on: 02/11/10 at 11:59:22 CST

I didn't realise the irony of quoting Streetcar there. =/ -feels like a dick.-

Disposition changes perception.

opheliac

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Forum Posts: 377

Re: Heartache
Posted on: 02/15/10 at 10:04:13 CST

SJ said:
Viddax said:[/b

We love to love not expecting to be loved in return.

yes i agree completely with you but wouldn't be nicer of the one you loved, loved you back?!
it's so tormenting to watch someone you love with another person...

this above all to your own self be true - William Shakespeare

SJ
(Disregardme)

Twisted Dreamer

Member Since: 09/30/09
Forum Posts: 40

Re: Heartache
Posted on: 02/15/10 at 11:14:56 CST

opheliac said:
SJ said:
[quoted=chat--161-0-13]Viddax said:[/b

We love to love not expecting to be loved in return.

yes i agree completely with you but wouldn't be nicer of the one you loved, loved you back?!
it's so tormenting to watch someone you love with another person...

Before my friend died I was working through and trying to accept that though he knew how much I loved him, he simply did not want to be with me. I tore me in two every single moment of every day. If I remember correctly about 2 months before he died I realized that evey if I never saw him again, it would not change how I felt. I still loved him. I still wanted nothing but for him to be happy. And if my absense made him happy, then that would be what I would do for him. It hurt for my sake because I know I could have been so much happier lying next to him, rather than alone. We have to love others enough to want what they want even if it is not us. Being apart did not diminish my love.

The greatest gift we could bestow upon another is freedom. Especially the freedom to go wherever the wind may take them, but to still stay by our side.

Even though I never saw Tommy again, he eventually came back to me. How would things have turned out if he had the opportunity to continue his live? I don't know and wouldn't consider it. His life was his own and he could only love me the way he knew how, from The Other Side. I don't love him any less for his choice to leave. In the face of his absense, I choose to love him more than I could while he was around.

I live in between the raindrops. Untouched by mortal eyes. Invisible in the most ordinary way.

Arryn

Twisted Dreamer

Member Since: 11/18/09
Forum Posts: 47

Re: Heartache
Posted on: 03/04/10 at 08:12:20 CST

Life without love and risk is really not that fun to live, at least not in my opinion. I've been heartbroken before, but decided not to sulk and to move on. But then, I'm terrified of being alone, so maybe me giving my heart away is a hope of it sticking to someone else's. Who knows?

I don't know how much I can take, the secret thoughts inside me wake. I've lost what was within me; Oh sweet insanity. ♫♪

David.S
(Viddax)

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Forum Posts: 499

Re: Heartache
Posted on: 03/04/10 at 16:51:38 CST

There seems to be in some of us this inescapable desire to be with someone, to not be alone. Even if love is reciprocated, it is not enough justification to give up that love. It is beyond "love's price is love", love just because you do. Maybe a higher being, or the world will love you, and maybe you'll then love yourself.
I thank you all for your comments. In this age of reason and the physical, of cold fact rather than romantic spiritual beliefs, it is nice to cling to arcane beliefs in face of reason. There is just something so utterly amazing about that.
I'm done romantically rambling for now, blame the rant on philosophy.

Stay unstable it makes life interesting, it gets you through after you've loved and lost.

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