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Erotica and sex poetry
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Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Today 11:24pm
Today 11:24pm
Wishful writes
#dreams
#love
#WritingPoetry
4 reads
0 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
Today 10:11pm
Today 10:11pm
BY INVITATION ONLY
We're only able to hear our voices
within waking hours & dreams
beackoning, softly whispering
behind a veil that's far beyond
unconscious & consciousness
or so that is what it all seems
It continues to entrincincally stir
the core of our being, our soul
left behind a neverending ache
and also ravenous thirst & hunger
any & all the pieces of you & me
that make us a complete whole
For your body as well as mine
were meant to be draped together
in our...
within waking hours & dreams
beackoning, softly whispering
behind a veil that's far beyond
unconscious & consciousness
or so that is what it all seems
It continues to entrincincally stir
the core of our being, our soul
left behind a neverending ache
and also ravenous thirst & hunger
any & all the pieces of you & me
that make us a complete whole
For your body as well as mine
were meant to be draped together
in our...
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#passion
#seductive
26 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
Today 9:22pm
Today 9:22pm
Night Prayer
#dirty
#erotic
#sex
20 reads
7 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Today 8:12pm
Today 8:12pm
HOLIDAY LIAISON (NOT AUTOBIOGRAPHICAL)
#holiday
#rhyming
#sex
11 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Today 7:57pm
Today 7:57pm
After Their Moment Of Sleeping Together
Rebecca
looked and smiled at Clayton
still sleeping naked underneath his
also nude roommate before she got out of bed
and into the bathroom to shower
herself clean and ready
for her job.
looked and smiled at Clayton
still sleeping naked underneath his
also nude roommate before she got out of bed
and into the bathroom to shower
herself clean and ready
for her job.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#lover
#sensual
30 reads
0 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
Today 3:45pm
Today 3:45pm
Chapter 14 Conversation
Chapter 14 Conversation
Brittney had never been to the place David suggested they meet. As she entered, her eyes adjusted to the dim light and she scanned the room for a familiar face. In the corner, David stood and waved. He walked to her and kissed her cheek before leading her back to the table. She sat nervously across from David.
“What would you like, Brittney?”
She smiled thinking of an alternative meaning she heard in his voice. “I’ll just have red wine.”
David stepped to the bar. Brittney sat alone tapping her fingernails on the oak table...
Brittney had never been to the place David suggested they meet. As she entered, her eyes adjusted to the dim light and she scanned the room for a familiar face. In the corner, David stood and waved. He walked to her and kissed her cheek before leading her back to the table. She sat nervously across from David.
“What would you like, Brittney?”
She smiled thinking of an alternative meaning she heard in his voice. “I’ll just have red wine.”
David stepped to the bar. Brittney sat alone tapping her fingernails on the oak table...
#betrayal
#honesty
#sex
27 reads
0 Comments
The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
Today 12:57pm
Today 12:57pm
Ecstasy feels right
#erotic
#lust
#sex
52 reads
5 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
Today 12:50pm
Today 12:50pm
I Long for You
#love
#lust
#sex
49 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Today 6:59am
Today 6:59am
THE END OF ONAN
He spilled his seed
doing the deed,
not let if flow
where it should go -
into the wife
he took for life
and make a heir
for late brother.
He was struck dead!
(While still in bed?)
doing the deed,
not let if flow
where it should go -
into the wife
he took for life
and make a heir
for late brother.
He was struck dead!
(While still in bed?)
#death
#rhyming
#sex
40 reads
0 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
Today 6:01am
Today 6:01am
LET US
Let us
explore
every facet of our beings
with our tongues
as it dances
across our skin
that tastes
like the ambrosia
we've delighted in.
Let us
suck
the lifeblood that drips
from between our legs
as our fingers dance
across our skin
and thinly caresses
as we explore
every facet of our
imaginations
together as one
beneath the stars.
explore
every facet of our beings
with our tongues
as it dances
across our skin
that tastes
like the ambrosia
we've delighted in.
Let us
suck
the lifeblood that drips
from between our legs
as our fingers dance
across our skin
and thinly caresses
as we explore
every facet of our
imaginations
together as one
beneath the stars.
#lover
#lust
#passion
#seductive
#temptation
95 reads
12 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
Today 4:12am
Today 4:12am
f**kED and SATED
Sated and fucked, both our bodies are fully spent
Filled with pleasure and cum, our hearts content
Finally we passionately kiss, we both get to taste
As you and I lock ourselves in a sweet embrace.
Cleaning each other, our tongues both explore
Your hard cock, my hard clit, we love and adore
Tasting your delicious cum, mingled with mine
Breathing is heavy, but feeling so very sublime.
Sighs of contentment permiate through the air
As we take each other in with tender loving care
Licking, kissing,...
Filled with pleasure and cum, our hearts content
Finally we passionately kiss, we both get to taste
As you and I lock ourselves in a sweet embrace.
Cleaning each other, our tongues both explore
Your hard cock, my hard clit, we love and adore
Tasting your delicious cum, mingled with mine
Breathing is heavy, but feeling so very sublime.
Sighs of contentment permiate through the air
As we take each other in with tender loving care
Licking, kissing,...
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#orgasm
#passion
85 reads
6 Comments
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