Story Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about Dreams, Fantasy and Fiction
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Enheduanna
#love
#historical
#passion
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On the set...Take Two!!
#dialogue
#porn
#sex
#ShortStory
#uplifting
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The Lady Blue (Torn Between Two Lovers)
I believed Gary when he said we were through so when he showed up at a party Joe and I threw, I was shocked to see him. Not only was he there but he had come alone. I couldn't stop thinking about him and all of the good times we had shared.
Towards the end of the evening, he followed me into the kitchen as I went to get a drink of water from the faucet. I had just set the empty glass in the sink and was turning around when he cornered me in front of the refrigerator.
"You look absolutely stunning," he said pushing me gently against the refrigerator....
Towards the end of the evening, he followed me into the kitchen as I went to get a drink of water from the faucet. I had just set the empty glass in the sink and was turning around when he cornered me in front of the refrigerator.
"You look absolutely stunning," he said pushing me gently against the refrigerator....
#conflict
#FeelingLost
#lover #sex
#lover #sex
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An Open Door
There is nothing accidental
upon the road to dimensions of your destiny.
Within connecting energies
there is extraordinary electricity.
Encounters with certain random people
are an expansive open door.
A soul laser invitation to know the more.
The granting of dangling dreams
you've achingly yearned and adored.
Enlightened entry through your
seizing turquoise and navy swirled
sweet daggering eyes.
Do I really want to know
the revelation of my demise?
It will no longer matter,
in your rapturous realm divine.
upon the road to dimensions of your destiny.
Within connecting energies
there is extraordinary electricity.
Encounters with certain random people
are an expansive open door.
A soul laser invitation to know the more.
The granting of dangling dreams
you've achingly yearned and adored.
Enlightened entry through your
seizing turquoise and navy swirled
sweet daggering eyes.
Do I really want to know
the revelation of my demise?
It will no longer matter,
in your rapturous realm divine.
#universe
#spiritual
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CAPTURED BY THE SIRENS
I had been warned
and knew better as
I swam toward the reefs
where the alluring Sirens
waited to lure and seduce
voyagers venturing on
the sea of life in search
of adventure and pleasure.
I knew well the myth of
Orpheus and Eurydice but
the alluring lyre music and
beauty of the Sirens prohibited
me from saying no. I am
honored and thankful for
YOU,
sweet Siren of the sea of lust.
YES!
You know who you are.
and knew better as
I swam toward the reefs
where the alluring Sirens
waited to lure and seduce
voyagers venturing on
the sea of life in search
of adventure and pleasure.
I knew well the myth of
Orpheus and Eurydice but
the alluring lyre music and
beauty of the Sirens prohibited
me from saying no. I am
honored and thankful for
YOU,
sweet Siren of the sea of lust.
YES!
You know who you are.
#happiness
#love
#gratitude
#admiration
#emotions
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stormy
sunlit cobwebs in a room at noon
the day cast odd shadows on my dreams
my mind was quiet but moody
the day stretched and uttered be lazy with me
I slouched in my chair but the restlessness in my thoughts wouldn't silence
there were no direct answers to the questions I pose the day
madness storm in the background brewing as the usual suspect
I wondered where she came from and where she went after she departed
deep within me I imagined
I've been trying to find comfort in the afterlife
and I pondered when my soul popped out of my body...
the day cast odd shadows on my dreams
my mind was quiet but moody
the day stretched and uttered be lazy with me
I slouched in my chair but the restlessness in my thoughts wouldn't silence
there were no direct answers to the questions I pose the day
madness storm in the background brewing as the usual suspect
I wondered where she came from and where she went after she departed
deep within me I imagined
I've been trying to find comfort in the afterlife
and I pondered when my soul popped out of my body...
#dreams
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Dragon Slayed
#funny
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X44C Technology borne from Real Art, Paint, Ideas
I developed X44C Technology
Created it in my personal think tank
Taking a real painting
Micromanagement color structure
Enhanced reduced calculated
In reality
All you need is one painting
Like buying shares in a utility stock
Say 1000 shares were purchased for you at birth
Reinvest the dividends
Banging the high quality women at 31
Living off the coast of Monaco
But the irony is, she's not a woman
It's robotic twang, test tube sex, no fault kink
Pretty good, right ?
The raspberries are good right now... ...
Created it in my personal think tank
Taking a real painting
Micromanagement color structure
Enhanced reduced calculated
In reality
All you need is one painting
Like buying shares in a utility stock
Say 1000 shares were purchased for you at birth
Reinvest the dividends
Banging the high quality women at 31
Living off the coast of Monaco
But the irony is, she's not a woman
It's robotic twang, test tube sex, no fault kink
Pretty good, right ?
The raspberries are good right now... ...
#sex
#technology
#art
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I SAW HER RIDE (LADY GODIVA BY PEEPING TOM)
I saw her ride,
legs to one side,
nothing to hide
amid the street,
while the discreet
let not eyes meet.
Her long thick hair
covered her, bare,
to derriere.
She sat upright
in the dim light
as day met night.
No more I saw -
my eyes went sore
sight did withdraw.
I'd been struck blind,
things could not find.
Guilt seared my mind.
legs to one side,
nothing to hide
amid the street,
while the discreet
let not eyes meet.
Her long thick hair
covered her, bare,
to derriere.
She sat upright
in the dim light
as day met night.
No more I saw -
my eyes went sore
sight did withdraw.
I'd been struck blind,
things could not find.
Guilt seared my mind.
#rhyming
#tradition
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Cosmic rays of rain
In cosmic rays of rain
My soul flies
Vibrations of conscience
Into distant lands of times aeoned rain
I need no reasons why,
Lord; he’s a never a dying,
Into the end
Where there’s heavy dark
And nothings left massed
Into the whole, swirling black and dense
Till it collapse, turned into a gravitational white whole
The single brightest and most powerful event
Imploding it is there I begin again
With only the previous memories of what came before
And, in multiple singular...
My soul flies
Vibrations of conscience
Into distant lands of times aeoned rain
I need no reasons why,
Lord; he’s a never a dying,
Into the end
Where there’s heavy dark
And nothings left massed
Into the whole, swirling black and dense
Till it collapse, turned into a gravitational white whole
The single brightest and most powerful event
Imploding it is there I begin again
With only the previous memories of what came before
And, in multiple singular...
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A PARADISE DREAM
In this world consumed by sweet desire,
Where deep cravings burn like a wildfire,
I yearn for our moments shared so divine,
To feel our ecstasy, oh, I hunger and pine.
Not to be judged by words or their sting,
But only within the pleasure that they bring,
I have dreams of being hungrily devoured,
By your sweet love, I feel so empowered.
My aching soul oh how it longs to be filled,
Your passionate touch, so thrilling and skilled,
Stretches my limits, my senses you tease,
...
Where deep cravings burn like a wildfire,
I yearn for our moments shared so divine,
To feel our ecstasy, oh, I hunger and pine.
Not to be judged by words or their sting,
But only within the pleasure that they bring,
I have dreams of being hungrily devoured,
By your sweet love, I feel so empowered.
My aching soul oh how it longs to be filled,
Your passionate touch, so thrilling and skilled,
Stretches my limits, my senses you tease,
...
#happiness
#love
#sensual #passion
#sensual #passion
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Cry of a Palestinian Child
In the midst of despair, a poem emerges,
A lament for the Palestinian child,
Whose cry resounds through streets of ruin,
A piercing plea that knows no bounds.
Tears flow from innocent eyes,
Bearing witness to a reality so harsh,
Where dreams are shattered like broken homes,
And hope is a fragile ember in the dark.
From the ashes of destruction, a voice rises,
A primal scream against the oppressor's might,
Longing for a mother's embrace, a sanctuary,
Yearning for a future free from endless strife.
Occupation's...
A lament for the Palestinian child,
Whose cry resounds through streets of ruin,
A piercing plea that knows no bounds.
Tears flow from innocent eyes,
Bearing witness to a reality so harsh,
Where dreams are shattered like broken homes,
And hope is a fragile ember in the dark.
From the ashes of destruction, a voice rises,
A primal scream against the oppressor's might,
Longing for a mother's embrace, a sanctuary,
Yearning for a future free from endless strife.
Occupation's...
#anger
#grief
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DU Poetry : Story Poems by Top Critiquers about Dreams, Fantasy and Fiction